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Posted: 14 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: zigzagway_sadi

First of all... Congrats for ur new FF



And Best of luck as well..


butterfly








butterfly

Loved the characters...


OMG.. armaan a playboy and shilpa a brat.. and sid already has a GF.. interesting... really looking forward how their character will unfold and progress...

butterfly

Read the first part.. loved it!!!



butterfly
WOW... loved sid and shilpa bonding...

But i didn't understand one thing.. is sid and armaan mom same???



Now.. looking forward for armaan's part..
butterfly

Eagerly waiting for the next part

Thanks for the pm

Continue super duper soon!!!

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U TO TAKE CARE DEAR
LOVE MARIA
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
The concept is quite new and interesting.
I would really love to read more.
I'm really sorry Maria for the delay in comments.
love u

Asma
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63

it was sooo awesome ...loved it...

but r sid and armaan step brothers?? this point confused me a bit...

love ya...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
Thankx a lot for you guys to pressing like button and for your lovely comments guys:)
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AR version:)
In girls locker room:-
A boy kissing a grl madly,both were breathless but still there was no end of there kiss.Riddhima and Sid reach locker room.Sid by seeing this turn his face to other side.But riddhima how can she leave the chance to irritate arman her moron,she slowly moves towards him and turns the whole bottle of water on arman head.Arman"What da hell".When he saw riddhima laughing at him he says"you b***you again back,why cant you leave me alone???.Riddhima"oh!my poor baby so I am b**** what about you huh??you here kissing a grl madly in grls locker room!dude get a life,if some profecor have seen you,you have been resticate.Arman"listen ri!why the hell you care for me??if professors resticate why you care huh?no cares for me till now why you both care fo r me".Riddhima took and sigh and say"i repeating my anwser again again from past 8 years BCZ WE ARE YOUR FRND!and why cant you understand this simple thing!but i guess you never will understand us.By saying this she leaves from there.Arman felt bad for his behaviour.The grl from the behind came and whisper"see you at club at sharp 10"she wink and left from dere leaving arman and sid.Sid"So ammy hi!how r you??Arman"Sh** i again make her mad,she met me after whole 2 mounths and when she came to meet me i make her mad.Sid"tell me something new!ammy why cant you just try to forget your...Before he could complete his senctence arman says"dont tell me what to do or not to do??You cant undestand what i felt bcz you never gone thourgh from which i went.Before they could fight further bell rang.
In class:-
Riddhima was sitting alone in the class.She was on verge of crying.She felt some one hugging her from back.She recognize this touch.She quickly turn and hugss the guy tightly and he hugg him back.
Boy what happen baby??why you crying.when riddhima did reply he says"well let me guess fight with arman mallik again????.In reply riddhima hugg him more tightly.
Riddhima:why arvi why again he fights me,i dont know why he dont act good infront of me,i know he is pain so why he dont tell us he is pain instead he always behave bad.Arvi"Ri calm down!plz calm down!you know himvery well he is very rude,just give him some pace and time everything will be f9.And before ridhima could reply he kiss her to stop her from talking.At the same time arman and sid enter in the class.Arman saw arvi kissing her ,its not new that he saw them kissing for first time ,riddhima and arvi are in relation from 9 grade,arman has seen them alot time but when ever he saw riddhima with arvi he felt a strange feeling in his heart he dont know why but he didnt llike arvi much.
Before profecor honour(chemistry professor)enter the class sid thought of making arvi and riddhima back to world.Sid"GUYS!!!stop now or else professr hounour will kill us alive".When arvi and riddhima heard this they quickly sit on chairs,Riddhima sits in the middle by arvi and sid on both sides and arman after sid with a girl.Riddhima saw arman talking with a girl with a smirk on his face she felt bad but thats what arman is!!.Soon a fat man came in the class and all the students stood up in respect of t he professor.The professor saw each and every student that every one is stand up or not.A student was sitting and professor saw this poor soul.Professor starts his lecture ...Finally after one hour of boring period all of them went to another class then other classes...Finally Arman and riddhima fav class dance.Arman and riddhima from childhood like dance.Sid dont know how to dance so he didnt like dance class at all,same go with arvi.
MRS Machochean(dance teacher)came in class and saw as always very few students in the class and felt a bit bad but when she saw her fav students(arman and riddhima) she felt happy.Mrs Machochean"Guys i have a gr8 news for you guys after one week our college have function or you can say it dance comppetion with other college "Blume feild"so who ever will win will get 30 marks in the final exams,so who want to participate in?? "students raise thier hands up riddhima,arman,anie and ro,.Mrs mahochean"ok we want only 4 pair from competion and one pair from each class so day after tomorrow we will have a small competion among you guys and will select 4 pairs and one pair from your class so be ready students.BTW as you r 4 so who was paring with whom???"Before riddhima could say arman name annie say"mam me want to go with ammy means arman!!!!"Mra machochean"what about you arman you want to pair up with annie???"Arman say"yes mam".Mrs machochean"ok so arman with annie and we have no toher choice riddhima and ro,and out of you only one pair will select ok so practice hard bcz 30 marks in final thatsa gr8 thing and one silly me a certificate toO,So buck up"by saying this she left from thier.Riddhima with range in her eyes llook towards arman and went from their too.
In the break sid and riddhima was doing their lunch.Sid was seeing riddhima in a very bad mood so he ask what happen.Riddhima took a sigh and say"sid after one week we have a dance competion and arman instead me pair up with annie and...she stops.sID"and you are feeling jeolous ri8????.Riddhima glares sid and say"why should i be jelous huh???Before they do more fight arvi came too and sit with them and say"so wat you guys talkin ???Sid" we were talking about..."before he could complete riddhima says" nothing arvi we were talking about dance competion 1 week later"Arvi"oh!ok acha ri i wana tell you as you know about my sis marriage so i will not be at scholl for atleast 7 days,my papa has asked for leav and princi accept it,i will come tomrow only and baby i will not even be able to see your performance plz dont get angry but yo know my sis marriage and i want you to come but know you classes and all that plz dont get angry.Riddhima smiles seeing arvi explanation so she says"its ok you go and enjoy but if you can come to see my performance ok"

Finaly the whole day in school done,But arman and riddhima not talk to each other thats what irritate riddhima.She came home at 3 pm and saw no one home as her father on busness trip so she went to her room and slept.In the night he felt some one kising her forehead she opened her eyes and smiles seeing the person.She gets up and hugg her father tightly.Shashank smiles and say"dinner is ready quickly fresh up and came down ok!.Riddhima ok!! dad love you!
Riddhima came down and sat in chair whle shashank serve her dinner and ask"so hows your 1 day after vacation went???Riddhima!my day went quite good what about you???.Before shashank could talk further the door bell rings shanshank went to open the door riddhima was surprise to see the person comming with her father riddhima says"Arman what you doing here??Arman"well!iam here to ask for your hand from your Father!"Riddhima and Shashank mouth open like 'O' and arman laughs seeing this he says"Yar i was jokking why you guys looking at me lke this,uncle iam not too mad or blind to marry a grl like your daughter!by saying this he hi.5 with shashank .But starts running when he saw riddhima comming towards him with a jug full of water,they both start running ,riddhima behind arman finally arman and reaches to riddhima room and arman was about to slip to some silky coth under his feet but balance himself.Riddhima took the oportunity and pour the jugg full of water on him and runs downwards and laughs her heart out.Arman too came downward but riddhima was behind shashank and was asking shashank to save her.Arman"see unlce what your daughter did to me!!Shashank "arman befor you get cold come with me i will give you some warm clothes and riddhima you go and sit quietly".After a while arman came,riddhima saw arman comming out of her father room she cant control her laughing when she saws arman in her father clothes.But stop when shashank glare at her.Riddhima"ok ok i will dont laugh but aman you looking like our chem professor"Arman glare at her and sit on the other side beside shashank.They have their dinne,shashank ask arman about his vacation and both of them about today in scholl.Thye tell him every thing went good they didnt tell him about their fight.
Finaly at 9 pm arman decide to leave .Shashank to dont stop as he know tomrrow school.Riddhima came with to door to bid him bye.Arman caught riddhima hands when they both are standing outside and say"sorry yar plz sorry,i shouldnt talk woth yyou like that iam sorry".But riddhima didnt reply and say"bye arman we will meet and college"But arman again say "sorry na"Riddhima"why you select annie as your patner huh???now go to her tand talk to her not to me"Arman"yar i was angry that time at you so in anger i took her as my patner but i know she will not be able to win!"Riddhima"why will she not win??"Arman"bcz you are the best and no one can from you,you are the best! "By saying this he quickly kiss riddhima on her cheeks and went from there.Riddhima keep standing amzed by arman words...


Guys phew this was a long and pretty much boring but i have to introduce about arvi,bcz he is the most important person in this story,he and tamana,next will be Dance competion,AR in the absenece of ARVI and tamana and Sid:)

guys pplz comment plz...
and press like button it meant alot guys:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
thankx a lot guys for pressing like button:)
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ARSH version)

In girls locker room:-
A boy kissing a grl madly,both were breathless but still there was no end of there kiss.Shilpama and Sid reach locker room.Sid by seeing this turn his face to other side.But shilpa how can she leave the chance to irritate arman her moron,she slowly moves towards him and turns the whole bottle on arman head.Arman"What da hell".When he saw shilpa laughing at him he says"you b***you again back,why cant you leave me alone???.Shilpa"oh!my poor baby so I am b**** what about you huh??you here kissing a grl madly in grls locker room!dude get a life,if some profecor have seen you,you have been resticate.Arman"listen Shilpa!why the hell you care for me??if professors resticate why you care huh?no cares for me till now why you both care fo r me".Shilpa took and sigh and say"i repeating my anwser again again from past 8 years BCZ WE ARE YOUR FRND!and why cant you understand this simple thing!but i guess you never will understand us.By saying this she leaves from there.Arman felt bad for his behaviour.The grl from the behind came and whisper"see you at club at sharp 10"she wink and left from dere leaving arman and sid.Sid"So ammy hi!how r you??Arman"Sh** i again make her mad,she met me after whole 2 mounths and when she came to meet me i make her mad.Sid"tell me something new!ammy why cant you just try to forget your...Before he could complete his senctence arman says"dont tell me what to do or not to do??You cant undestand what i felt bcz you never gone thourgh from which i went.Before they could fight further bell rang.
In class:-
Shilpa was sitting alone in the class.She was on verge of crying.She felt some one hugging her from back.She recognize this touch.She quickly turn and hugss the guy tightly and he hugg him back.
Boy what happen baby??why you crying.when Shilpa did reply he says"well let me guess fight with arman mallik again????.In reply Shilpa hugg him more tightly.
Shilpa:why arvi why again he fights me,i dont know why he dont act good infront of me,i know he is pain so why he dont tell us he is pain instead he always behave bad.Arvi"Shilpa calm down!plz calm down!you know him very well he is very rude,just give him some pace and time everything will be f9.And before shilpa could reply he kiss her to stop her from talking.At the same time arman and sid enter in the class.Arman saw arvi kissing her ,its not new that they he saw them kissing for first time ,shilpa and arvi are in realtion from 9 grade,arman has seen them alot time but when ever he saw shilpa with arvi he felt a strange feeling in his heart he dont know why but he didnt llike arvi much.
Before profecor honour(chemistry professor)enter the class sid thought of making arvi and shilpa back to world.Sid"GUYS!!!stop now or else professr hounour will kill us aliva".When arvi and Shilpa heard this they quickly sit on chair sit Shilpa in the middle by arvi and sid on both sides and arman after sid with a girl.Shilpa saw arman talking with a girl with a smirk on his face she felt bad but thats what arman is!!.Soon a fat man came in the class and all the students stood up in respect of t he professor.The professor saw each and every student that every one is stand up or not.A student was sitting and professor saw this poor soul.Professor starts his lecture ...Finally after one hour of boring period all of them went to another class then other classes...Finally Arman and shilpa fav class dance.Arman and shilpa from childhood like dance.Sid dont know how to dance so he didnt like dance class at all,same go with arvi.
MRS Machochean(dance teacher)came in class and saw as always very few students in the class and felt a bit bad but when she saw her fav students(arman and shilpa) she felt happy.Mrs Machochean"Guys i have a gr8 news for you guys after one week our college have function or you can say it dance competion with other college "Blume feild"so who ever will win will get 30 marks in the final exams,so who want to participate in?? "students raise thier hands up shilpa,arman,anie and ro,.Mrs mahochean"ok we want only 4 pair from competion and one pair from each class so day after tomorow we will have a small competion among you guys and will select 4 pairs and one pair from your class so be ready students.BTW as yuo r 4 so who was paring with whom???"Before shilpa could say arman name annie say"mam me want to go with ammy means arman!!!!"Mra machochean"what about you arman you want to pair up with annie???"Arman say"yes mam".Mrs machochean"ok so arman with annie and we have no toher choice shilpa and ro,and out of you only one pair will select ok so practice hard bcz 30 marks in final thats a gr8 thing and one silly me a certificate toO,So buck up"by saying this she left from thier.Shilpa with range in her eyes llook towards arman and went from their too.
In the break sid and shilpa was doing their lunch.Sid was seeing shilpa in a very bad mood so he ask what happen.Shilpa took a sigh and say"sid after one week we have a dance competion and arman instead me pair up with annie and...she stops.sID"and you are feeling jelous ri8????.Shilpa glares sid and say"why should i be jelous huh???Before they do more fight arvi came too and sit with them and say"so wat you guys talkin ???Sid" we were talking about..."before he could complete shilpa says" nothing arvi we were talking about dance competion 1 week later"Arvi"oh!ok acha shilpa i wana tell you as you know about my sis marriage so i will not be at scholl for atleast 7 days,my papa has asked for leav and princi accept it,i will come tomrow only and baby i will not even be able to see your performance plz dont get angry but yo know my sis marriage and i want you to come but know you classes and all that plz dont get angry.Shilpa smiles seeing arvi explanation so he says"its ok you go and enjoy but if you can come to see my performance ok"

Finaly the whole day in school done,But arman and shilpa not talk to each other thats what irritate shilpa.She came home at 3 pm and saw no one home as her father on busness trip so she went to her room and slept.In the night he felt some one kissing her forehead she opened her eyes and smiles seeing the person.She gets up and hugg her father tightly.Shashank smiles and say"dinner is ready quickly fresh up and came down ok!Shilpa ok!! dad love you!
Shilpa came down and sat in chair whle shashank serve her dinner and ak"so hows you 1 day after vacation went???Shilpa!my day went quite good what about you???.Before shashank could talk further the door bell rings shanshank went to open the door shilpa was surprise to see the person comming with her father shilpa says"Arman what you doing here??Arman"well!iam here to ask for your hand from your Father!"Shilpa and Shashank mouth open like 'O' and arman laughs seeing this he says"Yar i was jokking why you guys looking at me lke this,uncle iam not too mad or blind to marry a grl like your daughter!by saying this he hi.5 with shashank .But starts runnig when he saw shilpa comming towards him with a jug full of water,they both start running ,shilpa behind arman finaly arman and reaches to shilpa room and arman was about to slip to some silky coth under his feet but balance himself.Shilpa took the oportunity and pour the jugg full of water on him and runs downwards and laughs her heart out.Arman too came downward but shilpa was behind shashank and was asking shashank to save her.Arman"see unlce what your daughter did to me!!Shashank "arman befor u get cold come with me i will give you some warm clothes and shilpa you go and sit quietly".After a while arman came,shilpa saw arman comming out of her father room she cant control her laughin when she saws arman in her father clothes.But stop when shashank glare at her.Shilpa"ok ok i will dont lugh but aman you looking like our chem professor"Arman glare at her and sit on the other side beside shashank.They have their dinne,shashank ask arman about his vacation and both of them about today in scholl.They tell him every thing went good they didnt tell him about their fight.
Finally at 9 pm arman decide to leave .Shashank to dont stop as he know tomrrow school.Shilpa came with to door to bid him bye.Arman caught shilpa hands when they both are standing outside and say"sorry yar plz sorry,i shouldnt talk with yyou like that iam sorry".But shilpa didnt reply and say"bye arman we will meet and college"But arman again say "sorry na".Shilpa"why you select annie as your patner huh???now go to her and talk to her not to me"Arman"yar i was angry that time at you so in anger i took her as my patner but i know she will not be able to win!"Shilpa"why will she not win??"Arman"bcz you are the best and no one can from you,you are the best! "By saying this he quickly kiss shilpa on her cheeks and went from there.Shilpa keep standing amazed by arman words...





Guys phew this was a long and pretty much boring but i have to introduce about arvi,bcz he is the most important person in this story,he and tamana,next will be Dance competion,ARSH in the absenece of ARVI and tamana and Sid:)

guys pplz comment plz...
and press like button it meant alot guys:)
Edited by Riarai2346 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
Hey Maria...Wowww I am first again...yeepiiee...Loved the update to the core...So Armaan and Riddhima both feel jealous whenever they talk to someone else...hmm... that's interesting...Why Arvi and Ridzy together yaar...Woww dance competition..its going to be fun...Just love last moment of AR... their moments are treat to read...will wait for next part...do try to update soon...Thanks for the PM... Take care

Lots of Love
Geet
Edited by sweetdesire - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67

Hey Ria😃, firstly thanks for the pm..


Great update... Really loved their friendship and the funny part at Riddhima's house... The last scene was so sweet... U could imagine that moment... Beautifully written..👍🏼


Looking forward to only AR part very eagerly..


With love

Liashna🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Resss...😊

Hey Maria!!! Hi...Love the update!!!!!
So AR r jealous when they talk to someone else...nice!!! just going to love the dance competition!!!!!!!!!! Waiting for this track...So Riddhima with Arvi?? hmm so important person...
Interesting...

Cont soon
Take care

Muahhh
🤗
Pranishta
Edited by ARKJ_4EVER - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
hi ria,
lovely update dear
luvd ridz n Ammy's tom n jerry fights
hmm...so Ammy is jealous seeing ridz wid Arvi
who is this "kabab mein haddi" now?
So in anger n jealousy he chose Annie.
Wow even Ridz is upset seeing Ammy n Annie.
So the intensity of the feelings are equal in both sides.
Awe luv the AR cute fight n cute moment in Riddhima's house.
Thank God! u sent dat Arvi away.
w8ing for the next update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
hey sis...😊😊
whassup dear...
u updated after sooo long...😡..
i loved it dear...
But Armaan really acted like jerk...how could he talk to his friends like that.😡..so not done...
And i feel they both r quite jealous seeing each other with someone else...😉
hope they realize their love soon. .. .
I am happy that Ammy came to apologizes to Riddhima...
all in all a very good part...
and this time updt soon dear...
take care sweet
love..😊
.

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