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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ns.1

awww!!! i am feeling sooo bad for poor geet😭...i hope maan soon realizes what he is doing is wrong 😡and confesses to her before its too late for him to even repent his decision😡😭...anyway great update continue soon please!!! 😊


he will realize soon...but then will it before she decides ...?😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: drashsree100



Omg !!! my heart ached reading the update 🥺 😭
Maan did not do the right thing ! 😡
now whatever might ensue he can never blame anyone excepting himself ! Geet gave him not one , 2 but many chances !
Geet ... poor soul 😭

I hope you're updating today ,
I'm dying to read what happens next 😛
Awesome , superb part 👏 ⭐️ 👍🏼

Thanks for pm .


True...I think this was the best update of this FF...I was myself teary when I wrote
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: acjanfeb1

Thought is only a flash

between two long nights,
but this flash is everything
so, maan had realised his feelings for geet and even feels he is not suitable for geet . that is sad . definetly , he will realise he cannot loose geet and ill work harder for to make geet his own . waiting for next.


Yes this flash is everything...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

it was a good part - Maan came to know what he felt and his effort to let Geet move on was very nice written...

It was sad to see Geet requesting him to confess so many times ... imagine the "haalat" of a girl in such a situation !!
I am waiting to see how he'll get out of this phase of no belief on himself ..

lovely😊


yes...geet desperation came out well👏
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: goldenball


he will realize soon...but then will it before she decides ...?😃



Like always, it will be late...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww poor Maaneet are so miserable!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Chapter 15 - I again thought about myself

Maan looked at her as she ran away...he touched his forehead, with so much apnapan she kissed him and he cursed himself. Till now, he had never felt anytime anyone's loss...but today he lost her and all because of him...He cannot just go and ask for her hand...She deserves someone better than him...someone who is as intelligent as her...someone who is holding a profile like her...and not someone like him..who has not taken anything seriously...

"Geet, I am feeling so helpless...If I was as good as Dev...I would have never let you go...See my condition, few moments back I realized how important you are for me...what you meant to me...why I was feeling so much emptiness for last so many years...And before I could cherish this feeling...I have to let you go from my life..."

"I am feeling like a complete loser...one who always was a failure...I never took my life seriously because I felt that's the easy way out..."

"Geet..." he could no longer control his tears...

He remembered her repeated question...how he could have answered her...

"Geet...you will never understand how much I wanted to say it...but then I have other questions first to answer..."

suddenly, he heard her whispers ..."I can wait for you..."

and he felt...damn distressed...

"She came all the way to meet me...She said she is waiting to hear from me for so long...She said she can wait for me..."

"and What I did...?? I simply accepted that I cannot take Dev's place...I simply accepted the defeat...I didn't thought about her..."

He was restless.., he wanted to to rush to her...he could feel the blood pumping...throbbing his heart...and he got up from his bed...

and rushed out of her house...

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He went to Rajani's place, hesitated to enter as he saw Brij standing...the house was now looking deserted...the decoration was getting removed...the flowers were dried...

He stood there for some time, then gathered all courage...

"Brij Veerji...I want to meet Geet..."

"Geet...? she has left already..."

"Left...??" he felt like losing his soul.

"Yes...and you...don't trouble her now...She is getting engaged next week at Bangalore and then marriage by month end..."

"Oh no...!"

"You better not talk to her..." Brij almost warned him...

He didn't cared about him...what he said...he was only thinking...He again lost her..."Maan what you did...? You again lost her...This time she again came to talk to you...and you shunned her completely, because again you were lost in your own world...Again, you were thinking about yourself...You didn't thought about her wait...her intezaar..."

His throat was again getting choked...

He turned back...and he tumbled...he saw the BuganVilla pot...He remembered he had seen it at her room...plant was now looking lifeless.. the pot was broken into pieces...he felt so much like him...he picked up the plant and carried back to his home...

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He came into his room...and brought the plant on his terrace...suddenly he felt like giving life back to it...This is the only rememberance he has of her...He kept the plant in a new pot...and gave water to it.

"Geet...I lost you...and I learnt a big lesson...I never cared about you, it was always about me...but now I will do something in life to make you proud of me...I don't want you to ever repent in your life for loving a person like me...I will make you proud of me..."

He suddenly was filled with confidence..."Yes...I will make her feel proud of me..."

and then a corner of his heart reminded him..."Par Maan, she is getting married..."

"Yes...At least, I can make one last attempt to talk to her..."

He made up his mind...he wanted to tell her that he will change...she just needs to give him some time...

He hesitatingly dialed her number...and waited...and heard her Dad's voice...

"Hello Uncle ji, can I talk to Geet..?"

"Geet...but she has gone out with Dev for engagement shopping..."

"Shopping...??"

"Jee...Son..."

"Uncleji...please ask her to call me..."

He hang up the phone...deep in thinking..."Geet agreed for engagement...Geet went for shopping..."

"Maan...you still hoping...??She has decided..."

He felt losing all hopes again...He had never thought about it till now...

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Geet came back and checked her cell...she forgot to take it with her...and she hurriedly checked all her messages/calls and was damn surprised to see his call..

"Maan...?"

She wanted to dial him...but then she remembered..she has agreed for marriage with Dev...

She kept the phone back...

Edited by goldenball - 13 years ago
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Chapter 16 - How she can marry ?
Geet looked at herself, she all dressed up in her wedding attire…red Lehenga…green blouse and orange dupatta…She was not able to believe herself and thinking about Dev as her husband, was tensing her.

Since she started understanding herself, she knew only one thing…"Maan…." He was there in her thoughts each and every second…She carried her feelings deep inside, never shared with him or anyone…but then when Dev came in…she wanted an answer about her feelings and she went all the way to meet him….but Maan he refused her love…he refused to see that she waited for so long for him…for him, she is not the girl with whom he will spend his life.

She tried to control her tears…and now…why he is calling her again and again… Why he wants to talk to her.?

Now she has given her word to Dev…and Dad…she just can't face him. He so eagerly wants her to be settled…

She wanted to pick her phone…call him…blast him…and tell him…that he doesn't deserve to be her friend but then she knows she cannot do...she is helpless…she will take whatever he says to her…whatever he does to her, she will take it…she knows it very well by now…she just takes whatever he says to her…

She could no longer control…she has to talk to him once…..why he called her…this is her last chance….

Maan looked at the phone…for last 1 month he is waiting for one call from her and she doesn't want to talk to him….he desperately looked at it again….and came out….

But today, since morning he was feeling restless, he was not able to name it…he just knew he was feeling restless. Something surely is wrong…she cannot be upset with him for so long… It was he who always showed her anger…and she always came to pacify him…..something surely is wrong….

He wanted to rush to Rajani and ask her what has happened with Geet…why she is not calling him.

He saw Brij standing outside…..he gathered all his courage and asked him….

"I want to know about Geet…"

Brij gave him angry look…"Aaj uskee shaddi hain…"

"Shaaaddi…"

"Haan…you don't know….you claimed to be her friend..?"

He didn't listen any more, he just rushed back…ran…ran….till he reached the end….he took a deep breather trying to make sense…trying to remember what Brij said.

She is finally getting married, that's why she is not responding back.

But his heart couldn't believe what he heard. How it is possible…? She can never accept anyone…How he will see her with anyone…

"Maan…this is the truth you have to accept. Why you still want to hear that she will come back…She asked you so many times, now she has taken a decision…"

He was feeling so low…he called up Pammi…

"Pammi…you there…chal purane tille par milte hain…"

"Pammi….don't ever fall in love…"

"Maan…what has happened to you…you already have taken 1 bottle…"

"Leave the bottle aside….I must tell you, don't ever fall in love…."

"What happened…? Did Suhana say anything…?"

"Suhana…? Who is Suhana…?"

"Maan…..You don't remember Suhana..?"

"Pammi…I am talking about Geet…She told me she loved me since our childhood…and now she is getting married to that Dev…"

"Maan…you are in love with Geet…? But she is not your type..."

"Haan….but then kya faayda…? She is adamant. She is getting married to Dev. She is not talking to me…Now, how I will live without her."

He almost hit the ground….couldn't open his eyes…..

She couldn't control anymore….wk baar baat kar loon…ho saktra hain who kissee musibat main hon…ho sakta hain, he wants me back in his life….

She was suddenly getting filled with hopes…she forgot everything…she just wanted to reach him…ho sakta hain….

She called him…his phone was ringing continuously…..

He tried few times, her heart beat sinking as there was no response…she was almost about to give up…then heard…

"Hello.." but she knew it's not his voice…

"Maan…."

"Geet….Main Pammi…Maan toh behosh hain…"

"Behosh hain…? What happened to him…?" she panicked.

"Geet…today he took more, he was very upset. I forgot to congratulate you…for your marriage…"

She didn't answer; her mind was racing about him….worrying

"Pammi….Maan ko kya hua hain….?"

"Geet…you should know it better. I only know he was very upset…He was remembering you a lot."

She kept the phone, her heart froze…she just could no longer think…and her father came inside….

"Geet, chalo…Dev is waiting for you."

Her tears started flowing…she wanted to run to Maan…to tell him that she heard what she wanted to hear so much…but then she looked at her Dad…who was looking at her with so much love…his heart felt wish is going to be filled…

Edited by goldenball - 13 years ago
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Chapter 17 - I lost her

Geet looked at her Dad, his eyes were filled with all love, happiness seeing his daughter in red attire...but she knew she can't help it...she has heard him...he is in pain, he is remembering her...and she can't marry Dev.


Her tears rushed out...breaking all the walls...all what she had kept inside for years just came out piled up...and she broke down...crying...howling...

"Geet...what happened..." His Dad came running to her, she lifted her head and saw Dev standing behind, dressed up in groom's attire.

"Dad...I can't marry..." she was helpless...she is breaking all his hopes, but she can't help it. She has heard him and she can no longer stay away from him.

"Geet...what are you saying...? Everyone is here...all the guests are here...and then you only said yes..."

Dev came forward..."Let me talk to her..."

She was terrified with Dev's expression but then she gathered all courage...and looked at him.

"Geet...What are you saying...Tum hosh main hon..?"

She didn't speak, she simply kept staring him...He looked at her for sometime...

"Is it Maan...? "

She nodded...

"I always suspected but then you never told me anything..." he restlessly shurgged off his shoulder...moving his hands through his hair and then came closer to her...almost getting in her...

"Geet...why are you telling now...I gave you so much time to decide...I never pressurized you...You cannot do this to me..."

Geet was now feeling hopeless ...trapped and she ran out of the room...to terrace.

Dev rushed behind...but her Dad stopped him...

"Dev, I will talk to her..."

and her Dad went behind her, Dev waited restlessly...eagerly...anxiously.

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Maan was still lying on the ground, Pammi was shaking him...

"Maan, get up...Geet called you...She wanted to talk you..."

He was hearing Geet's name, but then he was hardly able to open his eyes...

Pammi then got a bottle of water and splashed on him...

"Maan. ...come back to senses...Geet called you..."

He opened his eyes and looked at him astonished...Pammi was shouting his life out...

"Maan...she wanted to talk to you."

He understood and hurriedly took his mobile and dialed her...waited for her to pick up and then heard....

"Don't ever call her again...she is now getting married to me..."

He knew its Dev...but right now he wanted to talk to her..."Dev...She called me..."

"So what...? stop meddling with our lives...She is getting married...damn it...Do you understand...?"and He hang up the phone...

Maan froze..."Pammi...she just wanted to tell me that she is getting married..."

Pammi couldn't believe...

"Maan...you must have mis-understood, she wanted to talk to you urgently..."

"No Pammi..." and he again lost his senses...


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She rushed to terrace...and to the stars...they only understand her...

Her tears uncontrollable...her heart inconsolable...and her mind mist.

Her Dad came behind...

"Geet...yeh kya bachpana hain...?"

"Dad..I love him..." and she hugged him tightly...

"Geet..you never told me..."

"Dad..."

"Geet...but do you understand what your are getting in...He is not at all suitable for you..."

"I am helpless..."

"Geet...don't think from heart...think about your future..."

"Dad...I can't marry anyone when I know he also loves me..."

He kept listening to her cries...her heart beat...her plea...and then decided...

"Fine...If you think so, then go and talk to him..."

She looked at him...unbelievingly...

"Geet...everything will be fine...I will talk to Dev..."

She smiled happily...she wanted to talk to him now...No,...she will give him a surprise by going to Delhi.

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Pammi got Maan back home...dragging him...and his mother was shocked to see him...

"Pammi ...what happened to him...?"

"Auntyji...he was very upset...he got drunk..."

"Upset..? for what..?" She looked surprised...Maan toh never get upset..he actually is never bothered about anything.

"Woh Geet hain na...she is getting married..."

"Geet...??"

She was shocked...but then she understood..."Pammi bring him inside..."

Pammi got him inside till his room and then he left.



She came closer to him...anxious...troubled by him.

"Maan...get up..."

"Geet..." he said...opening his eyes...

"Maan...what happened with Geet..."

"Mom...she got married.."

"So..."

"I love her...She also loves me...but then she got married..." his eyes were deep red...he hugged her tightly...crying like a small child...

She could feel his shudders...she felt his seriousness...

"Maan...why you never told me...? I could have asked for her hand..."

He was surprised..he looked at her with dis-belief.

"Mom...You know what I am...How I could have done..."

"Maan...you should have told me at least once...I would have tried..."

"No Mom...I don't deserve her...Please...now what I will do...? How I will live without her...?"

She stroked his hair..."Maan...Now goto sleep...morning we will talk..."

She made him sleep and came out...



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Edited by goldenball - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Dear.. that was a sad update 😭😭😭😭😭 but I am happy that Maan has realized his mistakes.. He will now try to become responsible and yeah will make Geet feel proud of him.. But how to stop geet's engagement and make her wait for him... he he I know that you have already found a way for that..

please continue sooon...
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