Thrd1 Darkness Personified!! Link to thrd2 - Page 35

Originally posted by: lil.mizz.smexii

argh STUPID MAAN!
poor Geet D:

Lol stupid is the first epithet I heard for this maan!!! Lol

Originally posted by: ElizaKawa

OMG

I was in a bad mood

but u just made my day for updating

thnks😊

Awww u r welcome dear
I'm glad it lifted ur mood!!!

Originally posted by: Simran_14

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Maan is so evil at this age

I wonder what will he do in future

Feel really sorry for Geet

I love dark stories

And your doing an amazing job dear

Keep up

Cont soon

Thnx 4 da pm

Thnx dear
as he grows up, he's gonna become more dark day by day!!!

Originally posted by: disha_Maan.GC

awesome update dear

loved it...

poor geet... feeling sad for her
maan is realllyyy sooo devil...

Yep disha he is REALLY evil!!!

Originally posted by: piya-

Well loved the begining maan is evil ..hmm poor geet such a big loss...waiting to see how the story moves on from here

love-Piya

Thanks piya
yes he has snatched her father from her!! Devil maan

poor geet lost her father at such a small age!!

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi

<font color="#666633"><font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">jazzu ... love you sweetie pie
now, what can i ask more for ???

you all are really making me jump in joy ... so much variety in dark stories ... you know how much i love these dark romance & wild love ... awesome ... this is real cruel-evil mighty Maan Singh Khurana ... the aura, the scene, the atmosphere you presented here is beyond excellence

do cont soon & do PM me
make the parts as long as you can ... no worry from my side ... go beyond everything in your creativity
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Thanks Sara
I'm happy that u liked it!!!

Originally posted by: pinky6

AWESOME ! UPDATE SOON PLZzz 😃

Thanks dear
will try!!

Originally posted by: priti11

Hey jazz awesooome start...

loved the 1st part...

really maan is so evil at such a tender age...

n feeling sad for geet she lost her father..

now what will happen when his evil eyes will fall on geet...

Thanks priti
let's see what happens when he'll put his eyes on her!!!

Originally posted by: anjy-1988v

<font size="5"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">yaar! plz jaldi se update kr do!!!
tc!!😛
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I'll try to update it today anjy 😉

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi

<font color="#993366">jazzu, indeed a dark one with lots of turns & twist

Maan is a 18 year ruthless boy, Geet was having only her father as her family, the whole atmosphere -- where you describe Maan, his evilness, his hunger, mohinder's state of mind, Geet's wait, her innocence ... i mean over all i am speechless jazzu jaan ... and a warning do write this as yourself, no burden, no restiction & no worry

do cont soon & do PM me
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thanks Sara
I always love to read ur comments!!!
Yes maan is evil at a very young age!!