SS: Dear Diary... Part 14 Upd 11/30 Pg 66

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richiiiii

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Posted: 13 years ago

#391

oh my god hasini , i absolutely LOVED the update

it was sensuous, warm, intimate, carried a melancholic air about it which made it all the more exciting...

i just LOVE your writing hasini...its so addictive

plz plz update soon...

*off to read it again*

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Nishttha Nath

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Posted: 13 years ago

#392

it was sensuous, and very very amazing !

will be waiting for the update :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#393

Honestly, the only reason I'm not commenting regularly is because your updates render me speechless, I have no words to describe who brilliantly you write.

You write with utmost detail and care, and probably are the best at doing so in this forum. Each word is perfectly chosen for each scene, and they all leave a mark.

You're a very mature writer, not only was this scene sensuous I could feel the tension between the two - not only sexual.

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504887

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Posted: 13 years ago

#394

awesome updt
just luvd it
finally maan forwarded their relation beyond d sharing of cookies n milk
awww he kissed her but at such a weak moment he seeked her will which made her conscious
finally he being a man he was impatient n frustrated as well after giving enough signs to geet abt his luv 4 her
hope geet realizes her luv by now & confesses it to him
cont soon!

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shalini_s

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Posted: 13 years ago

#395

beautifully written... so now that the ultimatum is served.. waiting for Geet to act on it..

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Krishna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#396

Loved the update! You have an amazing way with words! I cannot wait to read more. Thank you for the update!

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rania786

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Posted: 13 years ago

#397

👏One of the best FFs I have across ... really really love the story, especially the characterization of Maan and Geet ... I have been following this for a while but today you shamed me into commenting! lol ... not just coz of your post but because of the lovely update ... plz plz plz continue soon!!

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Rupa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#398

very interesting.. got to give it to you... you have the talent for it...great job again... now that the ball is in geet's courtlets see how she plays the game now..

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640638

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Posted: 13 years ago

#399

No katti please. Obviously, loved the updates and the moving of the story forward. Loved the Dil Se reference. I like the simplicity of Preeti who lives life in a non-angsty way whereas the angst of Meghna is appealing in itself.

On vacation for T'giving. Will be back after the re-read.

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Antares

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Posted: 13 years ago

#400

Brilliant update! Words are falling short to describe the way you write... plain beautiful! About time Geet faced the reality that she cannot remain evasive about their future anymore. Can't wait to know how this unfolds... Do continue soon.