Kis Morrh Pe Milay Ho /Thread #2/Maan Geet/FF - Page 13

Lo Buddies here is most important part Maan Geet meeting..which no one expected...read this comment this lik this.

Part 12

They reached Dargah by 5:30.

So many people…visiting Dargah…ruhaaniyat (spirituality ) all around.Maan felt such kind of relief n peace here..he couldn't express.He was waiting fro Addi…who was parking car.when same Fakir baba came.who met Geet two days back

Baba: kisko dhund rahhe ho bachha ?

Maan: Nanhi baba apne sathi ka intzaar kar rahha hun.

Baba: Tum uska intzaar kar rahhe ho..or woh tumhara…us uper walle ka khel koi nahi jaan sakta...( Baba used high tone)

Maan: Baba aap galt samjh rahhe hai..main to ( he wanna say that he was waiting for Addi)

But baba…not let him complete his words

Baba: Nahi baccha samjh to tum nahi rahhe ..jiska intzaar tum kar rahhe ho woh tumhara intzaar kar rahha hai…( he repeated same line) allah tumhara nigehbaan ho ( n he left)

Maan thought for a while what he said ..then Addi came

Addi: Sir chally n they moved in.

Geet had been tied Mannat wish thread's knots When he found Maan on Mazaar.She was visible to Maan..when Kawals start to sing ..

Preet ki lath mohe aaisi laagi
Ho gayi main matwaali
Bal bal jaaun apane piya ko
He main jaaun vaari vaari
Mohe sudh budh naa rahi tan mann ki
Yeh toh jaane duniya saari
Bebas aur laachar phiru main
Haari main dil haari - 2

(continuing)

Geet was out of this wold ..at same place…when Maan came to tie wish thread.…He called a man

Maan: Bhai sahib..yeh Mannat ka dhagga yahi bandhna hai..

n that man said yes..Geet came to senses…Maan noticed her standing there…But her duptaa covered her half face.

Maan: Rukiya wahi rukk jaaea..aap wahi hai ji mera picha kar rhi thi.( he caught her )

Geet: Maan aab main kya karru (she covered her face but looked toward her..only eyes were visible)

Song in the background

Tere naam se jee loon - 2
Tere naam se marr jaaun - 2
Teri jaan ke sadke mein kuchh aaisa kar jaaun
Tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main
Ho ri ha ri ho gayi main

Teri deewani deewani- 2
Tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main
Ho ri ha ri ho gayi main
Teri deewani deewani - 2

Teri deewani deewani - 2

(in between this )

Geet started to move backward looking at Maan..n Maan he was moving toward her ..they were lookin at each other .

Maan: kon hai aap aur kyo picha kerti hai mera ( he busted)

No response from Geet.without answering him Geet again ran…coz there were so many people.so Maan was not able to locate her.He tied thread in that state

But a sudden noise of a fire distracted Maan

Maan: yeh kya tha ?

Addi came running : Sir kahan thay aap jaldi chalea….yahan se ( breathing fast )

Maan: Per Addi what happened n what was this sound ?

Addi : Sir do partied main fight ho rahhi hai..k kon pehlay mazzar per chadar chdaega.n one of them fired a built .isse pehle kush aur ho jaldi chalea…bahar hi ho rahha hai …

Ya they were really fighting ..Addi forcefully took Maan from there but suddenly again firing started …where unintetionally Maan became on target in their fight..

(Kawals were singing ..they were out of world )

Ishq junoon jab hadh se badh jaaye - 2
Haste haste aashiq suli chadh jaaye
Ishq ka jaadu sara chadha kara bole - 2
Khoob laga lo pehre raste rab khole
Yahi ishq di marzi hain
Yahi rab di marzi hain
Yahi ishq di marzi hain
Yahi rab di marzi hain
Tere bin jeena kaisa
Haan Khudgarzi hi
Tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main
Ho ri ha ri ho gayi main
Teri deewani deewani - 4

Addi shouted Sir …But in fraction of seconds Geet came in front of Maan.n Bullet hit Geet in stomach

He main rang rangeeli deewani - 2
Ke main albeli main mastani
Gaaun bajaaun sabko rijhaaun
He main dila zaram se begaani
Ke main deewani main deewani
Tere naam se jee loon tere naam se marr jaaun
Tere jaan ke sadle mein kuchh aaisa kar jaaun
Tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main
Ho ri ha ri ho gayi main
Teri deewani deewani
Teri deewani deewani
Teri deewani deewani
Teri deewani deewani...

Police came n they had arrested all... fight was over..But in that they didn't notice some body became target in this ..but Geet became target.Before she fell Maan held her in his arms.people all around gathered now.

Geet: Maan ( she said jst this n became unconscious)

Maan: yeh to wahi ladki hai…(he looked at her arm..which was on her stomach)

Her face was now in front of Maan uncoverd..He was thinking he had met her some where..but where didn't remember.But this was not time to discuss things he took Geet in her arms..n start running toward his car…

Sham Lal came running….He was searching for Geet .Lookin at crowd he came there

Sham Lal : Geet baby ( he shouted )

Maan knew Sham Lal as Sham Lal came with him three to four times to drive for him .

Maan: Sham Lal…Geet baby ( he tried to link them two)

Sham Lal : Maan Sir aap..aur kya hua Geet baby ko ? (shamlal had tears in eyes)

Maan: Yeh Geet ( Maan thought) Sham Lal…hurry up we hav no time.

Addi informed ..Ram about this

Midway Maan got call from Ram

Ram: Maan Geet ko le kar aap university hospital pahuncho…I hav made all arrangements there ..we r coming….

Maan said yes they reached University hospital on same road…where whole staff waitin for Geet….coz Ram was one trustee n share holder of that University

loved it

All the parts are just wonderful

Awesome
The most awaited part was just wonderful with the song..perfect..
Just loved it the love that geet has that she came between the bullet and it was fantastic
Beautifully written
Do continue soon.
Thanks for the pm

I loved the song and it very well suited fro the situation , Hope geet is fine and also want to see maan and geet's confrontation. update soon.

Awesome updates...

Hey buddies sorry if I not pressed lik button for u..but u gav such a wonderful response that I m in high spirits

nice and thanks for the PM.

wow great awesome
giving more parts at one stretch amazing...
eagerly waiting for the next one...

awsome but i really hope ki geet thik ho eagerly waiting for next update jab geet batye maan ko ki vo aisa jyun jar rahi hai ya maan ouche geet se ki vo aisa kyun kar rahi hai