mulakat jo zindagi ban gayi MAANEET ss COMPLETED - Page 9

Created

Last reply

Replies

387

Views

125.5k

Users

60

Likes

2.4k

Frequent Posters

kkiddoo thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#81
waiting eagerly for the next part update soon dear...
Edited by payalpari - 13 years ago
pritm thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#82
mulakat
part 6

In geet's room

Geet is combing her hairs. Raji come and hugged her.

Didi main aap ke liye bahut khush hoon. Aap jaisa jivan saathi chahati thi jiju waise hi hai. Samjdar, responsible, bado ki ijjat kar ne waale. He was talking to everyone so frankly like he knows us.

Geet can see that everyone in her family like maan. Raji's words are confirmation.

Waise agar hum se itni acchi tarah baat ki to aap se kya kaha hoga jo aap jhat se shaadi ke liye maan gayi?

With this geeet remind of proposal. She blushed. Blush is caught by raji.

Umm' aap to sharma rahi ho, matlab kuch to hua hai, batai na

Accha thick hai, batati hoon. Geet is now blushing uncontrolled her cheecks become red.

Wo.. wo..

Di wo.. wo.. kya batai na. raji is getting curious.

Maan ne mujhe propose kiya. Then geet keep hand on her face. r

aji's mouth fell open by listening this and seeing geet's blush. She is so happy for her di. At last she is getting what she deserves. God keep her waiting to give this gift of her life. All the pain she had gone through turned into beautiful gift for life time.

Raji removed geet's hand from her face. But she is having still mouth open. Geet see that

mooh to band kar. Geet closed raji's mouth. Geet take box from dressing table.

Tujhe kuch dikhana hai. Raji is getting surprises after surprises so she is looking forward to next. Geet open the box. Raji saw the chain and pendant, forgot to blink. She stared at box and then looks at geet. By blushing geet said mera birthday gift hai maan ne diya.

With that raji closed her eyes, keep her hand on her forehead and act like she is going to fall. Geet instantly keep box down and reach raji itni nautanki mat kar.

Raji opened her eyes aap to mujhe jor ka jhatka jor se de rahi ho to sambhalna to mushkil hi hoga na. phehle proposal, phir maan, phir itna sundar birthday gift aur sabse bada jhatka you are blushing continuously. Daal mein khuch to kaala hai?

Geet also want to share these special moments with her sister. So she told raji every thing. How they met? His proposal, his gift, his talk. Raji instantly hugged geet. Both sisters are having tears in their eyes.

Raji wiped her tears and broke hug ab rona wona band. Aap ki bidaai ke liye bachake rakhana pedega na. Then she wiped geet's tears. Raji took chain and tied it around geet's neck. Hugged her aap ke intazzar ka phal to bahut meetha nikla di. Aap ka ye birthday to sabse special bana diya.

Both hugged tightly.

Waise abhi aap ko raat bhar naand to aayegi nahi to aap phone pe baat kar sakti hai. Main chup chaap so gaungi kyunki mujhe neend aa rahi hai

Geet in very low voice par mere paas unka number nahi hai aur nahi unke paas mera

Raji looked at geet in disbelieve aap do baar mile, proposal ho gaya, rishta tay hogaya lekin aap dono ke paas number nahi hai. Ab number to subah hi dhundana padega. Ab so jaiye. Good night and sweet dreams with jiju.

it is small one

want to write about sister bonding

it is really precious and at such time best partner of sharing emotions

but waiting for responce as usual

plz comment


previous----part 5

next-----part 7


Edited by pritm - 13 years ago
maaneetsangel thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#83
part 5 ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

Edited by maaneetsangel - 13 years ago
maaneetsangel thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#84
part 6 ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d update ...

continue soon ...
tanvi04 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#85
fabulous update n really the sisters love is too good eagerly waiting for next
butterfly.tanu thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#86
like the part a lot..thanx 4 the pm..
mysteriousmilli thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#87
loved the update..👏.please continue soon...😛
CrazyMaaneetFan thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#88
Dat was cute part.

Continue soon n thnx fr pms.i'm really waiting fr my maan to come in my life
happydays30 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#89
Awesome
Add me to ur pm list plz
angel_smily thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#90
nice update
thanks for the pm
continue soon

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

1 months ago

Pyaar Ya Rebound? ~ Rumya SS [Completed]

Intro: Rudra fakes a relationship with his best friend Soumya to impress glamorous Bhavya-but ends up falling for the one girl who truly knew...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

3 months ago

ArShi OS : Pyaar Ka Naghma {Completed} ArShi OS : Pyaar Ka Naghma {Completed}

[NOCOPY] P Y A A R. K A. N A G H M A. "Friends?" a little boy extended his hand towards a girl which she responded. They smiled and embraced...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

3 months ago

Student of the Year: When Love Lost Its Way [Completed]

Author's Note: Based on the Prompt by @JasmineRahul in Submit Writing Prompt Thread who requested for writing: The alternative version of the...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

4 months ago

More Than Enough ~ A Rumya Three-Shot [Completed]

Author's Note: Based on the Prompt by @oh_nakhrewaali in Submit Writing Prompt Thread who requested for writing: Character A has body image...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

4 months ago

Deewaniyat ~ A Jeenat Five-Shot [Completed]

Author's Note: Based on the Prompt by @Indulekha00 in Submit Writing Prompt Thread who requested for writing: A prompt for the mysterious lovers...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".