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Posted: 13 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: XxkiranxX

nice ff...i must say itz something different...all i wanna say is that many of the ff i read..the writers sometime leave the ff in the mid way thus breaking all of our hearts...just incase if u dont noe how to continue the story line...i have a suggestion...lets make meera a positive character...she loves maan but unfortunatly she has health problem...n is gonna die...so she is searching foe a perfect girl for maan...n the only person nows this is dev n he is helping meera.



or u can use this story line in another ff that u will make😛



I will not stop half way dear...I will finish all my ffs in my way...
Even,i had heart broking events when some left their ffs half way..
so,i will not give the same pain to others...
My pc is not working from last week...

I lost all my updates which i kept ready for posting.
..
so,only im taking a long time to update..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
nice ff
so sameera is tricking maan
but how come he is being tricked
i think meera will use geet for her benefits
she also has a history with teh handas
she is a negative character
waiting fir the mystery to unfold

shruti
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93




PART-5

Hai friends,

Thank you all for your support .Special thanks for my friends who clicked like buttons and commented my updates.. Please encouraging me in the same way'😊I love you all.😉.sry guys,I made you all wait for a long time...thanks for baring me😆

Meera and Geet started working together.Meera helped geet in all works.Geet was also a fast learner.She picked things faster than meera expected.she finished all the works Maan gave to her.Then Meera gave some more files to finish explaining things how to do.Then meera got busy with other works..n Geet was fully involved in her work.

Later at lunch time.


Meera went to Maans cabin to have lunch that Dadi has sent for them.
Adi came n took Geet with him to the staffs lunch room.Still all were having a different expressions on their face.Noone was interested in talking to Geet.
Geet,.This is pinky.Our receptionist.
Hai geet..Pinky having her parottas fully in her mouth wished her with a big smile.😃.
Sit down.She made geet sit next to her.Geet liked her friendly way of talk.Adi took the opposit seat.
How is your work going on.?Today is your first day na..are you tensed..
No...The work was really easy .Mam helped me a lot.She is really so kind.
Yes.maam is really friendly with others.And luckily,you are sharing her cabin.
Haan pinky...Someone is really lucky...those who are not capable is also getting cabins.n that too with.mam ..saying this sasha left the place.Geet felt uncomfortable.
Really ..noone has cabins...She asked Pinky..
yes..But there must be some reason..otherwise how can mam share her cabin with you..
She must have thought,you will be more helpful to her..Adi said ..
May be...
will you like to share my parotta..
no geet ..dont share..later she will tell she is very hungry..
adi sir..she is our friend ..we can share..i wont say im hungry..
Hmm.hmm.I know..How you will say..
What .
Adi sir..muje bhuk lagi hai..pls aap mere liye kuch lakar deejiye na..Adi imitated pinky...
Geet smiled.😊
You know geet..Pinky never feels her tummy full.
Adi sir..you are making fun of me..
No pinky...i'm saying the truth.You are getting fat nowadays...thoda kum khaya karo..
adi sir..You..you are telling me that i'm fat ..
Yes..Have you ever heared the word obesity pinky..It suits you well..
Adi n pinky were going on with their silly fights😆While all got back to their works..
When they finished their lunch.Adi said..dont take our fights seriously geet..
Yes sir..i know ..its friendly nothing serious..
But,somewhere she felt there is something more in between them..😛
Ok sir..I'm going back to my work.
Ok geet.you proceed.see you later.
Geet went to the cabin.
she started to work.
Maan called her.Geet come to my cabin.
Yes sir.
She knocked the door.come in.geet.
You know ,we have meeting with Ho's.You follow me..I want you to make the min..
Yes ..sir..

Her eyes searched for Meera,who was not there.
Maan understood it.
Meer has gone to karan's site.Dev had some doubts..so i sent her there.shall we move..
yes sir...
Maan n Geet entered the conference hall.
All the Ho's were already there.gudafternoon sir.all wished.
They were surprised to see a new girl with Maan,that too so beautiful,gud looking in her simple dress..
Gud afternoon all of you..Before starting our meeting I want to introduce my new secretary.Miss Geet..
.
.hai miss.geet.

All are eating her with their eyes.
hello everyone.
ok lets start...geet you may sit..He showed the chair opposite to him.
ji sir.
They started to discuss about the works n geet was fast making notes.
Maan saw her now n then.She will keep her pen in her mouth sometimes..will shake her head in no..if she made some mistakes..Maan got distracted from her every moves..but soon he will get his concious n will involve again in the work..
So.thats all for now gentle men..If you have any doubt or if you need any changes inform me..
ok sir.
.
Have a good day..
You too sir..
All of them left maneet alone..she was still biting the backside of pen.
Maan was staring at her.😆
Geet ..
His sudden call scared her.
Ye..s.. y..es sir..making all papers collapsed on floor,she stood up.
Oh no..My first meeting...that too i made a big blunder.now what will sir say..will he fire me..oh..babaji..pls help me..
she looked up and made a short prayer.
Maan looked up..what is she looking there.
.lol:)
Geet...
Ssoo..rry sir..galthi hogayi...please is baar maaf kardejiye..I 'll not repeat any mistakes in future..please sir..i'm extremely sry..pls sir..
She was excusing continuosly..without giving maan a chance to speak.
Maan came near Geet.He kept his index finger on her lips.
Chup.bilkul chup.I didn't say you anything..why are you getting hyper..I called you to know whether you have finished are not.
His fingers were still on her lips.Geet stood numb,starring at him.her hot breathe touched his fingers.Then only he realised he was touching her lips.He immediately removed his fingers.That was an awkward situation between them😳..Even geet did not refused his touch.
Maan felt guilty.

Sorry ..geet..Rearrange the papers and give me..saying he left the conference room..




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3.11..2011..7.45p.m.

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PART 6


Edited by valli22 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
me firstlovely update aise geet aur maan ke scene dete raho our meera ko out of scene rakho
lovely update👏
Edited by muraadlovesdd - 13 years ago
ritzy09 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95

nice update...will love to know a little bit about Sameera-Dev connection and her plan

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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
part 5
well well well Maan is getting distracted...
nice part...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
👏👏👏👏👏i have feeling that she will use geet for baby
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
ossum dear
superb
loved it dear
ohhh
somewhere maan is liking her
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
hmmm...so lovely part...lvd it...pls update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww tat was cute moment btw adi pinky and geet
manneet alone...
and he is disturbd by her actions..
great update akka..conti soon

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