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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ammu5

hi, jst now i finised reading this ff. its amazing n fabuls . plz do continue soon n add me to ur PM list.


Thank you...welcome to this story :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

Helllooo,


Hope you had a nice break.

Loved the update... so separate entries in each of their lives ? Wow so Rasika and Rahul are in. Good good ... lets see how these cope with the entries in their own way ... I am sure it'll be unique..
Lol...I hope you do find them unique.

Loving this Vardaan guy...the background was really fresh and love his confident attitude..
More on Vardaan will come up soon...hope you like him...just as you guys love Sameera :)

Oh yaah...loved Teji and Anupama - can army guys really be sooo romantic? Wow... havent known any in real life and cant see that in Maan yet... I am wondering how he'll turn out once he's married !! Oh and loved that Anupama is a Bengali - I am one too. So incase you need any help with translation, you can write to me 😆
Thank you for the help. I will surely bother you henceforth😆
The couple is still this romantic. I have often blushed in their company, even though I have known them from childhood.



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update! Well written


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Are you updating anytime soon? Update soon 😡, am done stalking.😆
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Chapter 19
Wish for the Stars

(January 24, 1981...)
(Khurana Kothi...)
"Acha, 27 nu Geet da janmdin hai," a delighted Savitri asked Rano, whom she was speaking to on the telephone. "This is wonderful news, Rano jee. I must come and wish her..." She paused to hear the reply. "Ohho! It doesn't matter if there will be no celebrations. We are family now. No formality required Rano jee. Bitto da janmdin hai, I must come and wish her myself."

Another ten minutes of happy conversation and a very happy Savitri kept the telephone down. A chance to go meet Geet. How fortunate! If only Maan was here.

"Veerji aa gayyye."

Savitri got a jolt of shock as she heard Iqbal squeal. Has Baby gone mad or is Maan truly here? She hurried out to the main hall. And stood amazed at seeing her son in his battle fatigues and his rucksack on his back.

Waheguruji, tussi inni chhetti mann gaye. I wish I had asked for something else. And in case you are still listening, please see that each one of my sons have a bunglow and a car of their own. That would be all.

"Sat Sri Akal Chaiyyiji."

"Huh...Sat Sri Akal puttar," she blessed Maan as he bent to take her blessings, "But Kakke how come..."

"Chaiyyiji, my RSO course starts from 1st of Feburary, so I thought I would come home for a few days before leaving."

"Bahut changa kitta Kakke. Mera Kakka kinna samjhadaar hai. You go freshen up, I will get you a nice cup of tea," she cupped his cheeks.

Maan gave his mother an incredulous look. She was definitely upto something. Because ever since Nayantara Di had turned fifteen, Chaiyyiji had not even stepped into the kitchen. First Nayantara, and after her marriage Tisha and Amrit. With a line of daughters and Lachhi to take away the responsibilities of the kitchen off her hands, Savitri limited herself to supervision and ordering them around. A right she considered earned.

"Koi nahi Chaiyyiji," Maan started towards his room, "Amrit has already gone to get me a cup. I will go freshen up."

"Very good Kakke, I will go see Amrit makes a wonderful cup of tea for you. With ginger and elaichi..."

"Don't worry Chaiyyiji," Maan halted in his tracks, "Amrit makes the best tea in this house. You please relax. And Chaiyyiji..."

"Haan Kakke..."

"Whatever is it, that you want me to do," he turned around and gave Savitri a pointed look, "could we please discuss it after dinner. I would not wish an argument to disrupt my dinner. Amrit has promised she would make kadhi pakora tonight."

With that he swung his rucksack back on his shoulder, marched off to his room; leaving a stunned Savitri behind.

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(Late evening...)
(Handa Haveli...)
"Good evening Papaji!"

Mohinder looked at his three angels and one little monkey, who stood at the door to greet him.

Geet hopped over to him, "Papaji, how was you day today..."

"Papaji, have a glass of water," Meera offered

Sameera came forward and held his hand, "Papaji, I have already made tea for you..."

"Papaji, here are your slippers," Lucky held them up for him to see.

"Good evening all of you," Mohinder beamed at them and their , "is the dinner ready?"

"Jee Papaji."

"Alright then. Captaan Sa'ab, khana pesh kitta jaye." And then I will uncover what all of you are planning.

It was not that his children did not do this sincerely. It was a daily occurrence in their home. It was a habit in them he cherished. Every evening, even before he stepped into the threshold of his house, their smiling faces would wash away every vestige of stress away. But today their smiles held a tinge of conspiracy.

They were grinning from one ear to another. Sameera wasn't teasing Meera, Meera was alert and active, Lucky wasn't troubling Geet. And Geet. Her eyes held a gleam that he could not comprehend.

This only meant one thing. Movies!

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(Khurana Kothi...)
"It's nine already and Sardarji isn't home yet. He has no sense of responsibilty towards us. Always work first," Savitri grumbled as the whole family was gathering in the dining hall for the dinner.

Maan raised his head from the board game he was playing with Vikrant and Iqbal hearing his mother complain about his father. His mellow mood soured in an instant. "Where is Yash, Chaiyyiji?"

"Yash? He must be on his way home. You know his cricket club takes up so much of his time."

"Cricket Club," Maan raised a eyebrow at that, "the same one where they play for few minutes and then pass the evening in eating, discussing girls, playing stupid pranks and fighting over silly bets? Atleast Darjee is working hard for the family."

"Maan! How can you talk about your brother like that? You know how passionate Yash is about cricket. He is not like the other boys who are all about girls, betting..."

"Chaiyyiji, Yash veerji is also like them. My friend says that her sister Pooja is his girlfriend," Iqbal spoke up.

"Shut Baby. Maybe your friend and her sister are stupid girls who throw themselves at boys. Why blame my son? My Yash is very sincere. You should encourage him Kakke. After all didn't you always say sports build character?" Savitri threw a taunt at him.

Hurt clouded his eyes as the memory of his childhood came alive. "Cricket is not a sport Chaiyyiji, it's a game. A game played for lesiure. There is no athleticism or character building involved in it. My hockey was never good enough for you to approve, but Yash's wasteful ways in the name of cricket becomes a matter of pride for you?"

Savitri gave herself a mental scold for not being careful with her words. This won't do Savitri. You want Maan in an agreeable mood, so that he listens to you. And you have gone ahead and done the exact opposite. "You are right Kakke," she cast her eyes down, "I should be more careful with Yash. Let him come home. I will speak to him myself. You don't worry about it. Come lets have our dinner..."

"You guys carry on," Maan spoke dispassionately, "I will wait for Darjee." Knowing his family, he knew they would do exactly like he said. Carry on. After living in hostel, and then being a part of the Army way of life, eating togther was always seen as a sign of unity, bonding with your juniors, showing respect to your seniors.

And wasn't a family supposed to eat together? He had always wished that his mother had inculcated this habit with the kids. Except on some occassion or function, they never dined together as a family. His father being too detached with the household matters, had never cared much for it, even though Maan knew that it was something that really made Ajaipal happy. But his policy of not interferring with Savitri's domain in the house, had made him silent about such matters. Even if it was something he really liked, Ajaipal would never ask.

Seeing such conditions of his house, the thoughts that have been plaguing him ever since his engagement, came back to plague him. He was to bring a wife in this house. This house! Her family was full of love. Everyone was so close to each other. No ego issues, no hassles of pride, no stereotyping of roles and positions. Such a stark contrast to his own house. The thought made him feel like running away.

And the same thought made him want to be with that family even more. With Geet.
Will they embrace him within their family just like they all held each other close? Will he find a similar place in their lives? Bauji and Ma have been nothing but loving towards him. But was it only because he was their future son-in-law? Will they love him as a son? He had seen the laughter, the liveliness in their home. Will he be a part of that laughter?

Will she laugh in the same manner with him? Will they share a close bond or will they only play a role for the society? Will she talk to him like a friend or speak to him only as and when a spouse requires to?

Will she find happiness with him? A hard and strict man like him. Will his harshness wither away her softness? How much will she adjust for him, his house, his family? How much will he change for her? When he knew that he was firmly set in his ways. Will she find him so hard that she would never be able to nurture any form of affection for him?

It was so easy to keep away such thoughts in Roorkee. His work kept his mind occupied. But the moment he stepped into his house, the cold aura that enveloped him made him long for the warmth he had experienced in the Handa Haveli.

He needed distraction.

"...so I was speaking to Rano jee today..."

Geet. Should I speak to Geet? Will that be acceptable behavior?

"...and then she said it was Geet's birthday on..."

He needed to shift his focus.

"...I think we should go. It would be nice..."

But this house held nothing that could hold his attention favorably.

"...and its great you are here..."

He would soon find a fault and start loosing his patience over his failure to correct it. I bet Geet never frets over such things.

"...take a gift..."

No, stop thinking about Geet. She had become like a starthat becokned him. A star upon whom he wishes to wish upon.

"...you will come along..."

"Yes I will."

"That is fantastic! I will telephone Rano jee first thing in the morning. We should buy her something nice..."

Maan jerked out of his thoughts when Savitri patted him on his back. She was litterally jumping in her seat.

He scowled at his mother's antics only to realize a moment later just what he had agreed to. Bloody hell!! How was he to endure that?
He now realized why it was taught to be alert in Army. Fauji sada sawdhaan, varna khatre mein jaan. [A soldier is always alert, or he is at risk of being hurt.]

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(Handa Haveli...)
"It's a family movie, Papaji."

"dhishum-dhishum vi hai."

"And it has Hema Malini. She even sings a song for her father."

"dhishum-dhishum-dhishum vi hai."

"And your favorite hero, Dev Anand."

"dhishum- dhishum-dhishum-dhishum vi hai."

"Papaji, please can we watch the movie? Consider this as my birthday gift. I won't ask for anyhing else," Geet pleaded on behalf of her siblings, "...this year," she added after a thought.

For all the freedom Mohinder Lal Handa bestowed upon his children, there were two things he always held restrictions on. The girls were not allowed outings with friends, unless the sisters went together. And watching television. Specially movies and the few English shows that were shown on television. They watched television, but only when Mohinder was away at work. Mohinder felt that watching television killed the time he spent with his family. So, the girls were allowed to watch television but only in afternoons.

But occasionally they would find that a movie was to be telecast at night and then they would coax their father into permitting them to watch it. Like this time, when the girls found that the coming Sunday a super-hit movie was about to be shown on DD National.

"What is the name of the movie?" Mohinder asked looking at their pleading faces.

"Johnny Mera Naam," Geet blurted.

"dhishum- dhishum-dhishum..."

"Bas kar Lucky," Meera clamped his mouth shut.

"The one that has Pran in it?"

"Haanji Papaji," Sameera replied, "another one of your favorite."

"Fine, we will watch it. Now off to sleep all of you."

"Thank you Papaji," they all screamed and hugged their father tight.

"Kakku," Mohinder called Geet as everyone was leaving for their rooms.

"Jee Papaji?"

"Puttar, what do you wish to have for your birthday this year?"

"But Papaji," Geet looked confused, "I just promised I will ask nothing else if you allow us to watch the movie."

"Mere Kakke-pattake," Mohinder laughed fondly at his daughter, "do you think this is all that your father will give you? I can give you my life if you ask me. This was one simple movie. Such small wishes I can fulfill without any effort on my part. Its your birthday Geet. Ask your father for the stars, and see if I don't get them for you."

He leaned and kissed her forehead, praying to God that his daughter always smiles the way she was doing now. Babaji, just like you have made an instrument to make her life bright and happy, I hope Maan becomes the shining star of her life henceforth.

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So what would Maan get for her? Any guesses?!!😆

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Chapter 20 - Page 79

We only Part to Meet again



Edited by jazzerette - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
First... I'm finally the First ...😆
And second! I loved this update. This update once again showed how caring and thoughtful Maan is. And am I the only one who loves Maan and Savitri Ji's interactions, they always make me grin even if mother-son duo is having arguments.😆 And @ Savitri Ji not going in kitchen. Really?😲 Had my mom personally know Savitri Ji, she must have sent me to her for training.😆
And then of course the Dhishum Dhishum part... it was sooo cute...😆 And Mohinder Ji's love for his daughters is adorable. And I said it before., and am saying it again he is my fav. character besides Maan and Geet.⭐️
So Maan Babu is gonna attend Geet's Birthday,😲 am expecting Maan-Rahowl face off in Birthday update,😆 tell me if am expecting too much.😆 Maan to kick Rahowl a** and leaving Geet wondering what was that all about.😆 And before you ask why I want this, 🤔 its... after reading this update I once again feel Geet should be protected from all evilness even before that reach her. She is such a pure soul, I dont want her knowing about perv Rahowl and manipulating Ruby.😕 I want my Geet's guarding angel to protect her. 😆
Happy Birthday Geet in advance...🤗

PS: Gift is driving me nuts.😆 What is he going to buy for Geet, assuming if he is going to buy?😆


Edited by Devil-By-Birth - 13 years ago
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First..
I loved the update!!
It was bittersweet. There were places where I laughed out loud ad there were also places where something just pricked my heart. One of the best updates again.
To begin with it was a great opening with Geet's upcoming b'day. And Savitri ji's planning. 😆Did I tell you I like savitri Ji's brains? Yep I do really.
BTW I feel fortunate for not coming before Savitri ji yet.😆
Kitchen ka rasta tak nahi pata mujhe😆🤣
I am gone. As in G.O.N.E!!😆
Did I tell you I like Maan's no-nonsense business?
God! Should I tell you I love love loved this line?
"Whatever is it, that you want me to do could we please discuss it after dinner. I would not wish an argument to disrupt my dinner. Amrit has promised she would make kadhi pakora tonight."
Pairo pona Maan ji😆
That line about sports was the one thing where I cringed. It's when someone rub your incapability of achieving your dreams on your face and I can understand how it feels. My respect for Maan multiplies for his collected answer.
You do realize I so want to read about Yash more. I like him already. Don't ask me the reasons. I like him.
And there was one more instance where something came to me like a full blow..
Dining with family..
It is what someone told me.. you know.
Then I didn't understand why was it so important? We dine together too. But there'd be a twist here. Me and Papa would be done even before Mum and Bro would begin.🤣
Ok I'm going off track again. Anyway so since we do it ever since my childhood, I don't see as a some task. 'Cause we are used to it. And hence when someone told me this.. I could not grasp the importance of such simple task totally. Maybe because the dumbo I am, or maybe 'cause I don't totally grasp the seriousness of the situation or simply being myself.. But now, when I read it... I get it. I bow down for the objectivity you have.
It surely makes sense now that the person is made based on the incidents he faced. No wonder Maan wants to dine together as family. I'm so sure this would happen in his future family you know. 😆
And the following dialogues where Maan was lost in his own thoughts..and Savitri Ji's coaxing..and Maan finally saying it aloud which he was telling more to himself.. BRILLIANT!
It may be a true story but the exact moments, the logic and the screenplay of the story shows the gem of a writer that you are. Dare you tell me once again that You aren't good at writing. I sure am going to chew your head off.😆
BTW I liked Maan's musings.. His doubts, his thoughts, his wondering if they'd accept him as a family member, if he'd be loved just like others and moreover wondering if Geet would laugh with him the way she does with everyone.. why did my eyes moistened at that I don't know. But I tell you I loved it.
"It's a family movie, Papaji."

"dhishum-dhishum vi hai."

"And it has Hema Malini. She even sings a song for her father."

"dhishum-dhishum-dhishum vi hai."

"And your favorite hero, Dev Anand."

"dhishum- dhishum-dhishum-dhishum vi hai."

I was grinning like a fool. Lucky is such a cutie pie. Aww. One more favorite Handa of mine..
All and all the update was beautiful. Now am waiting for birthday bash.😃
And for some weird reason, this update came as surprise with no Rahul and Rasika. I expected them but they aren't mentioned and of course I am glad for that😆
I dont know why though😆

And this time some serious talk, apart from my mindless blabbering..
I understand Maan and now it makes sense of whatever you told me the other day. I always liked Maan, respected Maan but this is just increasing exponentially.. I always used to say I am in Geet team.. but for a change I'd say I'm in maaneet team.




If you read between the lines.. I know you'd say I'm hopeless. But truth to be told Maan is also loved and respected by everyone. In fact someone loves him more than their own life and I can see that. So, I would always be in Geet's team.
Anyway even Maan is in Geet's team isn't it?😛



BTW I just realized I can never do some serious talk🤣


Edited by --Shika-- - 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: jazzerette


Lol...I find Teji-Pammi adorable too😆 Specially Teji ji😉😉 Pata nahi kahan hain aajkal ... *sigh*

You seem to have a lot of faith in Maan...kya baat hai?!! Maska???😛

As for Vardaan...disgusting right? But think of the person who went through them🤢

Rahhhwoolll...wait and watch...I would like to see your reaction later when his part comes in play😈


Mein aur maska? Tauba!! Na baba na. Waise I think I know Maan better.. I mean I can understand well kind of.. 'cause I know someone exactly like Maan you see😆
Teji bhai! Sigh I miss my viju as well.😭
Oh that's why i said I already like vardhan and btw Rahul.. hmm I need a reason to hate anyone and I didn't et it yet but somehow I am sure I would get it soon now that u mentioned..
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Kya hua Bhabzzz? 😆 "Kyun Udaas Phirtey Ho Sardion Ki Shaamun Mey?" 😆
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Kya hua Bhabzzz? 😆 "Kyun Udaas Phirtey Ho Sardion Ki Shaamun Mey?" 😆


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