MG[SS]-The Yellow Dot of Eternal Joy[IMP Note Pg 1 & Pg 72] - Page 20

Originally posted by: t_areeb

i never thought sameera would b the little handa

and they seems to share a special bond

but i want to know more about the yellow dot

Originally posted by: serenelove

Hey Jazz,

Loving the story style.

Strange, wherever Maan goes, his path crosses with yellow dot but with distance that still has him deprived of facial recognition.

Maan was worried & jealous though he was incognizant of reason.

Sameer can be the youngest of lot but I believe, she is not Nanhi or Maan would have never acted the way he did with her.

whatever Sameera's big plan is, it is taking it's toll on Maan but still he is following it, wondering why is that?

Please continue Soon.

Ah! You have asked so much...and I am unable to answer even a single one of them. Just follow the yellow dot. Yellow is after all the color of mental clarity, analytic thought and intellectual energy 😉😆 Just kidding...next chapters will start unfolding every hidden meaning behind the words.😊

Originally posted by: mechantefille

So Geet is playing cupid/agony aunt for arjun...but where did Sameera come from? Don't tell me Geet is someone who Maan already knows - nahiii...Jazzu this is getting so interesting!!

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

ohhh god the suspense...it's becoming too much to bear...but that's what makes a story fun...so i am loving...

And Maan and Sameera? really ? a couple 😲..did not see that coming...i don't know what else u have planned so let's see..

awesome update...cont soon hun

Reya <3

Originally posted by: deejayaqueel

Aaah! the light at the end shines... thoda thoda chamka mujhe!! 😆😆

Am attempting another Transcript... am also trying to keep it as er... obtuse 😉😉 as you kept the chapter to keep the suspense alive... though i might be completely off track or might have made it too complex or too vague... judge for yourself... if it doesnt fit well with the current chapter or future direction junk it as a precap...

An adorable li'l imp holds the key,

To my heart's secret desire within me.

A weekend of promise, a bright sunny day

Yet clouds of doubt mar my way,

"What if...?" Life's eternal question I ponder...

The yellow dot reappears, my mind does wander...

All else dissolves but something has me in its hold,

Yet I yearn for the rainbow and that pot of gold!

I got my precap!! I got my precap!!

Incidentally, why are you saying the story will fall flat... it is going fabulously well, each time a cliffhanger!!

Lol...its not about the cliffhangers or the suspense. But the aura I wanted to create around the story seems lack luster.

Edited:

Ugh! Just read it after posting it... junk it... way too many liberties with the 'meter'... not reading well at all 😕😕

Nooo!!!😛

Originally posted by: Devil-By-Birth

Fab. update Jazz... 👏
But you never told me its going to be suspense in terms of its genre...😆 Nanhi, Maan-Sam, and ofcourse yellow dot...😆 Yahan we people are dying out of curiosity and you are saying story is falling flat.😲
Keep updating...😳

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

I finally managed time to go through this all over again...

Can I say how much I loved the whole story, the concept, the characters and the suspense ?

Plz do!!😍😆

Just reading about this little yellow dot seems to brighten up my mood too. Loving the bond between the senior and junior Khuranas and Handas...and Maan's character has been portrayed fabulously well.

Awww!! Thank you so much!🤗

So waiting for Sunday. Maan and Sameera - i promise - i love you - ??? Are they a couple? Or is Maan stuck between Nanhi and the yellow dot?

BTW, Nanhi is the best name I have heard in a looong time😃

😃

Continue soon (shooing away all those flat story ideas) 😊

Lol...will do!