^THE JADED PRINCE^-{MANEET FF} next thread pg 151 - Page 70

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it.. MG in a playful mood..
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww maan is thinking about kissing her finaly!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for the edited version :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
This FF was recommended by a dear friend..the premise sounds wonderful

BM for now
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 106


G-What?????????????

She doesn't understand a word

He gives her jaded sad smile...

M-It's good that you don't understand. I like it this way...

G-Is anything wrong?

M-Still if you want to know I can buy a book

She sits and holds him

She looks guilty of something and she doesn't know what is she guilty of

G-I am sorry if I said anything wrong

M-Now what are you getting all upset about?

G--I am just so stupid and...[Her eyes are down from guilt and remorse]

M-You didn't do anything wrong..

G-I should think before saying anything

M-But you didn't say anything wrong and I am fine, and you look very gorgeous. This dress we definitely have to buy

She sits down worried

M-C'mon now. Either show me something else or we buy these dresses

Her hand is on her mouth, she looks as if something terrible has happened

M-Geet... It's ok.. what's the matter? What's terrifying you?

He pulls her into his arms

She is surprised...he never initiates a hug. She closes her eyes

G-I am sorry

M-Don't be. Nothing happened

G- don't know what vannilla and bondage means .. just understand vanila is good and others are bad and I am sorry

M-That's not true and stop saying you are sorry. Some day...someday...

G-Some day?

M-Someday...in which you won't have to step around so carefully near me... am a emotional minefield and you have a saint's patience...stop being sorry...

G-It's not true. You shut up

Maan laughs and squeezes her tightly for a second before letting her go

She looks at him and smiles

She pulls his nose teasingly

G-I like you as you are. You are the best

M-Thank you but I'll strive to be perfect. Now change

She goes to change again


She wears this simple dress-




Just walks out without her acting and tactics, she simply stands

Maan smiles and claps

M-Office dress

She smiles and then again shuts the door

She is now choosing the simple dresses

Maan is sitting there thinking about the future ad he knows there is no need to rush so he is relaxed. He made up his mind that it will happen one day..earlier he was sure that it never ever would. So now it's easier to accept the closeness coz he knows where its leading and he knows that he wants it to lead there

Geet wears this simple white dress-


Geet was feeling messed up with her hair so she ties them in a simple side braid

Maan is looking with his mouth slightly open

She looks so pure and serene representing everything nice and right

G-Don't you think it's too simple for its cost. 200 rupaye ka bhi nahi hoga

Maan is at loss of words ad expressions.. loss of control to use his mind and say something

G-Maan ! Main tumse baat kar rahi hoon

M-Huh?

He closes his mouth

G-Pata nahi kya sochte rehte ho, jab dekho kaam kaam kaam

He releases a breath he had forgotten to take... she's a vision

M-Kaam?

G-Kaam aur kya. Kaam ke baare mein hi sochte raha karo. Pata nhi kahan dhyaan rehta hai. I was saying, look at this. I'ts too expensive for its looks. 200 rs ka bhi nahi hoga ye

He is looking completely lost not understanding what she is talking about

M-It's worth every penny. That one we are defiantly buying

G-Arre ye India mein naa, aise market me naa 200 rs ka aa jayega. Kya hai? normal sa kapda, do din mein kharab ho jayega. dhote hi

M- We are buying it

He says in a no argument tone

She looks at him with a cute anger

Maan gets up walks to her

M-It's the best

She crinkles brows...scratches her head. She thinks how can it be best when she looks like a maid out of a hollywood flick

M-So we agree?

She nods

Maan nods too

M- Any more left to try?

G-Nope

They buy the stuff and leave the boutique

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SylvaniaLUX

This FF was recommended by a dear friend..the premise sounds wonderful


BM for now


hope u get hooked😉😃

let me know if u want pm's

meghna
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Posted: 13 years ago
finally Maan is accepting their closeness and knows where it leads to.. good progress..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome!
glad to see that maan has made his mind clear
continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Longgg step aheda!!!
finally the accpeatnace is comeing!
phew..abhi ek kissi to banta hai boss..:P
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Posted: 13 years ago

loved it
loved it
loved it
simply superb
i'm hooked and booked for this ff

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