FF: The Spiral Staircase Last Part Page 136 - Page 45

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If at all ever you hear me telling anyone that I love this fiction, that would be an understatement.. Your fabulous concepts, so crystal clear and beautiful coupled with your amazingly engrossing writing style makes your spiral staircase as majestic and royal as it could be..

I felt for Lavanya.. loved the way you said that she was as much a victim of ASR's ego, but felt terrible when I read what she made of her life.. whatever ASR does for redemption, it won't suffice, I guess.. as far as Khushi is concerned, you did her right by making her blame Arnav at first, show concern for him the next, shout at him again the next instant and again care for him in the end.. the repetition of their beautiful union had left goosebumps all over me that are still there.. everything about the entire update is just perfect..

Respect for the way you described the complexity of the emotions felt by Khushi, Arnav and Lavanya.. you know, I was waiting for this subtle shower of love to re-ignite between them since like ages, and when I finally got to read that, I'm left speechless and short of words about my exact feelings..

You are tooo good... I'm a fan of yours!

Continue soon.. Thanks for the PM..

What an intense update, and awesome banners. Its brilliant! Love how you showed some frustration too on ASR's part, that was so real. And the slap was good! LOL am not wicked, but was kinda expecting it. Love this ff.

Sighhh*****. That was absolutely beautiful munchy. It was just Goddamn Beautiful. He had to earn her love and he did. He had to pick up his pieces and put them back together and they way you described his transition from the beginning to the end was fantastic. This is honestly one of my most favourite FFs; you're one of my top 5 favourite writers. Can I just give you a huge applause for the consummation scene please. Now that was love 👏

that was one amazing update
really kushi loosing her selfcontrol showing how J she was of LA
and lashing out at arnav and finally made peace

wow amazing

Thanks for the PM

PS loved the banner

great update:)
first i would i loved the posters they were really beautiful:)
and loved your update too:) i loved the slap:) and the way she went back to the swing,sat and cried:) and kudos to you that you explained anjali's character well here...she is the dumbest person in the life...foot want to waste my time on her..
continue soon:)

Very well written khushi jealousy , Anjali Character for her ...everything is prefect

Thanks for the PM. Loved the part in italics. Khushi 's slap shows how much she cares. Love Khushi's connection to the swing.