aparichit maaneet FF thread 4 pt30 pg6 - Page 4

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Arsheela thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi Muskaan

4 the another




and Plz
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
congrats on new thread n finaly ur updating...now u only hv 2 ffs...i wonder what new flavor r u going to introduce now...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I will be taking it little slowly.. like ab update a week types
plz bare with me.. until I get the momentum on this.. this part itself took me
a month to formulate.. I have the whole story in place.. it is just the scenes that is not falling in place..
hope it makes sense.
thanks a lot for motivating me...
its only because of u .. I could put together this part
~Aparichit~
30
They straighten themselves..when they heard thai ji calling for Geet. He kissed her lips one last time. She grind & bit her lips. He kissed her again.. tum asien mat karo mera saat. I will not be able to control myself. She smiled even more & slipped her fingers between his. Her other hand held his strong arm as they walked to main hall.

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Geet, ridzi & all ladies got together for the sangeet practice at the hall they booked. The choreographer worked with them for the different songs. They all waited for Maan for his bit. But he got held up like usual business stuff. The choreographer & every one waited for him. She tried calling him '
Geet ' every one is waiting for u
Maan ' thoda time lage ga, I have a meeting
Geet rolled her eyes ' aur kitna time lage ga
Maan ' give me some time..
he sounded so pr-occupied & lost.
She sighed & cut the call. she was lost again in her thoughts.. is he interested at all.. in our sangeet event.. common it is so so very special.. once in the life time..she pouts..
It was 9pm ..every one was getting restless. Geet looked at her phone & bit her lips in confusion whether to call him again or just leave. Slowly everyone began leave. Geet checked the lights, music system & turned dishearteningly to leave. ..only to land in his arms.


She panicked with the sudden contact with huge frame that almost blind her.. & soon realized it was where she belonged. Her hands slowly rested on his chest
sorry had so many meetings.. all of a sudden few clients showed up
she sweetly pouted sab wait karke challen gayen
aacha hain na.. his hands naughtily tucked around her waist crushing her into him.
She blushed & turned her back to him.
He kissed her wrapping his arms around her from back. She gasped feeling his warm lips lusciously playing around her shoulders. He began kissing her neck... the hairs of his beard brushed against her skin. He sunk his fingers into her soft slim fingers locking them pulling her still close to him.

They had to step apart when they heard some one walking towards the hall. He leaned closer for a deep kiss before letting her go. She shied & pulled on her duppata. The restlessness & silence was bit odd.. she tried to change it asking.. do u want hear the song we selected
he nodded still looking at her with desirous gaze
she blushed.. giving him the cds

ridz came in.. thank god u r finally here..
Maan whispered in her ears..u said sab challen gayen
she blushed looking down.
Ridz looked at them.. trying to understand ..then just left it..
Ridz ' Maan u really need to hear the song we selected for u
Maan replied in full attitude .. no..I have a song for her
she looked at him in shock.. this was business tycoon...maan singh Khurana.. who has no time for anything.. but he actually selected a song of her. so their sangeet did mean special to him.. she did mean special to him. she couldn't stop blushing.
Ridz asked him excitedly ' wats it?
Maan ' well u have to wait until sangeet..its special for my wife.
Ridz..hit her hand to geets arms teasingly.. oye..oye..
Geet looked down trying to hide the flush that burned her cheek.
Maan dropped them home. They couldn't share the good bye kisses thanks to ridz. Geet could read the restlessness & annoyance in his face. She giggled & made a sorry face. .. he angrily looked away.
The moment she reached her room she called him.
Maan I am really sorry
kyun
.. he pretended, like nothing happened
nahi wo
wo?
he fooled around.
Aap naraz nahi?
Nahi tho..
he lied
phir teehk hain.. she tried to change the topic
tumhe kyun laga ki main naraz hoon?
Kuch nahi.
How was she to explain that now. Did he actually not feel bad.. she got confused. Why did he looked annoyed then. Then suddenly she became angry.. he didn't miss their good bye kiss. ..main hi pagal ki tarah expect kar rahi thi.. aur miss kar rahi thi.. he was just making some odd faces for no reason & I am here like a fool feeling guilty.
U didn't tell me.. why u were saying sorry ..he teased yet again
kuch nahi.. good night.. she cute angrily cut the call
he laughed & called back
she made angry face pushed the phone away, finally answered the call when he called the 3rd time
mujhe aap se baat nahi karni.. I am too sleepy & tired after the practise
u r sleeping
..? he asked a innocent question
she looked up at babaji.. inhe aabhi meren sone se bhi problem hain
Maan shied ' tumhe neid ajayegi?
Haan ..main bahut tired hoon
.. she snapped.
Maan ' how will I sleep without ur good night kiss
her eyes popped open.
She blushed.. smiled.. & but her lower lips..
can I get my kiss now
her lips said no.. & she nodded
thats not fair.. he fought
tho aap naraz then..
he shied
lekin main kya karti
I don't know
aacha baba.. sorry
he kept quiet..
sorry kaha na
he was still quiet..
she blushed & kissed the phone..
he was still quiet..
she kissed it again feeling really shy...
he kissed back.. good night..
good night
she giggled.
precap
sangeet & wedding
-PREV PART 29-
Thanks a lot for all the beautiful comments & support
plz do continue to click like button & comment motivates me to write more
pms.. I am sorry.. I am bad with them..
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
res😃
Aparichit ki deewani is back on 1st😃
It felt so good to read it after sooo long...my obsession after TM😳
Read dreams today...on thread 11 abhi😉
kal test hai...me running off now
Edited by princess163 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36


The update is sweet
but Y u said k updates will less frequently

me

Asa maat karoo sweet heart
plz plz jaldi jali update dena

Love you
Edited by Arsheela - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
congrats on new thread

cutee maan & geet 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
well come bak wid unknown...lol
means aprachit
lvd d update
continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
Wow finally got to see ur upd. Loved it di.

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