NEW MG FF : THE X EFFECT: Thread 1 - Page 36

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part
loved it dear
cont soon
sorry, like button not working
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesme update..
Thank god maaneet took back hs decision to with draw hs nominatn..waitng 4 next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh I love this story totally...
please please update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update. wow liked Maan and Geet. poor NT
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
BEAUTIFUL UPDATE
Fabulous
Geet gave her explanation to maan...
Luved the way she answered Nt back... Nt shud deserve it...
Listening to Geet Maan actually felt sorry for his behaviour ...

he is guilty... wat more can we ask for???
Now wat will happen???

Continue Soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome dear!!!!!!!! loved it...dekhte hai aage kya hoga...😉 well dey always find ways to fight wid each other...😆 plz cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey great update..loved the line said by pinky"dialogue ki bacchi"...even geet and maan unknown feeling for each other was felt thru their dialogue...continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: renjini263

Awesome dear!!!!!!!! loved it...dekhte hai aage kya hoga...😉 well dey always find ways to fight wid each other...😆

plz cont soon

Originally posted by: diyachill

hey great update..loved the line said by pinky"dialogue ki bacchi"...even geet and maan unknown feeling for each other was felt thru their dialogue...continue soon

Thank U for comments...😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 12

Maan stood at the entrance of the lecture hall panting.He saw her sitting in a corner with that little gang of hers. She was pale,upset forseeing her insult perhaps.

He heard her friends consoling her,
Mira: its ok. Forget it. Ab hostel chalte he.. Aa na
Pinky: ha Geet. Yeha betne se kya hoga?
Geet (snapped): kaha na! Nhe aana mujhe.JUST LEAVE ME ALONE!

It was he who replied to her,' Aisey kaisey? U would go on doin weird things and people cant react'

She stared at him and lukd away. She knew very well that it wasnt his fault. She had broken his trust at the first place but..does that mean he could shout at HER? NO! ( Her ego shouted) And how dare he walked out with that b**** NT! Wait! 'tenu ki faraq penda Geet?(why r u bothered?) Bhaad me jaye!'

Mira's voice broke her thots.
Mira: Maan,plz. Lets get over with this. We just did it for fun..

Maan indicated her to stop with his commanding eyes. This irritated Geet further. His audacity to cut her friend!

Before she could react,
Maan: umm..i just came to say that..if Geet wants to have fun at my cost why would i have a problem,huh?




The trio lukd at him shockd.

Maan: wat? I said i am not withdrawing the nomination!
Mira: really?

Maan's eyes were fixed on Geet: yeah!
Geet jumped up in xcitement. Mira and Pinky hugged each other. Geet ran to him and kissed him tight on his cheek. He was about to lose his balance by her weight. Mira and Pinky stopped shouting and watched the scene jaw-dropped.

An excited Geet ran out howling and whistling leaving behind a dumbfounded Maan. She just kissed him and that too in front of her buddies! Cool Maan! This was way too easy than what he had xpected. Otherwise girls and their tantrums! But she ain't a girl,typical specimen! However, he was still in shock.
Mira: Maan..
Maan:hmm?
Mira: wo.. (she raised her dupatta near his cheek)
Maan: kya?
Mira: lip stick..
Maan blushed as the girls giggled. He left the classroom rubbing his cheek. As he walked through the alley he saw her running all around replacing his posters and banners. He smiled and was about to leave when she called him.
Geet(called out): Maan, kal jaldi aana
Maan:ok

Even if she hadn't askd,he would have reached earlier. But this was a better escape. Geet had already gathered a large number of students. She invited him in the middle. She casually took a garland and put it around his neck. Maan gulped. Was he day-dreaming? First she kissed,now garland..wat if one day.. Maan control ur thots! She is just a good friend nothing else. Meanwhile Geet was busy in giving a 'jhakaas' speech for Maan.Even politicians would fail in front of her buttery cheesy lines. And she concluded,'so please vote for Maan! Remember,the name is Maan Singh Khurana'

Wow his name never sounded so sweet.He just stood there admiring her as if he were her toy.

NT was watching all these from a distance.She didn't like the way Maan was lukin at her. There was a spark in his eyes. She stomped into the canteen angrily. Sasha noticed. She went to her with a cup of tea.
Sasha: NT, U luk worried
NT: Wo Geet...She intervenes in my life always! I have never seen failure in my life. And bcoz of her i am gonna lose this election!
Sasha: chill NT! The elections are yet to come.
NT: Its just not that. Maan! The way he luks at her, its like he would eat her!

Sasha: There u go! U got the solution to ur problem
NT: but how?
Sasha: U have to figure it out!
NT(evil smirk): GEET! I will get her out of my way.

Tasha : but why would you do that? Election me to Maan he na
NT : If Maan feels that its not good for Geet he wouldnt even think about election!!!


Evening KM:

Maan was doin his work-outs. Among the flewing curtains he saw her reterating form. He ran towards the direction. She was standing there in a yellow suit.





He went closer just inches away from her. Her errotic heartbeats turned him on... The heat from his sewaty bare chest was building aching to feel her touch. He fanned her earlobe and was about to touch her when his phone rang.
WTH he was dreaming!! Maan seriously consult a psychatrist. Irritated he picked up the phone.
He took out all his frustration on poor Adi.
Maan : Wat the... ADI!!! Wats with this HP project??? So much delay. I dont need any xcuses. Clear the place and start the work within next 48 hrs. Got it!!

He picked the towel aand wiped his sweaty muscular body. Before leaving the room he luked around making sure, "was he dreaming or she was here for real??"
He shook his head grinning and went away.
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PRECAP: Geet's Condition one:check!!! 😉

Updatin in a hurry. Don't know how is it.
Waiitng for your response 😳

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