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Posted: 13 years ago
wow.
firstly YAY!!! i came in second šŸ˜†
but onto the update.
i totally expected that slap- i was like bitch if you dont slap him! and then she did, so i was happy, cuz he needed that hmph.

honestly, before the end, [hottt btw] the way i see it, i know theyre both being huge dicks, but at the same time, i mean arnav literally ruined her. he stripped her down to a manequin, he took away the most precious thing to anyone- her self respect. so basically, it reminds me of this song [YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8v_4O44sfjM[/YOUTUBE]
esp the part where it goes like running around leaving scars, cuz basically that's what he did. his ego, mistakes, it led to all that bad shit...man.

firstly, the lavanya thing, i love how you turned that character around, a jolt like the arhi marriage would honestly snap her back into lavanyas own shell aka her bitchy la stage. and then lavanya has to have consequences duh, but whos the dude ^_-

then the part in their room, shes still waiting up for him and arnav being arnav still cant help feeling that ego surge, its innate to him isnt it? he'll always have the attitude, no matter how badly he's been proved wrong- it's who he is.

im curious to know how their poolside tryst is gonna end. obviously the new khushi has too much inside her to simply let it all go and become the one he wants, right? no matter how many time they slip into their little haven and take a trip back in time, the truth and present wont change... man.

this you not updating every day is killing me munchy šŸ¤”


edit: theres more to add šŸ˜† i saw the role reversal comment, not gonna lie, it did come into my mind while i was reading, i mean arnav is still arnav, but is he calmer? yes, he's trying. his nature takes over, obvious in the little parking lot tantrum, but he tries...
meanwhile, khushi basically gives no f**ks, i mean not literally obviously šŸ˜†, but its basically how we say i dont care where i come from. khushi has basically given herself the freedom to say whatever the hell she wants- just like asr used to be, no filter and only a touch of regret later.

can i just say, you betta reply to comments this time?
and also, i love your skills :\ its too good to be intimidated...
Edited by malluangel - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was really touching!! Both Arnav and Khushi had charcter reversal with each other and i totally love it!! the emotions and situations both have gone through do really change the person entirely!

I hope Khushi 'll be able to revive herself! but i'm glad that Arnav's getting punished ffor his behaviour!
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was just Perfect!!
it made me so happy that they came back together :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was pure magic!! oh I loved the fact that they overcame their issues of trust, accepted each other in the most matured of ways and consummated their future, their new life together in such a wonderfully impatient manner as if they can't wait a single second more untill they became one!! And the best thing is they were both ready for it emotionally as well as physically.
And I love how you compared them to Adam and Eve at the end with their raw undisguised passion for each other šŸ˜‰ It heightened the fact that they made love to each other outside the confines of a room...outside in the nature, with the wind blowing around them with flower petals falling on them... just like Adam and Eve!
Beutifully executed! I have said this and Im repeating, you are one of the most talented writers in this forum. You should seriously think about publishing your work 😊
ps- Thank you for updating!! Love ya so much!!!! Sorry for hampering you bdw šŸ˜‰
Edited by hirushinz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW!I'VE JUST STARTED ON CHAPTER 2 AND HAVE TO SAY WOW!!SO MUCH PAIN..SUCH INTENSE MOMENTS..AND YET THE LOVE IS LURKING .. IN THE SHADOWS..thx 4 this index! i especially liked par 1 of chap 2 on anji'es thoughts. catching up on the rest now
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Posted: 13 years ago
Brilliant update.šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘ Loved it.
Update soon.😃 Thanks.šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow.. Loved it.. Spiral staircase.. Just a good symbolization..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful update,šŸ‘
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update! That was awesome! Loved the slap! Um, basically, i loved the whole update! lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
chapter 3..pain..tears..happiness..loss..disgust..shock..hatred..love..went through a rollercaster of emotions. i especially felt the pain khushi went through when anjali slapped her..moved to tears but the tears wouldn't come

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