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ravenheart

@ravenheart

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Minimuffin : Tragic. I do not think I will have the heart to forgive Arnav had I been in Khushi's place.

Edited by savi-tan - 13 years ago

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dyhardfan

@dyhardfan

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#122

A hot and an emotional update... Poor khushi. Im loving the progression. Plz continue soon. Thanks

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.Sandal.

@.Sandal.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#123

loved it simply, continue soon plz

thankx for pm

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.Saraa.

@.Saraa.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#124

woow..loved the update..it was truely amazing..heart wrenching past of arhi..so sad..that bloody creep

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aakriti

@aakriti120

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#125

wow...very well written...the flashback was shocking..thanks for the pm and continue soon..:)

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#126

oh god u made me cry at so many places that it actually took me a long time than natural to actually finish it cz i simply had to stop, close my eyes, hold back my sobs and then take a deep breath and read on..
when that slap came, decided that she had sinned and the verdict handed out as well as the punishment..her bowed head taking it all in..i was choking back and went of reading..

and i again remembered the 1st update about her in her childish way calling it her 'hum dil de chuke wala jhula' it made me cry even more when reading about it once again.
when he threw that wad of money at her i felt myself cringing back ..this is really one of the most heart wrenching updates i have ever read..

u have conveyed the emotions in such a vivid way my heart is aching for Khushi..one of the most beautiful updates ever..heart-breakingly painful..but just as enchanting...

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Addie07

@Addie07

Inactive

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#127

loved it... this khushi actually earned my respect... i liked the way anjali was shown in khushi's shoes... I hope she dsn 4give any one easily.. neither arnav nor anjali...

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Aparna

@-aparna-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#128

Oh my god that was so depressing. And flashback.
I just hate arnav for throwing money on her.
And also the slap anjali had given to pooor khushi.
He was not forgiable for that. But dont make suffer him too long i cant saw him suffering. Just spuerb awwsome and emotional tooo. Updt soon dear. Thanx for pm.