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abandoned

@abandoned

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#1091

Well. NOPE. You both got chances. Now I am giving it to Poo dii. She hasn't come first for long. :P 😈

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Zarqaa

@cant.be.assed.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#1092

Im resing right now! I dont care about the title🤣

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abandoned

@abandoned

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#1093

No I will hunt you down Z if you reserve without me editing that title.

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Zarqaa

@cant.be.assed.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#1094

Oops i resed now🤣

Thats not fair! Poo resed once before me! She shouldnt get the first res!

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abandoned

@abandoned

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#1095

Off you trot, jaanis.

Yet Another Sunset #7

Edited by SmokingDreams - 13 years ago

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fri42911

@fri42911

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#1096

hey dear,

i loved your FF.

you have done awesome job writing each part and describing each scene, esp. b/w riddhima and muskan and AR.

i had enjoyed reading all the AR scenes, esp. cute fighting scenes.

i was imagining each scene while reading them.

thanks for giving me opportunity to read this such an entertaining FF.

looking forward to read next part.

Edited by fri42911 - 13 years ago

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swati

@smileever

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#1097

Nice short nd sweet part
Happy to know bout the super quick updates
Love this ff

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neelima

@araja1234

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#1098

Awesome part. thanks for the pm

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Sunita Tandel

@KaJen_addiction

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#1099

hey Amal! i m very sorry 4 being late sweetie!
amazing updates! nd girl dey were quick!
i m so loving dis new version!
cafe scene was awesome! loved it!
loved AR's fight 4 HP!
den dat firing! God! but thanks 2 our hero who saved dem! it was gr8 da way u showed Armaan chasing dat shooter!
loved how u showed Ridz's concern 4 Armaan!
loved AR convo!
loved da way its going!
thnx 4 da pm
luv...Sunita:)