SS: Dear Diary... Part 14 Upd 11/30 Pg 66 - Page 15

Originally posted by: Starry_night

Just caught up with the last 4 chapters. It's a very engaging SS. Loving it!

Maan read her diary where she wrote about the pull she feels towards him . Must I say, some of her entries are pretty funny and Maan is intrigued by her.

Geet too isn't behind, she's seeking information about him from Nakul and also silently observes him. Interesting.

Maan called Channi to stay with them. I'm glad things are fine between the sisters. Maan just heard the 1st half of the conversation missing out on the most crucial bit. Good that Geet is free of her guilt after her talks with Channi. I'm loving the way this is progressing...wonder what will happen next. Do continue soon.

Lastly, am glad you turned it into a SS.

You are back :)

The most important thing, that only two people have commented so far: She hasn't written about her attraction for him in the diary. That is the key.

Oh! yes, she has turned out into Jugnu mama 😆

One more thing, Maan didn't call Channi to come stay with them. Channi has run away from home and you will know the details of it in the upcoming parts.

Maan...is a dumb ass. That's all I can say. Sometimes too much space is also not good, you see.
Glad you are liking it. Thank you for writing back.

Originally posted by: pushpi

It's hard to say who is wrong and in more pain.

Oi...Chup baito. Neither one is right or wrong, because these are the matters of the heart. 😊

Originally posted by: punjabi.princes

awesome updates!

was scared about Channi's re-entry but she did no harm

hope for some growth in their relationship soon

even more talking or sharing a room would be a big step lol

con't soon

Thank you :)

Channi will bring in her share of her trouble, alright? But not in the way as normally expected.

Let's see how they want to proceed? 😊

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Ye dono

They shuld speak to each other atleast

Ek diary ke sahare assumptions bana raha hai aur ek avein hi

I will ask them if they want to do so over milk and cookies...Ok? Well, I just gave you the preview. 😆

Thanks for stopping by afsha.

Originally posted by: Onir

Good 1... atleast now Geet has somewhat unburdened herself of the guilt... as well as confessed her inner feelings... its really difficult sometimes to come in terms with your own dark desires.. & its your resistance thats makes it all the more unbearable... but glad to know that she has brought out her feelings into her conciousness out in the open atleast in front of her sis... when u speak it out it makes it more realistic... i suupose..

Loved the bonding between the two siblings.. Maan too had to hear only half of it...😡 ohh he missed out on something very important.. which could have saved him from the long drive😆

Good he too needs to understand its not always everthing he can understand about her only thru her diary... an individual has different facets to his life... all in all good update

waiting to know what holds further for these two souls... who are yet in some misconceptions of their own...

Yes you are right on about facing one's demons. Exactly what Geet talks about too when Maan confronts her for the first time.

Oh! Don't judge Maan yet...you will know what he was looking for in the diary soon 😉
Glad the story is on par to keep you on the hooks

Thanks for writing back.

Originally posted by: Ramhari

Looks like the sisters were having an argument about who was more guilty leaving Maan frustrated.
Maan too eavesdropped and heard only what was not necessary and missed all of the important confession.
I love these sisters bonding so so much.
Both of them are kind of guilt free now having come out clean with their confessions.
I wonder whether Geet will be able to confess the same to Maan
Waiting for the next part

Again, we are on the same page and exactly the sentiment I wanted to convey as for the sisters go.

Once again...Maan was just too quick to jump to conclusions. Either ways I won't blame him. After all he has given her enough space to let her come and talk to him too. What say?

Hmm! Geet confessing to Maan. Well if that is done, I won't have a story to tell gurl! 😆

Thanks for writing back.

Originally posted by: ninand

Hes reading in the diary, only moments for which words come easy and with spontaneous urgency. The man needs to read her more, and converse, before she morphs into two different images, and only one of them is real.

As for her, I understand her reluctance.. its not a trivial matter that she harbored an unhealthy attraction towards her would be brother-in-law, actually lost control enough to do something audacious in front of everyone(whatever the pretext might have been), and then had him leave her sister for her right in the mandap..

Yes, there's a lot more playing than mere yearnings.

I simply loved the line she addressed to her husband.. bourbon and milk ! sweet and desperately clueless at the same time. aww..

I wrote back much for this. Because you are the first one who read ahead of time, what I'm yet to write. 😊

THANK YOU :) Feels so good, when the essence of writing is caught by the reader.

Originally posted by: hamini_yash

Today I saw that you had posted index of your stories, I was happy too see all of them at one place. Then accidently I see this, how did I miss it? It was such a great relief to read my favourite writer's writing .

Eeeaaagerly looking forward for next update.

Bye

Thank you :)

That was the point...to make sure everyone knows what I'm working on. Oh! lord...I don't do well with such lofty compliments.

Thanks again.

Originally posted by: ucompleteme

Thanks for the fan fiction index Hasini. All your FFs are bookmarked already. 😊About this update, it feels like Geet got a chance to unburden her guilt and seek forgiveness from her sister. Still that is far aways from accepting to Maan how she feels for him. Maan, I can understand how he feels, from entering into a marraige for the sake of Dadima to finding himself as an object of attraction and the promise of that kiss which she said does not mean anything, its bound to be confusing. She gives him conflicting messages although he does not clearly state why he did what he did either. One step up and two steps back. Meeting in Manali, the location of the serials' hottest romance scenes...hmmm should I be expecting something?

You are welcome :)

Exactly the reason he is miffed with her denial, when she calls the kiss a promise and continue to claim that when it came to him, it didn't mean anything. Well we can't let Geet not make up for the kind of torment she gave Maan now...do we? 😆

The part about Maan not clearly stating his intentions in wedding Geet...I thought Part 3 covered it. There is a small flashback in part 7. Hopefully, that should fill in. Let me know, if it still doesn't sit well with you.

Romantic scenes...Gurl! They are the most difficult to write. I'm not sure if I want to go through that pain for a short story. Let's see.

Thanks for writing back.

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun

Well, Maan's frustration is justified but having heard Geet's confession, so is her guilt. I am glad she shared something with him which was not a part of whatz written in her diary. Thatz a good sign and I just hope this is just the beginning.

Glad you feel that way about Geet's state of emotions.

Oh! there is a reason, she said that...you will see.
This is definitely the beginning gurl!

Thank you :)