Sleeping with the Enemy 2- last part pg 52 - Page 31

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Posted: 13 years ago
Is everything fine Ashu?
Pls leave a note atleast.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Okay so a lot of things have come up and my life is becoming such that I most likely have to quit IF.

I haven't decided what to do with BP because I had like 20 parts left at least and clearly I can't manage to finish all that. I will think about it. Sleeping with the enemy though - this is the last part! Gasp!

Part 21 - last part
End or a new beginning?

Riddhima rolled her wheelchair into Armaan's room. She had asked everyone to wait outside. This was something she needed to do alone. She looked at Armaan lying there on the bed unconsciously.

Why were they still suffering so much? Had they not already suffered enough for their sins? She sighed as she remembered what her old friend Mira had once told her. Sometimes Allah punishes you for your sins in this life itself and because you are repenting your sins are forgiven in the next life. Mira was a very religious Muslim and often said quotes like these. Riddhima had never paid attention to it before, but she couldn't help but wonder now. What was god anyways? People fought over religion so much but god, Allah, bhagwan, whatever you said it was all the same god. Sure some people argued over who said what and what is wrong or what is right, but god was god. That they could agree on. Armaan had always been open to religions that was the difference between them.

She closed her eyes and prayed as Mira once taught her. The best Dua is talking with Allah and asking him directly while honestly repenting for your mistakes. Sure there were many specific prayers and rituals people performed to ensure something, but it was all in gods hands.

Riddhima sighed as she could quite reach him from her wheelchair. She closed her eye and used her upper body strength to stand up holding the table, but was shocked as the realized she could stand. She took a few steps before losing her balance. Her legs were back, but they were slightly numb from the lack of movement.

Riddhima smiled as she fell on top of Armaan. Her lips brushed with his accidentally causing him to twitch ever so slightly.

She leaned in and slowly kissed his forehead followed by eyes. Just as she brushed her lips with his she saw his eyes open. They opened ever so slowly and looked at her looking back at him with love and relief.

She smiled as she leaned in capturing his lips with hers. They expressed their emotions through that kiss. They were united finally.

Words were not needed to express their emotions at that moment.

Just as they broke apart Arjun walked in with Angel who seemed to immediately smile seeing her papa.

The End :)
I know there are no dialogues in this part, but sometimes words just aren't necessary to express love. I know many of you will be disappointed, but I'm sorry. This was the last part and no epilogue either.

Love you all,
Ashu

PS. Idk when and if I can manage pms
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Posted: 13 years ago
i don't know what to say ashu, well as a writer i can understand its hard to end ur ffs but still we have to do it, well i did not say i like the ending, because i love it, though i love sleeping with the enemy like anything, that's y i did not want its end so sooon, but as i read ur note that life is being hectic, i surely does not want to bug u while saying anything, but try to please not to leave if as u r very wonderful writer, and we will surely manage with late updates. and now i want to say something about the part it was wonderful and u rightly said sometimes words are not necessary, there is only love and feelings required and that u show wonderfully with AR's unison and riddhima's thoughts towards GOD was so beautiful, well thanks or such an wonderful ff, will miss it like anything, hope u will come soon
love and take care
wait for u
nikita
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Posted: 13 years ago
I love this fan fiction, so beautifully written.
Business pleasure is also amazing! And your OS's and other work are great!!
Sorry to hear your quiting IF. Hope everything works out.
That was a great way to end this fan fiction.

Bhavya
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Posted: 13 years ago
U ended it???
I Love SWTE.
The ending was really nice.It's right,sometimes words are not necessary.U r a Wonderful writer Ashu.Will Miss u & your FFs a lot.PLEASE DONT STOP WRITING & DONT QUIT IF.We can manage with late updates.Hope u will come back soon.Will be waiting for u.Take Care.

Lots of Love
Madura
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part
but to small
hope u had updated long part
anyways
do write more FF
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesummm
i m speeechlesss
ff cudnt hav ended better !
love u alottt
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Posted: 13 years ago
This is an amazing ff.
Finally a new happy journey of AR's life will begin henceforth...
I loved this ff a lot...
AR's relationship,their love,trials and tributions everything was written in an extraordinarily beautiful manner..
You are an amazing writer and I really love ur ffs...

Plz keep up the good work and continue your other ffs as well please...
love u
Asma
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks everyone I will really miss everyone! I will still be here a few days but then :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
The ending was gr8...iI can understand your tight schedule...but we will still wait for you !!!

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