^THE JADED PRINCE^-{MANEET FF} next thread pg 151 - Page 72

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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update...

loved it...maan's reaction towards baby is really justified...coz he himself dont knw wht is to b loved as a child...he dont have his childhood days...

thank u sooo much fr such lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan does have a friend, cool
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved both the updates.
Maan slowly slowly opening up but still far from family bondage.
Hope geet will make him realise the importants of kith and kin.
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 110

Sam-Where have you been dude?

M-I could ask you the same thing. I was in India. I have liquor business

Sam-Coolll!!

M-And you own a club!!

Sam smiles

M-When did you get started?

Sam-After we left all that, I started working as a bartender. Now I have this

M-Good going

Sam-Small but nice

M-Small? Its famous and best from what I heard

Sam-Whatever

M-Quality man...don't forget quality

Sam-Yup. So when did you get married?

M-It's been 2 months now

G-3 Maan

Geet cuts in

M-uh yah.. sorry...

Sam-Man!..check your facts..[he jokes]. I am so happy for you. You finally got married

M- What about you? No steady girlfriend?

Sam-I have been trying to persuade my girl's family for years now

M-uh huh? By hitting on lonely girls? You think that'd make them happier?

Sam-Come on...I never hit on gals. What do you mean?

Maan looks pointedly at Geet...

Sam-Shut up. I saw you are with her. Your husband is so possessive [at Geet]

She smiles

M-I see...and I am not that possessive... you had been world class fu- when you were 16, no girl was safe from you

Sam-Geet, he is a liar. Apart from that, all my girls were hitting on you

M-And I wasn't interested

Sam-Yay Yay ! glad at last somebody got your interest

Sam says looking at Geet

Maan blushes a little but since its dark no one can see and looks at Geet too

Geet had also blushed

M-umm.. baith yaar khada rakhega kya

Maan says and they all sit down

Sam-By the way, did that wrenched bar guy ask from money, I'll tell him for free drinks

M-hmm I gave him money, he said it was on house..

Sam-What house? Whose sponsoring?

M-I don't know. What did I know who was paying for me...

Sam-Some drunk guy makes these announcements daily to impress the pole dancers

Geet looks around at the skimpy dressed pole dancer and nods in understanding blushing all the time

M- To teri girlfriend ka kya lafda hai?

Sam- Kya lafda hona hai, uske gharwale nahi maante

M- Her family know how much?

Sam-Everything. I was honest and she has a motor mouth

M-To bataya kyun saale? Shaade baad kuch details bata deta

Sam-Oye, teri biwi ko nahi pata kya saale

M-Nope, she would have run screaming the other way if she knew

G-Excuse me

She gets up

SamM-Oops! Chup nahi reh sakta kya?

M-What? What did I say? It's the truth. Sab teri galti hai.. Why bring up this topic!

Sam-Maine kaha tha? Tune kaha tha

Ab Sam jaise taise manake laata hai Geet ko

She sits crossing her arms

M-You got any suggestions to help Sam here?

Maan asks Geet

am-Haan bhabhi aap hi batao

G-What he did was correct. Other way it would have been cheating. Love has to be pure and truthful

M-I thought they told you...before how was I to know...[Maan mutters]

She is not even looking at him

G-If your love and feelings are true they will accept. They will understand that they have a gem of a person for their daughter, who believes in truth

M-We are far from gem. But that would be good to make them believe that. Any idea how we do that?

G-Maan ! [She says in a warning tone]

M-Sorry sorry

She looks at Sam and gives an encouraging smile

G-Try be friendly with her family. Take the family members along with your girlfriend for dinners and shopping. Get something nice for them on festivals and occasion ,try small chats on phone, ask about their health and above all that, keep her happy. If you want I can also speak to them

Sam is happy that Geet offered her help but he isn't so sure



PART 111

G-Maan ! [She says in a warning tone]

M-Sorry sorry

She looks at Sam and gives an encouraging smile

G-Try be friendly with her family. Take the family members along with your girlfriend for dinners and shopping. Get something nice for them on festivals and occasion ,try small chats on phone, ask about their health and above all that, keep her happy. If you want I can also speak to them

Sam is happy that Geet offered her help but he isn't so sure. He knows ki haan Geet bohot achi hai and all and she would make good impression too but then she is his wife so a big X mark against her and agar galti se bhi uske ghar walo ko Kashsh ke bare ein kuch bhi pata chal gaya to unko to yahi lagega ki Sam khud to aisa hai hi baki uske sare dost bhi aise hi hain

G-To thik hai Sam, to tum mujhe bata dena

Sam smiles

Sam-Geet, you are a sweetheart

Maan is frowning while he is thinking all this and listening to their conversation

M-Don't they know that you have given up all that... you shouldn't have to prove anything to anyone

He says pouting a little

M-Can't she convince them?

G-What do you mean?

M-Uske parents hai wo khud kyun nhai convince karne ki koshish karti?

G-Offcourse usne kiya hoga na, ye kaisa sawaal hai?

M-Chahte kya hain? They won't get anyone better than Sam. No one would ever dare to even think of hurting her in any way if she maries him. He can take care of what's his very well; aur kya chahiye...jaan lenge kya?

Maan badbada raha hai

Geet sar pe haath maarti hai

G-Maan ! parents think differently

M-I am have yet to see a perfect set of them. Why listen to them then?

Badbadaye jaa raha hai...coz he is feeling kind of hopeless.. and helpless...unable to help those he wants to... it hasn't happened for a long time and now that powerless and helpless feeling is creeping back

G-Maan ! taang mat adaao, main aur Sam matter solve ka lenge

Sam holds her hand

Sam-Yes bhabhi, am positive. I have full faith on you

She smiles

Ab Maan Sam ko bata bhi nai sakta ki Geet ke muh kholne se problem kya ho sakti hai...

M-Aur jab unhe pata chalega ki Geet meri wife hai to uski credibility bhi to khatam ho jaegi na uske parenst ke samne...coz am the same as you. Agar unhone Geet ke parents ko contact kiya aur unhone muh khol diya to ladki ke parent to sochenge na ki Geet bhi mere and Sam ki tarah hai characterless or moral less whatever it is they are thinking...

G-Maan ! CHUP !

Geet turns to Sam

G-Sam, chalo meri apni girlfriend se baat karvao

Sam looks at Maan because he can also grasp what Maan is trying to say

Sam- But they don't know who you are and I mean...I didn't lie about myself... but jab wo poochenge ki main Maan ko kaise janta hoon to... don't know bhabhi, he has a point

G-Main sab sambhal lungi.I can handle this. Give me 15 minutes and give her number kindly both of you keep quiet

Sam looks undecided ki itne mein ek poll dancer walks closer to offer a lap dance as two honey dudes were sitting there.. she was new and didn't know that the owner did not like such offers... or being disturbed...she thought she was just doing her job

Maan looks up at the approaching dancer and stiffens up

Geet goes to speak as it was too noisy inside

M-What the f***!!! Why the f*** do u have those...that thing here!!!

Maan says looking away from her and Sam sends her away

But then on other side where Maan looks there are all the poles and several gyrating women dancing on them

He is turning white with rage with every moment

Sam-Dammit didn't ask her to come here!! She must be new...

Maan gets up and paces towards the exit with his head down

Sam follows him

Sam-Sorry man... that was.. she was just doing her job...I didn't call her over.

M-Shut the f*** up!

Sam-Maan please! Don't get angry, man! am really sorry

M-Angry??? Damn it! Why the hell do you even have them?!!

He holds Sam's collar and shakes him hard

M- God! Don't you know what .. how.. how can you make anyone go through that... that..you f****ing ba**ard

G-Surprise !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Geet comes back with a huge happy smile on her face

But her expression changes to frown as she witnesses the scene in front of her

Maan punches Sam before turning to look at her as he completes the b****ard line

She is looking with surprise and dropped jaw

Sam's nose starts bleeding

Geet holds Sam

G-Maan !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

M-[looking at Sam with mad rage] I thought you were better than this.. do you need money that f***ing much?! You $%&*^**(&&!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sam-It's part of the business, no man would ever come to this place ever then and I don't force them !!!!!!!!!!!! NIETHER YOU WERE FORCED !!!!!!!!!!!! YOU ALSO CHOSEEE!!!!

M-I CHOSE!!???????????????!!!!!!!!???????? Why you!!!!!!!!!

Maan is again on Sam, holding his collar

Geet is panicked

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Posted: 13 years ago
i am really sorry readers fro not posting regularly but i promise to do so after 16th may. thts when my semesters will be over. thank you for bearing with my bumpy schedule
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Posted: 13 years ago
good.. the truth is coming out.. waiting for it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
like it...
waiting for truth 2 be out...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh my... Maan is out of control...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Maan has go through alot

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