FF: The Spiral Staircase Last Part Page 136

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#491

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3rd spot!! I guess, that's okay. . . . 😒

The way Khushi told Arnav that she had loved him always, and she would love him always was great, Munchy. . . 😃

And the way Arnav understood her feelings was even better!! 👍🏼

OMG!! What's with the ending. . . . I know it was much needed here. . .

And Khushi needs to understand that Arnav can't possibly CHOOSE one among his wife and his sister!! You feminist Munchy!! 😃

Don't make Arnav suffer for loonnngg, pwease. . . . 😊

Thanks for the PM. . . . ⭐️

Edited by -_-harsh42 - 13 years ago

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#492

Beautiful.. I must say.. I know khushi is being mean.. She needs to vent out and she has all the rights to do that..

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slgirl

@slgirl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#493

oh no...that's sad 😭 I think Kushi is being unfair..why is she lashing out on Anjali like this?

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asumi

@asumi

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#494

the way you used spiral stair case as metaphor to life - Simply brilliant!
and the emotions!! I could literally imagine my self standing before them in Anjali's room. Awesome.
Update soon 😊

happy new year!

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Aparna

@-aparna-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#495

One of d best part of this ff, but end is soo...
I love how she talked to anji, coz only khushi knew how it feels when one he love a lot not with her.
Starting was awsome and her confee.
Thanx dear

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#496

Pretty realistic I would say. M glad Khushi poured out her anger on Anjali, she really needs to spit out all the negativity before she can turn normal.

As for Arnav, well, I guess its tough to be fair in a situation like this. Khushi shouldn't be comparing herself to Anjali.