MG[SS]-The Yellow Dot of Eternal Joy[IMP Note Pg 1 & Pg 72] - Page 5

Originally posted by: -bansi-

Wonderful start Jaz..!!
Moi is loving it..!! 😳
ohh the encounter of maan n the unknown girl...as he does not know her...
she was looking for her precious yellow umbrella...
while maan was out there asleep..but as he heard the melodious voice..he was eager to see who the voice belonged to...shweet it was..!!
loved it loadz..!!
cont soon...

Originally posted by: Angelic_mishty

heyy truly awesum strt dear...

loved d intro...special d pic.its damn beautifull...

great work..

thnx for d pm..

😛

Originally posted by: Devil-By-Birth

RES.😈II

EDIT:

My my my... first thing first... Im so loving the painting/your drawing/sketch...👏 my talented Saaali Ji... ❤️
Now!
I really loved the first part... its awesome... Colorful I must say...👏

Update Soon...⭐️

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

wonderful part yaar!
mujhe nahi pata tha ki yellow s so beautiful!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: Audiwalia

Interesting...

Originally posted by: zahra15

i love it...plzz add me to ur pm list...

Originally posted by: Eowyn

Can I ask where do you come up with such awesome ideas?

I think the better question would be one dialogue from the film National Treasure "Can I marry your brain?"😆

Because I am very much in love with it you see...

Yellow dot of Eternal Joy...

I am not much fond of the color you see...

But since Geet is so adamantly fond of it, I have developed a liking for it...

And coming to Maan, back from London and jumped into work,

His explanations are logical but nothing on earth will never actually have made me do that

Originally posted by: hamini_yash

Wonderful story. I must tel u that i feel the same thing that maan felt when u finish ur update. I cant wait for next. I realy wonder how very few ppl in world r gifted with such talents to rule our senses just by simple combination of words .each time i read i think, y cant i write like this?. Keep going, im eagerly waitin(like a luv sick puppy i must add).

Originally posted by: deejayaqueel

Chhote... 🤗🤗🤗

This is what i love about you the most...

The ability to take the mundane and create something sublime out of it!!

Beautiful... love the poetry and colour you toss around in the everyday things making them things of beauty...!

And i really love the title!

That yellow dot in the distance,

became the centre of my existence,

A voice full of sunshine,

Brought life back into mine.

I longed for a glimpse,
Of that curly-haired nymph,

But all that i got... was a bright sunny blur...

So i'll bide my time... till i see her

Her of that yellow dot... the one in the distance

That became so soon, the centre of my existence.

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

Your stories always have a different and faraway feel ... loved the start... i wish i had that much exuberance over a color...continue soon😊