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seemamary

@seemamary

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Posted: 13 years ago

#401

Hope geet chooses to stay with maan as he loves her alot and also decides to start a new beautiful married life with him

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chingaming

@chingaming

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Posted: 13 years ago

#402

insanely brilliantly awesome =D

loved every single update =D

update soon =D

xoxo!

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undercoverhappy

@undercoverhappy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#403

Thank you for the update. He kissed her thank God!

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Look forward to reading more infact I do hope you will posting an update today.

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BluntlySpeaking

@BluntlySpeaking

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Posted: 13 years ago

#404

hmmm...so finally, geet has woken up to reality!

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Wela

@Wela

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Posted: 13 years ago

#405

Maan ...sahi kar rahe ho...Waiting for the next update...

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Hima

@Ramhari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#406

Amazing parts.
I felt both of them are trying their best for their relation to work out.
The dilse movie and comparison was brilliant.
Geet is definitely trying and it must be so hard for her with Channi around.
Maan on the other hand is getting impatient day by day .
Finally he voiced out all his frustration.
Wonder what Geet's reaction would be.
Waiting for the next part

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hamini_yash

@hamini_yash

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Posted: 13 years ago

#407

amazing part, I liked his question, why she is staying with him if she doesnot want to share her life with him?... Keep writing. Nice song

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 13 years ago

#408

Beautiful update dear... loved the flow of emotions..

You have amazing writing skills.. & always manage to transport the reader into the world of your characters...

There was everything in the update ... Maan's agony, restraint, anger, & fight with self to make her understand her own dilemmas... Loved the way he confessed his love to her.. she really did push him to the edge till he had to come out of it in the open.. though he knew it will hurt her but yet how long can he too endure. I'm just a fan of how u make us to relate with your character's views..

Geet too needs to come out of her comfort zone & has to realise that she can't keep taking Maan's understanding lighlty.. as he said he knows that she too loves him then why tie down both of them from going further with their guilts & confusions..

To get love in life & treasure it is very much difficult should be handled delicately as each one is not that lucky ... its a two way processes both have to make an effort for love to blossom.. as well allow the other to grow... Accepting that the person loves you just as you are with your follies as a whole is something very difficult & that what causes you to push & hurt him.. as somewhere you know that he has given you the right.. but yet at the same time not so much that the other is unable to overcome the frustrationn it brings along

I don't know how much sense have i made but yet...

loved the update... Maan has really played his side very well.. afterall a lawyer... now it depends on Geet on what she does & how she percieves it to take her relation with him...

continue soon ...

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aanyakunat

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Posted: 13 years ago

#409

wow! i love this story... u write so well...

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#410

So sorry that I am late...I was finding words to appreciate the chapter 11 when Friday got over and I dont come to IF on weekends...

I came today to find a new chapter added. Can I say how amazing the last two updates have been? I find their relationship passionate - not only from physical but emotional sense as well..

I'll come back to write more :)

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