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Posted: 13 years ago

#431

This was such a great update!

Loved so many things!:

Lavanya! Kind of mean but I'm happy that she struggled with being a single mom and everything after she still continued to date Aranv after he'd married Khushi.

That Khushi still thinks Anjali's a dumb bimbo because she so is.

The slap! So deserved and Arnav definitely needed it to stop himself becoming too smug about the fact that he knows Khushi loves him.

The poolside scene! Although I'm not sure about what I would ideally want to happen the mornign after considering it mirrors the situation they were in last year. I don't want Khushi to automatically be all old-Khushi and happy happy.

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#432

WOW Finally You Updated And It Was A Great Update!

Loved Every Bit Of It, Especially When She Yells And Slaps Him And Him Asking Her that She's Jealous lol.

The End Was Just Beautiful!

I wonder if you're going to continue...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#433

wow!!! amazing pictures. yay arhi are together now, but i do hope arnav makes up for all he has done and hasnt gone off easy. oh btw ...the slap was VERY satisfying.

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Maira

@MairaKhan1180

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#434

A very good update, made me happy :) You write so well! I am glad they are back together but I have a feeling that Khushi will turn cold once again in the morning but then again she has every right to be considering what she went through.

Edited by MairaKhan1180 - 13 years ago

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music1

@music1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#435

That was one heck of an update muffin.From anger to horror to regret...beautifully portrayed.Hmmm did she forgive him that easily or will she be back on the spiral staircase in the morning?I guess she will be but the ball is in ur court so I guess I need to wait.Anyways enjoyed there passion too😉

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Jignasha

@pal89711

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Posted: 13 years ago

#436

about time you update this FF...hehe 😊😊😊 awesome update...finally khushi found out the truth about lavanya..😊😊 cant wait to see where ArHi's relationship goes from here...waiting to see if khushi has finally forgived arnav or was this just an another emotinal moment for her...

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#437

Fantabulous!!! Loved it. Yeh kambakht jealousy be ky cheez hai...kya kya karwa ti hai yeh...aakhir mein apna pyaar maan na hi padhta hai.

I loved this FF...as always, Khushi and Arnav stole my heart with their Love, their Angst, their Pain, and their Passion.

Looking forward to more from you!!👏

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#438

Muffin!

This was simply fantastic.

I loved every word.

I'm unsure about how I feel about Lavanya's state. Yes, she was wrong in doing what she did to Khushi, but then the information that she believed to be true at the time was her reason for it.

I completely agree about Anjali...she is definitely in need of a reality check!

The scene at the end was beautiful in every way.

It's so similar to the first time, but the emotions felt are on a new level...I just hope it doesn't end in the same way. I look forward to reading how this changes the equation between Arnav and Khushi. How will they behave with each other the next morning?

Always looking forward to the update for this.

Thanks for the PM.

⭐️

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karisma

@karisma

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#439

i thght it ended there,but i guess u wd possibly deal with the rat etc..maybe. anyway, it took me this long to finish it koz i was re-reading the scenes again n again till the butterflies in my tummy wd go away for me to move to the next chapter:))awesome read! i kinda ddnt like the slap 2 arnav..anjali hit her after all, but i guess i can live with that, now that it's "done".

khushi was a real amazon after having fed arnav wv sugar..poor guy hit his head on the floor immediately after n no1 to kiss the pain better then:) he persevered though n finally earned khushi's love.m happy 4 him..he has the love of the woman he loves.

if u're gonna continue, pls find him a star 4 his mom:)

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#440

i dunno if the previous comment that i posted using my decripit cell phone got posted. o'm doing it again to make sure, munchy... :D

i can even like a post using my cell!! dat's something i didn't know! thanks for giving such an update so dat at least i tried it!!

and as for the update, it was *me bowing in front of you.* fabulous. a fine mixture of love, jealousy, angst, and passion. a li'l too much of dat, if i may say so!! ;) but you knw i ain't complainin'!! thanks for the PM, munchy. luv u.