Thrd1 Darkness Personified!! Link to thrd2 - Page 34

Originally posted by: shah10

omg..

poor geet..so sad

Yes dear it's sad...but that's life!!!

Originally posted by: simm28

jazz awesome strating

<font color="#FF00FF">u r right it's not so easy</font>

<font color="#FF00FF">to go with this story. have</font>

<font color="#FF00FF">to be a strong enough to</font>

<font color="#FF00FF">see another world & a new</font>

<font color="#FF00FF">maan with all the darkness</font>

<font color="#FF00FF">u done a marvelous job so</font>

<font color="#FF00FF">go with the flow. ready to konw</font>

<font color="#FF00FF">about all new world of darkness.</font>

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Thnks simm
n yes it's gonna be a completely different world of darkness!!!

Originally posted by: Mehek25

<font color="#006600">A very good start to the story Jazz.</font>

<font color="#006600">I agree with u that u should go with the flow of the story, and write what u and only u think should be happening in the story.</font>

<font color="#006600">So what if Maan is darkness personified, so what if he never changes...so long as the story is interesting will love to read it.</font>

<font color="#006600">Pls continue soon.</font>

<font color="#006600">Thanx for pm dear.</font>

Thanks mehak for understanding!!!

We shd remember that at the end of the day it's just a story

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

<font color="#0000ff">Congrats on the new SS! all da best! Jus read the intro, character sketch, prologue n part 1! Loved it! Its different! Intense n emotional n wonderful! Update soon! Perfect start! </font>

Thanks dear
I hope ull like the upcoming story too

Originally posted by: hopehot

thanks for the pm

loved it ..

i really mean it... i love this dark, dark, dark maan...

awww i feel really bad for geet though and somehow its maan's fault...

any way

fabulous

cont soon

Thnx sweety
I'm glad u liked it!!!
N u r rite he is the one who is somewhere at fault for mohinder's death!!

Originally posted by: KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Hiii
Awesome update
Loved it
Maan is sooo evil
Geet's dad is dead
Sooo sad
Cant wait 4 more
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm

Thanks dear
will update it soon

Originally posted by: mchopra

woha Jaz..Tht was great..i just hope i dont have to add u the list of ppl who love killing ppl..😆

Thnx dear
well I hvnt killed people till today...
But there's not just one kind of sad and dark endings!!! I'm not sure where this story will go, but when I say no promises for happy endings that doesn't mean that I'm gonna kill them...lol... It's just that I'm not binding this story with any kinda promises!!! If at the end the story will demand me to kill someone, trust me I won't think twice before killing them!!

So moral of the story no promises!!!

Originally posted by: drashsree100

<font color="#996699" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="2">Omg !!! Geet lost her father at such a young age😭😭</font>

<font color="#996699" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="2">And Maan's so heartless😡really</font>

<font color="#996699" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="2">Poor Geet</font>

<font color="#996699" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="2">that too on her B'day😭</font>

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<font color="#ff00ff" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="2">Nice part👍🏼although painful</font>

<font color="#ff00ff" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="2">thanks for pm ...</font>

Thankyou dear

Originally posted by: tellyme

Keep it up Dear... awsome going...

Maan is completely a Dark character here...

A good descision to keep the story as your own imagination as you are writing it...

Thanks for understanding anu
n yes he is very dark!!

Originally posted by: mandymore

Awsome prt,

Thnxxx Mandy dear