FF: The Spiral Staircase Last Part Page 136 - Page 47

luvd it!!
Like d way u describe der emotions.Very beautifully writtn.

Awww Really really enjoyed reading this update =)

OMG this was great..

Omg finally caught up. See this is what happens when you update after centuries I have to go back and reread the entire story. But it's worth it as it's AMAZING!! Thanks for the pm. I'm so happy everything is good between arhi now they can finally be a normal hubby and wife. :)

wow... wonderful...

This is the most engrossing FF in this forum i've read till now truth to be said... U have an unique eloquence, mesmerizing descriptive writing which is very much gripping...Loved ur emotional depiction of characters so much...
But i have to say something regarding Khushi's giving in to him in the last para.. the description of the scene is divinely beautiful and aesthetic but honestly i didn't like the easy and abrupt transition of the cold and stern Khushi to her old gullible and innocent one..
ASR has to suffer more than anything coz he just played with her most prescious thing self-respect , despite of knowing that she is innocent, well if not fully knowing but in his subconscious mind he definitely knew that she is pure and innocent..only because of his damn ego he shattered her into pieces, and now i don't want him to get such an easy access to the old and innocent Khushi..he has to bleed more to put those broken pieces of glass all together to get her back..
Also I have a few words for Anjali.. uff i just hate this character in the serial also, such a nauseating sugary, emotional bimbo, a shame towards the women... and now in ur FF I just hate Anjali more than anything.. As much as the slap ASR deserved , Anjali also deserves a tight one from Khushi...I want Khushi to spew her inner-most venom to Anjali to knock the useless dumbo back to reality from her delusion..
And why ASR is still dealing with her ?? she should be remarried soon and out of RM to give some damn space to Khushi and ASR to vent out..I am feeling ruefully sad for Khushi that she still has not retaliated back to each of the RM members...
lastly i want Khushi to be strong enough to deal with occasional emotional outbursts and breakdown rather than giving into ASR's arms to find solace only because ASR has to suffer a far long more way...
oh and pls update soon.. i've become obsessive about this FF more than the show .. Lots of love and best wishes for new year 😊

OMGGG this is such an amazing update... u described all their emotions beautifully 👏👏👏
i was literally waiting when u would update this FF.. its worth waiting chapter..
i have one question please.. does this means khushi has forgiven arnva completely??

minu thanks for the updated. i love the tension between arhi

nice i loved the update and it was emotional