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magss24

@magss24

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#561

superb update... good going khushi... just love this girl... the last part was so sad once again he has broken her heart... waiting for the next update...

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@blueangel1308

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#562

Despite everything, I don't think he is really listening to what Khushi is saying. She feels hurt and regret over how they married and the main reason behind that was Anjali. Him choosing Anjali in this instance, again, just shows that he is not deserving of her yet.

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tina_1234

@tina_1234

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#563

updt soon..waitin for next part!!

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nyxx

@nyxx

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#564

Eeekkzz First one!! 😃

That was marvelous Munchy!

Though when I read Khushi packing her suitcase willy nilly, I thought we were heading towards another volcanic eruption, leading to another seperation. But glad, you proceeded the story in a different way, and with Arnav explaining and assuring the reasons of his marriage with Khushi, and also, sort of confronting as well as comforting her that all he really wants is her to be with him. I thorougly enjoyed reading the ArHi scene, its like I could feel heat, the turmoil, the agony each were going through, and also not to forget, the need to be with each other forgetting the past. LOVEDDD ITT!!! <3 The lines, dialogues were superbly written, and I loved how you brought in the sense of humour in the middle as well when Arnav casually asked her if "they" were going somewhere😆 and after that, the mood suddenly changed after Khushi questioning him about who he would chose between her and Anjali. Though I know that its still going to be a while till things get all fairytale perfect between them, but this surely seems a good start. And Im also really glad that Arnav pointed that he could never chose between Anjali and Khushi, just like you said, one is his mother, and the other is reason of his being...kinda like oxygen and water. Everything was just superb, a perfect read. Also, not too forget, I also liked the brother-sister scene in the beginning, you dont get to see much of that in the show these days, so I surely loved reading it here, brought back good memories.

Wonderful part as alwaysss!!!

By far, this is one of the best FF's im reading as of now!

Continue soon!!

- Dee

Edited by nyxx - 13 years ago

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keenu_kk

@keenu_kk

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#565

lovely part dear

truly adorable dear

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slgirl

@slgirl

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#566

uhmm..I don't know..I have mixed feeling about this update..Arnav shouldn't have chosen Anjali over Kushi..yes its not Anjali's fault..Kushi is fragile right now..shouldn't he have said Kushi is important and done the explanations to Anjali later like he did for Kushi?! 😕

somehow I am unable to forgive Arnav easily..for all the trouble she has been through...

nevertheless..its a fab update...

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Jignasha

@pal89711

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#567

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speechless!! when i read the last update and the way khushi reacted, I felt that she would again leave Arnav and not give a chance for him to explain himself, but with this update you totally surprised me. I really liked the way anjali made arnav understand in her own way...and the way arnav camly made khushi realize how important she is to him and that he wouldn't be able to choose between his sister who he looks upto as a mother and Khushi who he loves unconditionally...the way khushi listened to him was just beyond words...i am happy that she let him talked without yelling screaming or just walking out... :D😊😊😊😊

I absolutely just loved this update...thanks for the pm ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#568

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🤢 I officially declare that I'm no longer your Shyamu!!

Anyways, it was a fab, fab, FAB update, Munchy!! 👏 👏 👏

Anjali finally sees the world like normal human beings are supposed to see!! 😆
I guess it was always there, but she chose to ignore it. . . . (Like she said!) 😳

Loved how Arnav made Khushi understand what he felt for the two most important women in his life. . .

Thanks for the PM, Munchy!! 😃

Edited by -_-harsh42 - 13 years ago

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Divya

@dbr_kmichi

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#569

wonderful update..liked the way he said to khushi that he never chose anjali over her

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#570

*riding on emotions after reading this... Will be back with a proper comment...

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Well, I really don't need to say this to you, but I would still do it - I L.O.V.E.D. it... Thank you for putting some brains in Anjali's unnaturally dumb character... Thank you for making Arnav realize what his marriage with Khushi meant to her... Thank you for making him appreciate her tender age and all the sufferings she had to undergo for nothing... Thank you for making Khushi speak up, yell at Anjali and not cry silently in the bathroom like a coward... And thank you for not making Khushi go all cold like before...

You treated every character with the respect they deserve... Brilliant piece of work!

Thanks for the PM... Continue soon... Waiting...

Edited by Pearl_mystic - 13 years ago