^THE JADED PRINCE^-{MANEET FF} next thread pg 151 - Page 73

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Posted: 13 years ago
sometimes matters become so sensitive n hits others weak point...

awesome n beautiful update...


loved it...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

waiting eagerly...

n thank u very much for dis wonderful update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome. Loved the update.
Geet is a sweetheart. She trying to help sam.
Cont.soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Geet is so very innocent and Maan believes himself to be so very scarred... so does Geet but they both do love each other very much... love the story... read it whole at one go...
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 112

Sam-It's part of the business, no man would ever come to this place ever then and I don't force them !!!!!!!!!!!! NIETHER YOU WERE FORCED !!!!!!!!!!!! YOU ALSO CHOSEEE!!!!

M-I CHOSE!!???????????????!!!!!!!!???????? Why you!!!!!!!!!

Maan is again on Sam, holding his collar

Geet is panicked

G-Maan stop !!!!!!!

She is trying to stop Maan while he is trying to punch Sam

Geet is holding him from back trying to pull him

M- As if I had a choice! [He is ignoring Geet, his full concentration is on Sam]

G-He is your friend !!!!!!!!!!

M-You thankless f***er!!!!!

Maan manages to o punch him again somehow

Sam-Who forced you into thisss??????? You needed money

Geet comes in between Maan and Sam

Maan ka to khoon khol raha hai ...he wants to choke Sam and make him eat his words

Maan has punched and kicked Sam down to the ground

Geet is trying to pull him away

G- MAAANN!!!!!! STOP IT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Maan steps back from Sam and spits on him

Geet is shocked

G-Maan you...

She rushes to Sam to help

G-Are you ok? Kya hua tha? You need some water?

Maan pulls back Geet to him

M-You don't sympathize with him

G-Maan he is hurt, leave me

M-You walk now; you can walk back alone

He is gripping her hand hard

G-Maan, leave me I said. You were wrong in hitting him, and I won't support you in your violence even if it is Sam, Ranjeet or anyone

He looks into her hard headed hard and cold eyes...his teeth clenched

M-You are my wife.

G-Yes am your wife, I am not your slave. Leave my hand. Ahhh!!! You are hurting me. Leaveee!!!!!

M-You want to pick side of the guy who gets kicked without knowing everything. If you can pick Ranjeet's side just coz he is spineless enough to get kicked.

Leaves her hand

G-I am not taking sides. ok?

M-Then you should have picked the side of guys I kicked who tried to rape you on the beach

Geets's jaw dropped with shock

M-Do whatever you want

Maan turns and leaves

She is stunned for a whole moment to hear those words from Maan...her eyes brim with tears and some fall down

While he thinks, how dare she say she would take Ranjeet's side after all that he had done...Maan ka to dimag phat raha hai

Sam gets up and puts his hand on her shoulder

Sam-Geet forget it, it happens some time. Don't cry, please. I am fine

Sam offers her a hanky

She nods

G-Thanks. By the way, her family said yes

Sam-What really???????????????????????

He almost jumps with happiness

G-Yes [She smiles]

Sam-I am so happy! How did it happen?

G-Call her and ask, she is with them

Sam-Geet, you are the best! [khushi ke maare hugs her]

Geet Sam ko malham laga deti hai, and Sam usse drop karne ke lie Geet ke saath bahar tak aata hai

Udhar Maan wapas gaya...usne socha Sam se ini hi humdardi thi to Sam ke ath hi rahe wo hi achha hai darinda to Maan hai...he becomes more irrational than normal when he losses control of his emotions...be it anger or fright or anything

Ab Sam Geet ko chodne aata hai

Sam ko laga ki Maan ne aise kyon react kiya... why did he call him thankless...par uske dimaag mein itna sab chal raha tha ki kisi be concentrate nahi kar pa raha tha

Maan is in his rages...pehle to usko sirf Sam par hi gussa aa raha tha but ab usko sam se zyada Geet par gussa aa raha tha coz she didn't take his side and on top of that said that she would side with Ranjeet over him

Maan sees Sam dropping Geet off

Sam Geet ko neeche chod deta hai

Maan is standing at the balcony

Sam gave her a small bear hug and said good night to her

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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh dear... hope it won't be a prolonged MU :/
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Posted: 13 years ago
Its geet's mistake.
She will tk side of ranjeet???????? Hell no.

Usse uska naam lena hi nhi chahiye tha yahaan,atleast nt in way to compare
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Posted: 13 years ago
She shouldn't have taken side of ranjeet...
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Posted: 13 years ago
geet shudnt hv supportd ranjeet
tht really hurt maan
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Posted: 13 years ago
oops.. wrong words @ the wrong time..
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Posted: 13 years ago

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