-aparichit- THREAD 3

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Maan & Geet
he is 26yrs & she his 24yrs
they were to meet today for the very first ever time!!!
she was told this is a good alliance. The boy was a post graduate & was a young successful businessman.
He was told girl is sweet & well educated, good family background & currently an intern at Sanjeevani Hospital...
they met & blessing of their families they got engaged..now their new feelings develop as they learn more about eachother. ..their desires.their untold feelings.. their expectation.. & anticipation..their chup chup ke milna..rotna manana!!! as they enter into an eternal bond..

Aparichit is about two very normal person trying to fall in love with each other. With the best and most loving intentions they still fail to know & then some how know it. So many problems creep in. The resentments build. Communication thats when they know how to communicate. Trust fails.. first they need to trust. Rejection surfaces resulting in repression. Still magic of love sparks & booms an understanding that takes a long time to build. From aparichit to parichit!!! from his heart to hers!!!

Strangely it happens to all!!! yet we all wonder how it happened!!why it took so long to know it happened?? mainly why it happens??

-BLOG aparichit new FF-

THE PIC CREATED By NANDU/ nanditasingh..
thanks a million sweety
vm thanks to Nehaadditi
I know I am crazy to start another one!!!
but couldn't stop myself!!!
hope u like this journey of Maan & Geet to maaneet in aparichit.
Another love story ..aparichit means unknown..ignorant
please let me know how u like the concept
love
muskan

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Posted: 14 years ago
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~Aparichit~
23


Ridzy - she is fine.. needs some rest & food basically.
Maan nodes his eyes not leaving his jaan for a minute. He was kind of happy to learn she never misunderstood him. But the pain to have learned it like this hurt him. He definitely didn't want her to suffer. How could he not even once think from her side. But he never knew wat was in her mind..in her heart. He couldn't take all this.. seeing her like this & the hospital environment every thing was disturbing.


Maan called anu.
Maan - anu yaar plz tu hospital aa ja
anu - kya huwa
Maan didn't know how to explain her situation.. woh geet
anu - kya huwa Geet ko
Maan - tu idhar aa ja na plz
anu - I am on my way & cuts the call.

Ridzy came back to check on her, seeing Maan so restless she said why don't u get a coffee u will feel better
Maan - nahi.. he almost jumped up.
Ek tho hospital & upper se hospital ka coffee no ways.. he thought.
He looked at Geet again helplessly it was almost an hr & she was still not got back her consciousness.
Ridzy - don't worry she is fine
he smiled weakly.

Geet slowly blinked her eyes & looked around. She immediately pulled her hand away from Maan & tried to sit up. He had a relived smile on his face see her finally regain consciousness. .
Ridzy - how r u feeling now
Geet tried to get up - main teehk hoon.. & held her head with feel of spinning sensation..
Maan held her from shoulder .. she instantly moved away from his touch.. she looked at his grip on her shoulder with a disapproving look. He reluctantly removed his hand from the shoulder, feeling guilty, this sudden distancing was so hurtful to both of them.

Getting close to him was something she didn't want to do again. She couldn't have distanced her heart but least she could do was control her physical anguish to be in his arms, to feel his touch to feel him own her.
Ridzy read the uneasiness in the air & left them alone to sort it out.

Both of them sat quietly for few mins.
Maan very slowly - I am sorry
she didn't reply, she looked away.
Maan - jaan I am really sorry
oh that jaan word.. still seemed to melt her. She held her emotions & continued to look away
he held her arm turned to face him.. why r u not listening to me


she twitched her brows in pain with his hard grip...he instantly eased it .. jaan plz meri baat suno
she very calmly & composedly.. sunne sur sunane ke liya humre bech rah hi kya gaya hain
Maan - rah ka gaya hain.. ?? he repeated her in anger
she looked away hiding her tears
he pulled her hand towards himself.. then why r u wearing it. pointing at her ring
Geet - how does it matter to u... she looked at his finger without the band.
Maan - woh main ne gussen main.. he inhaled sharply.. tumne bhi tho us din
Geet - uska badla le rahen ho
Maan - main ne kuch nahi kaha tha.. darji ne rishta thoda tha
she dipped her head sadly.. wohi tho gum hain.. aap ne kuch nahi kaha.
Maan - tumne bhi tho kuch nahi kaha.. his voice was almost rising.
she didn't want to prove her point, any way it was over. She couldn't have done anything abt it. Moreover he was only getting angrier. She just crossed her arm in front & looked away. he hated all this. why was she not talking..why was she not listening to him.. why she not understanding...dam.. he can't leve without her.
Maan singh Khurana.. darji warned when he saw Maan sitting next to her on the bed.
Maan instantly rised & straighten himself.
Darji - tumhari himat kasien huwaien yanha aane ki
Geet - mainne inhe bulaya tha.. she said it firmly though in a low voice
Maan looked at her in disbelieve, a min ago she was not letting him come near her & now she is defending him.
Darji gave a frustrated look to Maan & then Geet. - hum teri bhalayi hi chahenga na.. tu maan kyun nahi lethi yah insan galat hain..
Geet - nahi yah galat nahi hain
she kept looking down all the while.
Darji - GEET.. he roared.
Maan couldn't help falling for her. She was too sweet to be lost for anything.
Darji - challo ghar challo.. aap Maan Singh Khuaran just leave us alone. I am sorry she called u..
Maan tried to help her while she was getting off the bed.
Darji .. held his hand, not approving him to touch her, hold her. Maans grip tightened around her hand. She looked at him in shock.. wondered his guts in front of darji
Darji was taken a back - yeh haak aap kho chuke ho
Maan - mangni aap ne thodi thi mainne nahi.. main shaadi karonga tho sirf Geet se.
darji - how do u expect us to trust u with our daughter
Maan looked away not willing to explain anything even now. Geet stood their helplessly.

Anu spoke as he just stepped in the ward - darji .. woh humari college ki friend hain. Maan ke Pari ke beech kuch nahi
darji - hum yah sab kaisen manlen
anu showed him the other snaps of their college days & also the snaps that was taken along with that snap that was printed in the paper. He had got it to show it to Geet, but then showing to darji seemed more relevant now.
Darji - Maan ne yah sab phelen kyun nahi bataya
Geet - mujhe bataya tha
darji didn't have much to say now, he calmed down & rested his hand on maan's shoulder - beta agar aap aisen chup rahogen tho hume galat hi lagen ga
by then Daadi just came in.. - bhai sahab aab purani baaton ko chotiyen aur shaadi ki teyari kijiyen.
Darji smiled & accepted lovingly.
Daadi kissed geets forehead & blessed her. Aisen nahi karten beta..
is nalak ke liyen tumne 3din se kaya nahi..
Maan frowned at Daadi. She smiled & teased him.

-BLOG aparichit part 23-

precap
rootna manana
-PREV PART 22 NEXT PART 24-
Thanks a lot for all the beautiful comments & support
plz do continue to click like button & comment motivates me to write more
will PM later
love
muskan

Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congo shongo for the new thread... yipeee update mil gaya... maan and geet ki shaadi hogi... yaay...yaay... finally geet ne bola... n maan abhi bhi chup raha... 😆😆😆
maan pichle 1.5 ghante se hospital mein hain... wow...thats something...
Edited by deniac - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congrats on the new thread..


please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congrats on the new thread...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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CONGO for the new thread👏👏👏
WONDERFUL UPDATE AGAIN 👏
So happy to see ALL IZ WELL...Everything went on in this part as I expected.😊
Really liked Daadi bullying Maan in the end.😆
Precap is again interesting...Ofcourse Geet is still angry and eager to see how Maan Manofys her😉
Edited by Vaidhumom - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Congrats for new thread..Finally all is well...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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maaneet are always awesome...
nice update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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kya baat hai muskii jee.. "All is Well " now.. I thought Darji is not going to approve.. but as always liked your way honey..

liked how Geet spoke for Maan. I am very happy for that.. and "Chalte Chalte" song brought the required ambience too sweety.


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Posted: 14 years ago
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congrats on yr new thread.
amazing update

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