NEW MG FF : THE X EFFECT: Thread 1 - Page 34

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oh no...what will maan do now...

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PART 11


'Geeet!',he shouted as he marched into the library breaking the silent atmosphere. Geet saw him but pretended to ignore. He came in and furiously held her by arm. He pinned her to the wall between the shelves and moved closer. Geet luked at him shocked. She never xpected him to make a physical attack with her. As the silence prevailed,he pressed himself more on her as if demanding an answer. Her chest was brushing against his in an errotic rhythm which made his effect on her evident. But both of them were too busy to notice the proximity.






Maan: how dare U,huh? U lied to me! U made fun of my friendship! If only you were a boy,i would have knocked your nose by now! And u know wat, i can even stoop low to tame you but...mind U! Dont push me ever or you will regret Geet!

Geet couldn't reply as she was crushed under his body-weight. She kept staring at him. Both of them were having a furious eye-lock.
Mahiii(the serious mix with Maan bgm!!)

Meanwhile Mira intervened.
Mira: take it easy Maan. It was just 4 fun!

Maan(leaving Geet): fun! Aj se pehle jo bhi pranks the tum logo ke usey to mene bhi 'fun' ke sense me hi liya (staring at Geet) lekin aj..aj to tumne hadd(limit) hi paar kar li. Mera bas chale to tumhe...leave it! I have never seen such a low person like you, Geet! And i am goin to withdraw my nomination NOW!

By then NT,Tasha and group had arrived. They were extremely happy seeing Maan's anger for Geet.
NT: Well said Maan. This girl deserves nothing better.

Geet now pushed Maan aside and sprang upon NT.
Geet: oye madam,how dare you talk between Maan and me? (luking at Maan) and you Mr. Khurana! I have no dreams of honouring you as chairman. But yes,i wanted to teach this vamp a lesson. Just a trump card in your name! Lekin ha shayad me galat thi. I thot we have a thing in common,u know like equal wavelength and you would enjoy this also but... Fine!

Now,her very first line melted away all his anger. She didn't like someone else between them. And did she say they have a thing in common! Its so naive of her,that she actually xpressed wat she felt. She was just being genuine and honest and he suspected her to be a cheat. Maan really felt guilty. He wanted to hug her and apologize for his rude behaviour.But then, things wont go the way we want.
Maan was brought out of his thots as she snapped at NT,
Geet: dont think that you are goin to win NT! Once the results are announced, you will cry!

Maan suppressed his smile seeing her tigress avatar.

NT: Lets see who's gonna cry. If Maan withdraws,i will be elected unanimously. Cmon Maan,lets go.

She dragged Maan with her. But his eyes were fixed on Geet who lukd at him painfully.

BArch Lecture hall:
It was an empty room except the three girls sitting at a corner.
Mira: kya zarurat thi Geet?



Pinky:faltu ke pange hone he
Mira: kya tha dialogue 'once the results are announced,u will cry!'
Geet: wo to bas mene us scene ko end karne ke liye ek punch line maara tha!
Pinky: punch line ki bachchi!
Mira: tujhe kya zarurat thi?
Pinky: ab to naak katne se rhe!
Geet: arey yaar,already jo hua wo kam he ki tum dono mujhe taunt maar rahe ho?

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NT sat next to Maan. She kept the 'nomination withdrawl form' in front of him. Maan kept staring at the form. He seemed to be lost in his own world. Ofcourse,how could he forget those painful eyes as he walked away.

NT(moving closer to Maan): waise Maaan.. they would say that something is goin on between us..

Maan still lost..
NT: I mean..thats why u backed out! Ab bolne wale to kuch bhi bolenge.We will just accept it silently. Why would we react to such people?

Guilt was eating Maan. He was just sittin. next to NT but he felt like he was cheating on Geet.
Seeing Maan lost in his thots,
NT: Maan..sign it.

Her voice brought him out of his trance.
Maan: no NT! I wont!

He tore the withdrawl form.

NT( shocked) : but why?
Maan: After all,this is the first time when MIT is goin to get a chairMAN. Then why should i let it go. Lets just take it as a friendly match NT

He shook his hands and left behind a defeated NT.
Maan went out lookingfor Geet in the library and to the lecture hall. He was having a smile on his face. He felt so good. Its the first time in his life he had changed his decision for someone else. The Maan Singh Khurana,who didn't even compromise for his mom has done that now! That too for a girl! Is she just a girl or his girl? Crazy Maan! Wat r u thinking? First of all find that Chutki!

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Edited by madhubala123 - 13 years ago
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aww...wonderful part!!!!Maan iz lookin 4 his chutki...;-)))
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How come only geet and group plays pranks on maan..? Ye toh one-sided ho gaya na... Bechara maan hamesha phas jaatha hai...

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