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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
awesome part
loved it
y m feeling sameera planning something big
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62

wonderful update…loved geet's confidence and simplicity…thank God her original name is Sameera not meera ….Sameera's character looks like a fishy one…I am not clear but it's sure she is up to something big …please update soon…

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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
LOOVED IT!
wonder what Meera's plan is!
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: spvd

part 3
oh Meera is Sameera...
but in the character sketch u have mentioned Debina...
anyways i dont get any positive vibes from this Meera irrespective of who she is...
she knows Geet Handa and has some involvement in whatever it is...
Maan is impressed with Geet and also attracted towards her straight forwardness and truth...
cont soon dear...



I thought of bringing maans real wife n reel wife to be a part of my story...Don't you like it yaar..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
pls pls plsss continue sooom dear😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
amazin update
buh wa dus meea want 4m geet
iz she gna leave maan
plzz cont soon fanx 4 da pm x
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
tat was a awesome update...
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
ohhh tho meera is sameera..
tho im damn sure..
she will not be gud in future!!!!!!
lets seee wat the khel is ...
awsum update dee!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
loved the update...
i think i can guess wat meera is planning...
geet ke babaji uski raksha kare...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART-4

Hai friends,

Thank you all for your support .Special thanks for my friends who clicked like buttons and commented my updates.. Please encouraging me in the same way'😊I love you all.😉.

Geet woke up early in the morning.She made break fast n lunch.Rajji helped her in packing their lunch .Geet looked at her dresses..she never felt like that before as today.She had no bright dresses to wear.Then she thought of their situation and cleared her thoughts.She wear a green suit which she thought it was gud looking.she combed her hair..made a plat..she looked at rajji who was already ready wearing her uniform.

How am I looking..perfect for office na.

Yes didi.You are looking more beautiful today.

OK .lets go.I don't want to be late on my first day.have you taken the spare key of house..I'll be coming late from today.You have to be careful staying alone in the house.i've told our neighbour aunty to look after you.

Don't worry didi.Ican manage. N I have already taken the keys.Now lets go.

They stepped out of the house..They lived in a low class are..nearly a slum..

They walked through the narrow roads,hardly trying not to fell on others.There was a group of guys.,who started teasing them.

Hei dekho..two girls are coming..

Hei girls..lagthahai..bohut jaldi mei ho..

Didi..they are talking to us..Rajji was little feared..

I know..dont care about them..walk fast..

Hmm.

Guys I say..badi behen khubsoorat hai..

No.no..younger one is gud..see her skirt yaar.see her long legs..looking sexy.

Rajji pulled her uniform skirt little down..

Nearly,Rajji had tears in her eyes.They walked more fast n soon reached the main road.

Don't cry..jo log kamsor hona..wahi rothi hai.i thought you are a brave girl..Geet wiped her tears.

Didi,I don't like this area.

Me too...

shayad Hum wahi purane ghar mei hoti

lekin wo ghar rent zyadha tha..ye kam hai..hum dono k liye ye kafi hai..jab tak bhaiya bahaar nehi aathi,hume ye sab sehna padega.bcoz,.we are living alone..Dont ever care them..ignore them..sab teek hojayega...tum sirf apni padai pe dyaan dho..

hmm.

Rajji left to her school n Geet headed to her office by bus.

Maan,Meera ,Dev and Daadi were in the dining..Having their morning breakfast together.

Bro,How was ur interview yesterday.I saw a lots of girls outside the hall.He winked..

Daadi cut him.

Dev.Behave yourself.He is your brother. And he is married.

So what Daadi.He is still charming and girls are after him.

Tum kab sudrogi Dev.

Why should I daadi.Im not wrong.You must have seen the girls yesterday'doing their makeups again n again to impress bro.

Shut up Dev.

Kyun bro.Im telling the truth.

I'm done.Daadi left the dining.She don't want to be a refree between there teasing n arguing segment.

Dev.I think u are feeling jealous with Maan.

Mei aur jealous..why are you saying like that meera.

I think no one was attracted towards you.so you are feeling jealous.I'm right na.

Oh meer..u ..uu..uu.

Haan..mein..mein..mein..kyan karun..tell me did you liked any girls there .i'll fix ur marriage with her.

Omg.You all are behind my marriage.

Why Dev.You must also get married and settle in life.Daadi is worried about you.

Do you have any affair Dev.

Ufff..bro..no.

If you have anything like that Im not against it..Just bring her to me.I'll fix ur marriage.

Not again.Ok if I love some one Ill tell u all.Tab tak keliye..pls don't open this matter again..or else I'll go some where.

Ok.hum bath nehi karenge.

That's gud.ok have you selected ur secretary.

Yes.She will be joining KC from today.

she matlab a girl'I'm sure this time meer must have selected a women of 35 +.I know her.

Dev laughed.

Sry dev.You are wrong.The girl is 19..not in 35s

Then she must be ugly..r handicapped..

Why are you thinking like this Dev.She is so beautiful..n not a handicap as u think.She is in necessary of a job.so,Meer selected her 2 help her.

Bro..what u said now.She is beautiful.Are you having a crush on her.He whispered in Maans ears.

Dev ..You are crossing your limits.

Then its ok.u all r trying to settle me na. Then,.I'll see if she will suit me.

She is not like others.If she sees u behind her she will really slap u.

Bro.Do u know herbefore

No.Why r u asking.

U r talking like u know her for a long time.

To know some one u don't have to know her for a long time.sometimes a few seconds is enough to understand them.She belongs to a middle class family.she is a girl who only cares for her family.

I really think that girl has affected you..

Dev..mind ur words..

I think you both are arguing without any reason.Dev,I don't want to see you around her in that way ..Stay away from her.Meera said in a stern voice.

Ok ok.Why are you getting angry.I'll keep distance.

DEV's thought:I'm eager to see that girl.She has made these two against me.

Its getting late .shall we go now.

Ya.

The three left to KC

KHURANA CONSTRUCTIONS.

It was 8.45 AM.Geet entered the office.Adi was already there..As Maan has not yet reached,He introduced Geet to all the staffs.She wished them and they all wished her back.But there eyes were also seeing her like an alien.She could read it with their face expressions.Maan,Meera and Dev entered the office.Meera also read the feelings of their staffs with their behaviour.

Whats going On.?

Good morning sir.gud morning mam.

Dev whistled ...

Gud morning maan sir.dev sir..n gud morning mam.I'm introducing Geet to the staffs.

Have you finished.

Yes mam.

Geet come with me.

Yes mam.

Dev was staring Geet.No wonder.She is so beautiful as bro said.

Dev.You also come with me.

Yes Bro.

The four entered Maans cabin.

Geet.Take this file and go through it once.If you find there is no mistake make 10 photo copies of each.

Yes sir.

Then make a meeting for me with Ho's after lunch.You can get the phone numbers from Adi.

Yes sir.

Geet.I forgot,Meet my brother Dev.He is also one of the partnersof KC.

Dev extended his hands to shake hand

Hai Miss.Geet.

But geet ignored his hands n greeted him simply .

hello sir.

Dev didn't expect that .

Both meera n Maan had a smile on their face ,seeing Dev having a nose cut by geet.

Meera gave an angry glare turning to Dev.

Dev kept quiet.

Dev,you now go n have a visit on karan's site.

Yes bro.

Before leaving ,Dev Turned and saw geet with a smile on his face.

Meera saw Geet carrying her bag .

Why are you carrying the bag now too.

Mam.I don't know were is my working place.

Meera thought for a minute.It will be good If she is always infront of me.So,I can work out my plan.

Ok.come with me.Ill show you.She took her to the next cabin,which had a glass partition n a door between Maan n that cabin.

From now,You will be working with me in my cabin.

Yes mam.

Meera gave her some files and instructions of what she should do after the works Maan had given..

Maan can see them through the glass partition.

Geet sat opposite to Meera's chair and started to work.

Maan was totally confused. Noone of KC has a cabin other than Maan,Meera n Dev.

He called meera.Come to my cabin.

He put on the blinds n waited for meera.

Baby.what are you doing by sharing the cabin with her.

Oh Maan dear,Do you have any problem.He hugged her from back.

Yes.I cant bang into your cabin na.

So what. I'll stay full time in your cabin.

That also sounds nice. He started kissing her in herneck,collar bone and moving upwards to her cheeks .

Hmm.Ok I'll stay in ur cabin ,If u promise that you will never touch me.

What?He moved from her in shock.

Yes.You will not leave me a second.If I am with you.So,If u promise I'll shift into ur cabin.

That's impossible.How can I.You are saying ur husband ,not to touch you.You have never said like this before.have you got bored with me.

Maan was really angry with her.

Oh my jaan..you got angry soon.Did I say that..why are u taking it in a wrong way..She gave a small peck on his lips which cooled him.

I meant that if I stay in your cabin,we will do no work .other than making love.She winked.

He smiled as she said the truth.

Hmmm.Thats true sexy..He tugged her more close n bited her earlobes.

OK.But what will others think..we have never given any staffs a cabin before.Why particularly geet n that too for a new candidate on her first day.

You are right dear.I gave her my cabin particularly.

But why.

Have you seen her how restless she stood before other staffs.They were looking at her as a filth

I want to keep her away from them,till they have a respect on her.

You are thinking a lot about her.

Hmm...poor girl..n must say a great struggler..I want to help her.

Meeras Self thought.:I will never let you know about my plan.,maan..

Ok.When I have gone against your wish.Do as you like.

Then dear,Shall we go back to our work.We have to make a presentation for Mr.Chopra by tomorrow.

Hmm.ok.He left her half heartedly ..Meera left to her cabin.

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Sorry for any hindi n grammer mistakes..LOL

22.10..2011..2.45p.m.

Next :
PART 5
.pls guys you have to bare me for a week or more..Im tooobusy😆..for next 1o days..if i got time ..i'll surely update😉..Don't get angry...😡

HAPPY DIWALI😊
Edited by valli22 - 13 years ago

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