Yay youu updateddd =)
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WOW! What was thatt?!?! Seriously, the flasbacks were a shocker, and I actually could feel the emotions and the agony that Khushi was feeling! My heart truly goes out to her for suffering so much, and the fact that i took this work of fiction as real...the credit goes to you for emoting such in-depth feelings! Be it when Anjali ruthelessely told Khushi to get out or when Arnav told her to not leave his room ever, or even when he stared out to her swining herself away with no emotions (I actually thought he felt her then...but i guess i was wrong) or even when they made love (Well, Im hoping it was love because the morning after was just the cruel reality that Arnav imposed! Ugghh I felt like strangling him then! LIKE GRRR...Guy wth! How can you throw money at her like that)..and then, finally Saakshi Jha walking in and Khushi walking out by saying, " Too little to late" to Arnav's "I love you"...EVERYTHING WAS JUST PERFECT! Youve depicted and narrated this part just so perfectly, seriouslyyy!!! Keepp it up! I cant wait for Arnav's plane to land and see what happens next in Lucknowww! I hope you dont make us wait too longgg LOL =) Youre a Fab writer! Keep it up! ⭐️
- Dee
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