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bhavnah

@bhavnah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#471

i loved the update...the banners are awesome fnx 4 z pm

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soni4eva

@soni4eva

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Posted: 13 years ago

#472

awsum update

khushi gets soo jelous lol

plzz cont soon fanx 4 da pm x

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mandira1

@mandira1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#473

Wonderful update!!

Thanks for the PM!

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Saniya

@saniya.x

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Posted: 13 years ago

#474

The update contained jealousy, anger, guilt, love & you've shown those emotions perfectly throughout the whole update! & ohh yeaah, that slap was definately needed & the love making session was damn passionate!

I can't wait to read the next update, I would want to see how Khushi's going react to it! Pleasee update sooon. I really can't wait! :)

You're doing a fab job!<3

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@invalid

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Posted: 13 years ago

#475

This is such a beautiful FF, loved each and every update, sorry I have only commented once before. Your work is beautiful, you are such a good writer, how on earth do you do it?

Amazing part x

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..Damsel..

@..Damsel..

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#476

wow...

the forum has many fabulous writers and you are one of them...I absolutely love your work...

this update was fantastic...I'm so glad, the old Khushi is returning...the dialogues and the emotions were perfect...I loved to the core...

waiting for the next part...

thanks for the pm hun

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Sunara

@princessunara

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Posted: 13 years ago

#477

wow..that was quite something! wow...
well this time hmm i don't feel let down cz Khushi gave in..cz this was just perfect..perfect in every sense of it...wow..

loved it!!
do update soon!!

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489321

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Posted: 13 years ago

#478

This is absolutely beautiful! I loved it! I especially liked that she slapped him ;) :P

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sharme

@sparklystarstud

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#479

MUNCHYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!

u kept it real dr...
u made justice to both ARNAV n KUSHI...

though i felt bad for lavanya...

that was a well deserved SLAP for him...seriously...

bt atalst...arnav got HIS kushi back finally...

im sooo happy for them...

nw everything's gonna be fine between them nah...pls say so...

pretty pls...

loved the update...amazing roll of emotions...especially kushi's...

from worry to lost hope to jealousy to panick to anger to sorrow to hope to happiness and finally to a promise of new beginning

and this time im sure that she knows arnav wont let her down anymore...

beautiful ending to the update...

When the light became so bright that it invaded her pupils under her eyelids she fluttered them open, her fingers fanned in front of her to block out some of the brilliance. He stood at the base of the staircase staring at her. Her hands fell to her sides defeated as she looked in to his eyes. Those eyes that always held scorn and contempt. Today they held a promise.

He bent down and started picking the broken pieces of her up*

loved these words...

the role reversal was awesome...nw kushi being more ASR n arnav being more KUSHI...

BTW all's well that ends well nah!!!!!!!!

~tons of luv

sam