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Kruti Patel

@love_kuki

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#231

Love this FF a lottt!! Plss plss update soon.. dying to know more abut KKG & Arnav's reactions as to how much he has hurt Khushi to break her up to an extent that she has completely left behind her past beliefs, her innocence and her bubbly self!! All bcoz of him!!

Want Arnav to suffer a little & break down too realize how much pain he has caused his Khushi!! But then, don't make him cry too much.. as much as I hate him hurting Khushi.. I love him too!! 😉😉 Wanna see how he makes amends and gets her child-like innocence, beliefs in god & love back.. Also, wanna see Khushi bringing back the real Arnav out from ASR's shell!!

Plsss update soon!! waiting for it..

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#232

res...

*edited*

First of all, Thanks a ton, Muffin.
For giving such a terrific update!!!

Man, what an update it was!!!

Double the amount of "ASR"ness and you'll get the present Khushi!! Phew!!!

ASR stared back at him through Khushis eyes, ruthless, cold and more demonic that ever before.

This line just gave me serious creeps!!!

Continue soon, love. . . . . 😳

Thanks for the PM. . . . . 😊

Edited by harsh42 - 13 years ago

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Sabarnee

@Sabarnee_25

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#233

thanks for the PM...awesomely written...and I think I'm the first who commentedon this update...

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renee

@renee27

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#234

wat goes around comes around...asr owes her big tym

nicely written...thanks for d PM😊

Edited by renee27 - 13 years ago

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Addie07

@Addie07

Inactive

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#235

😳i 4got i had resvd... ooops

my comment is on the next page... BUT I wanna say it again it was AWESOME!!!!!!👏

Edited by Lyraa99 - 13 years ago

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devishree

@devishree

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#236

⭐️god mini wats this???????????????????????????????

khushi spoke all those words...😲

arnav heard from her dammit😡

don't know wat to say ???

plzz update soon

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#237

Oh dear! What has happened to Khushi..? I can only pity Arnav because of what he had made of that poor girl..

Please continue soon.. your story is wayyy too gripping for me to stop wondering about the next parts... Dying to read more... Please make both of them together... I can't see either of them like this!

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zafi

@zafi

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#238

👏👏Wow. Amazing update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Pay backs A B****, isn't it.😆😆😆😆😆

I am glad Khushi is hurting ASR. It's Pay back time baby.

He can't have her back so easily after what he and his family did to her.😡🤢

Love your writing.⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Keep it coming and thank you.😃😉

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smithasrk

@smithasrk

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#239

Loved it. Freaking cool.

Waiting for the next

Thank U

Love

Smitha

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Addie07

@Addie07

Inactive

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#240

oh my god... it was worth the wait... What a concept... what a story. my heart leapt at the "complaining about me" line...

Khushi has turned exactly the way Arnav was.. i loved the last part when she mentioned other men... would love to see him seething with jealousy.. but most of all i liked ur concept, the title is apt and its something so different... thank u so much 4 d update and thank u 4 dis awesome story... loved it totally👏