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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

😳😳

btw do u read this one??
tp karna hai to padh..i love it

yaa have read the first season finale just that much...
but thanks for the link will read when ever i get free time...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aash darling, first of all Belated Eid Mubarak to you sweetheart, so sorry for the late wishes

Loved the update, Maan seems to really be in pain missing Geet and regretting what he did to hurt her. I'm glad to see the past unfolding giving us a glimpse of Maan and Geet's journey to this point of time. I'm really so very eager to know what transpired between them.

Please do update soon 😃

Love you loads 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: drdee142

Aash darling, first of all Belated Eid Mubarak to you sweetheart, so sorry for the late wishes


Loved the update, Maan seems to really be in pain missing Geet and regretting what he did to hurt her. I'm glad to see the past unfolding giving us a glimpse of Maan and Geet's journey to this point of time. I'm really so very eager to know what transpired between them.

Please do update soon 😃

Love you loads 🤗

hey deee🤗🤗🤗
i lubss ju too..
hope u are doing good🤗🤗🤗🤗
glad u are liking it😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: euphoric

Better late than never... nahi?😆


Ok... so it was a superb start... the twist of events and the opening sequence... one doesn't make as much damages in a war as much he may do in a fit of anger... this looks the case with Maan too... true to his character... completely! Pehle bol liya baad main tubelight jali ki haila yeh kya bol diya! but then its too late... the damage is done!

The FB was good... gave an insight of the relationship thy might have shared... maan was undoubtedly bitter towards love and life... making work the only passion in his life... is he running from something? who? why? he came across from the kind of ppl who neither can stay happy nor can let anyone be happy loved Geet... the strength of character of this girl amazes me... of all she was enduring... in silent words she told him that like him she might be mighty but then she's not afraid to hope and to live...to give a chance to herself and to them... she was not scared of what life would bring... thereby taking as it comes... kal ke liye aaj kyun gavana? kal dekha kisne hai?😊 purfect!!! but thn turning his back to her... he disappeared in the darkness of the night... or more aptly said he turned his back to his own happiness... to light

hmm... so his own words are biting him now... good... it shud too but it was painful... lord knows what the poor girl would be going through but haila who was that girl?😕 was it Geet only or Maan's illusion or simply some random girl on street?😕 and then the accident

chal main aage jaaing😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: euphoric

Here here😛


toh jaise hi dimag ki akal ki batti jali tune uske dimag ka fuse uda diya😕 Kamini kabhi toh koi achcha kaam kar diya kar😡

Ok... lets get to the updet quickly...

You know what was the worst part in all this... he had no one! no one to be by his side when he was fighting for his own breath... when he lost himself in the abyss and now when he had forgotten himself completely😭

I'm glad that Meera stayed by him all the while trying to give him the moral support the human touch to his treatment all the while when he refused to leave his fav territory... the land of darkness... the oblivion where nothing mattered... nothing concerned him and nothing could come near him to hurt him... true, the conscious, subconscious and the superconscious states of human minds can play havoc with the brains... so analytically he knew all... he knew what he had done... and he knew he drove her away and now he refused to come back to the world where she was not around him... where he was left on his own

Meera's pain was so obvious... poor girl... felt bad for her... she tried to befriend him and bring him out of the dark... unknowingly build up a few dreams only to have to come across a heart break she didn't deserve

you know ever since the news of maan loosing his memory in the show made rounds, thy all said he'll remember only geet and nothing or no one else and they did exactly the opposite... it was disappointing but thanks to you, you brought the plot out here... it was his subconscious that remembered her saying that no one can call him DD except her... but when Meera did... he could not hold back to defy her... he knew it was Geet's right and not anyone else👏

And thn his vulnerability the memory ditched him not his character and so it was obvious how much not being able to take the charge of the situation must have hurt him... kudos the brilliant play of emotions👍🏼👏 loved it❤️

chal aage😛

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: euphoric

third one... moi feels proud of me😳😆 okies... half an hr more for lunch hr... mujhe bhookh laging😕😭 kamini aati aati clinic se biscuit ka packet le aana and toss kar dena😛


chal ab main reading phir commenting😳

The saddist that you are😡 laat maaring main tere ko... kamini it was such a painful part😭

The emotions the expressions were so aptly explained that it touched me through the words encompassed.

He doesn't remember her... he doesn't know her... yet all he wants is her.. Geet! he knows that she is the nucleus of his life... the only source that can drive him through this madness... and it was so touchy when he punishes himself... for forgetting her... he knew she is embed in his soul and so he also know that he needs to find her soon or get to her, have her by his side for the mere sake of his sanity. Not knowing anything at all at this moment, he couldn't bear the thought of her being with someone else... true loves if like a flame that lightens the shadows and once being the witness to that warmth who would ever want to evade? he doesn't remember the shadows or anything but he remembers the warmth of the light as it was simply encased in his soul and now he fears the cold and icy world without her!

I really love and appreciate Meera for everything that she is doing despite knowing that all she is in for is pain... yet she's pushing her own emotions behind to be with him no matter how much she has to endure in the process...unwillingly she fell in love with a stranger and when she aspired for togetherness the first word she hears from him is Geet... taking him far far from the dreams that her mind had spun around him ouch that hurts!

I loved it how he manages to react to DD only because it is connected to her... the voice in his head a constant reminder that she was real... of course he would be insecure and would wonder about her absence but even then when he himself is helpless he prays for her safety...

The song was apt for the situation... kamini tu bhi moon connection le aayi😆 though i loved it how you fitted it in the sequence😳

Awesome... brilliant... mind-blowing😛

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: euphoric

yipeee... its over the lunch time... toh yeh wala likhke phir thodi pait pooja karing😳 pata nahi kiss behcare ka daant tu is second main shaheed kar rahi hoing *sigh*


chal chal... updet ki baat karte hai😃

Meera is indeed a lovely person... so much like Geet... no matter Maan found an affiliation towards her coz she reminded him of Geet... though he might have not known it then😛 i really liked the opening scene... it gave an insight into Meera's personality... no wonder Roop is in love with her and wants MM😆

Finally Maan ka Maan ki mishti se na sahi but Maan ki Coffee ke saath toh milan hua😆 you know i loveee the smell of fresh coffee beans... its soo tempting😳

the small scene was nice where she scrunches her nose at the thought of the coffee... haye pehle bolti main 4-5 litre coffee bhej deti... coffee peete hi uske dimag ka fuse jal gaya 😆 kaunsi coffee miling cafeteria main? nescafe ya bru??😆 ok ok just kidding... updet pe aane de😳

😡😡😡😡😡u know why

Geet may be away from him... but their souls are connected and she could feel his restlessness but then she must have been so use to him filling her imaginations that she didn't ponder over her thoughts or the reason why her own heart was so frantic!

Maan's sudden burst of memory brought back the terrifying image of her being in danger and then all fazed out from his surroundings... thank God Meera was there by him to hold him back from running away like that.

Superb execution of the thoughts and no... i will not term this updet as filler... it had lot clues if someone was looking😉😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: euphoric

yeaaa... the last post of this thread... phir main naye thread pe jaaing😛 but pehle ruk... lunch khake aati hoon😛

okies lunch done😃

toh coming to the updet...

Babu tu sadist hai... i reaffirm it😆 but moi loves ju irrespective of it🤗

Guilt was piercing him all through and his concern and worry for her well being was making him angry and impatient... and yes the burning heart was pinning for her... all he wished was to be by her and with her...

he knew he had wronged her... he blamed her for something she didn't do and then with due to his own angst and his insecurity regarding her coming to the fore... he ended up hurting her and now he was punishing himself in worst possible ways he's torturing himself physically deriving pleasure out of the pain and even then he knew how she would react to it... its her thought that stop him from practically killing himself...

I could just imagine Meera's pain when the last bits of her hopes gave away... when she realized Geet was his wife she knew her dreams would never see the light of the day... she nipped it in her head so that she never stand in the way of Maan and his Geet! Ata girl... i salute you! but i loved her thought process about Adi being the wonder guy🤣🤣🤣 bechara Adi marta, kya na karta🤣🤣🤣

Geet's family is coming across a useless bunch of people... haye tu Teji ko Preeto ke saath joding... And teji ko buddha kar diya🤣🤣 GJM ne tujhe chittar nahi maare?🤣

Glad that Maan atleast found a small clue about her but then again its proving to be like a pin in the haystack i m so waiting for them to meet and the past to unfold... beautifully written part... loved the song and the VMs😳

i think GJM kissed the significance🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
isliye mai bach gayeee🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: euphoric

Ashuuu😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡


Kamini I can kill you right now😡😡😡😡😡 Index kaun updet karega be😡😡😡 ek ek pg dhunding tera updet khodne ko😭

chalo back to the updet😳

this is the first time when we have seen things from Geet's POV and one thing is evident that Maan has overstepped his line by whatever he said and did to her... the girl has broken down and have killed a part of herself in the process!

yes she loves him and there was no denying that... she pines for him with same intensity as he does for her... none of them he happy being away but yet more than distance its the circumstances that have drifted them apart she knew the shackles that bind them together were never gonna set her free... that she was joint to him by the fate... by the love that she harboured for him... she wishes for him to come to her but then she's too hurt to give him a chance to enter her life yet again glad that she has some on to look after her... God bless the old couple...

And who is this he now😡

Meera is a darling... i love her... bearing all the insults... she's still standing by his side and coaxing him to come out of the oblivion that he had built around himself... his words still hurt her but then though painfully its good to see her coming to terms... i completely adore her😛

Maan's condition is no less... seems he has resorted to giving himself the physical pain for each wound he's casting on the other... especially Geet and Meera... He's desperately trying to look for her... searching her everywhere... ready to give up all just so to have her back... and so his outburst when Meera says that he's not trying hard was understandable... bechara Maan😭

Kamini now updet your index😡😡😡

kamini it was updatedAngryAngry
aur ek ek page kyu dhoondi?😉😉
mereko pooch leti...dhakkan no 1 meri🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: euphoric

Index😡😡😡😡😡😡


My heart went out for Maan in the beginning... he's dying to hear her... he'll do anything and go to any lengths to hear her... even in his dazed state he couln't forget her... her voice was his hold to the shafts of the sane world... his desperation so evident with his speech with Adi... i really wish he meets her again soon😭 it was so painful when he was trying to feel her through her phone... but then kash yeh apna bada muh kholne se pehle bhi kuch soch liya karta

I wonder what he might have told her and shudders at the possibilities

The FB was so cute.. i can so imagine Maan's face at that... jab serial main hua tha tab bhi bechare ki sitti bitti gul ho gayi thi😆😆😆 and then the sweet revenge☺️

Glad that finally Meera could coax him to open up... now lets see... how did he manage to build and break his love and life

Mujhe kyun laging ki Daarji has an inert motive to get these two married... oh i hate him already... here i so felt for Geet... poor girl... all the while was just trying to absorb the situation and study the man who was sitting beside her... the innocent working of the teenager's mind when she think about him being sadoo was a clear indication that she had not given up hopes... she wished to make things work between them and somewhere she was confident that she will!

Hmm and Maan was not happy with the marriage... it was Daarji's ploy... i think last word given to Savitri khurana was only a cover up to hide his real motives... useless man... using his own granddaughter as a pawn in the game!!! yuck! i hate him🤢

waiting for the next parts MKK😳

Lubs ya🤗


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