FF- You are my love..Part30pg 123..feb 18 - Page 58

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Posted: 13 years ago
I 'm reading dis ff 1st time & read it in 1 go...
Superb storyline dear...👏👏👏
Meera's character is 2 gud dear...😳😊
Dev is 2 flirty...😉😉😉
Plz continue soon...


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Posted: 13 years ago
is geet preggie
holding stomach and head😆😆😆
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: valli22

nethu unnodathu quote pannum pothu current poidichu..

athanala post pannala..
yenna dear..aalaye romba naala kanom..
romba busy a
thanks for ur cmnts n welcome back..missed u

no valls akkka i was not here
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Originally posted by: ambbiha

is geet preggie

holding stomach and head😆😆😆
continue soon

no yaar..
still now nothing has happened between maneet..
then how can she become pregnant..
readers..
this time like is not working
n so my net too😭😭😭
pls bare me..
when my net works properly i'll post
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Posted: 13 years ago
like is not working in whole if valls akka ...so dont worry !!
its not individual net problem!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...
loved it,,,,,,
continue soon.,
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Congratulations Orkut Scraps
for reaching 100 pages valls akka !!!!
rock on !!!
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WAITING DIDI...
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PART-25

Hai friends,

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my network...ufff..troubled me...so only late yaar..

Once they entered devs cabin.,dev shouted at meera.

How could bro behave like this meera.how could he carry another girl in his arms.he didn't even notice we were also there.

Geet is unconscious.didnt u see it.

Ya..i agree..but,the drs are only down. he can call then up n look after her.

Meera kept quiet.

Wait…..when I cant bere this sight,then how can you meera…you are his wife.it must be you,who must have got angry at him.rather,u took me away from him..whats going on …

She kept mum..

He saw her sad face.

Tell me something ..damn it..why didn't u feel jealous .

Atlast meera opened her mouth.

Bcoz,I want then to become one.

Whaaat…dev uttered in shock..

Come out..come out again..

I want them to become one..in short I want them to love each other.

Dev looked at meera in disbelief.

U r gone mad..

Yes..in him..bcoz of you…

She leaned on the wall.tears started to flow.dev stood numb .meera is crying n he don't know what is troubling her.

Now,what are you crying for?

Meera did not answer.she was controlling herself.she was trying to behave normal.naina came to devs cabin banging the door.she came straight to meera.

Are u alright meera..?

Hmm..she nodded..

Dev looked at both of them.

Will u both say whats happening here?how did u know naina meera is not alright?

Naina looked at meera.

So,he also doesn't know .

I've never said to anyone.

What are u both talking about..stop talking in riddles.

Meera stood up.

First u have to promise me dev.

What?

Promise.

Why..

Wont u help me to solve a problem of mine. promise me u will help me..

No..until u tell me whats the problem.

Even if its my last wish dev..

Dev closed her mouth…

Don't talk rubbish..

I'm not talking rubbish..i'm saying the fact…I'm ..i'm counting my days..

m…ee…r….i ..i..don't believe..u r making me fool..isnt it?say yes..haina..

she nodded yes n then no..n hugged him.

dev looked at naina..

she is saying the truth dev..

dev s world froze there..he forgot to breathe.

Naina said about meeras health to him.devs eyes started to shed tears .he hold meera protectively as he could save her life by keeping in his embrace.

The silence was killing him more.

Naina ,Is there any chan..ces…he stopped as he couldn't continue more.

No..i've already discussed with seniors n even taking treatment abroad has also the same result.

Nooo..

Dev.i asked u ,will u help me..

In what meera…he looked at her helplessly..

To make maan n …

No meera..i cant help u..i cant think no one in ur place.

Ur brother loves her..

Dev looked at her in shock..

How could u say that meera..he cant love any other girl..u only have the right in him..

Yes..i agree..i have the right on him. the situation made us marry.

U both r happy in ur life.

We pretended to be..he doesn't love me..we were maintaining the relation..thinking it as a duty..

How can u say that. Bro loves her..

I know him better than u all.

Dev doesn't answer.he knows geet is a gud girl.she cares for everyone.her care towards dadi n all might have made an attraction to maan..he can't think above it, that they share a relation.

Meera read his mind.

They don't know they are in love.

Then how could u say its love meera.

If I prove maan loves geet ,,will u help me..i want maan to be happy dev.i want him to move on with his life. i cant give him any happiness dev.i want khuranas to have generations...i cant give him a baby.even u too want to hold his baby. Don't u..after my death,will u be able to see ur bro alone..fully broken..wont u try to make him happy n move on in his life..then why not from now.

He cant answer any of her questions.she had made him speechless with her arguments.

Answer my one question dev?have u ever seen maan taking me to hospital,whenever I fell ill. i don't say,he doesn't care for me. he has always pushed u to take care of me.n today,he carried geet to dr,he didn't even notice all were looking at him. He has forgot the surrounding.isnt this enough for u that maan loves geet…geet will keep maan happy dev.she will be a gud bahu,gud wife n gud bhabhi n friend to u.

No one can take ur place meera..maan cares for geet.even I do.but its not love.

Ok,if its not love ,I want to change it as love.Dev,I've brought up alone..i had no one with me..this family gave me enough love.that I can cherish in my next birth too.i want to give happiness to this family,that showered me love n care.dadima,u,maan now naina..i want all of u to be happy.dev,I beg u..pls fulfil my last wish.i want to see maneet marriage.if god has grace on me,I wish to see both of ur chidrens too.i know I'm greedy.but..this heart wishes so…

Meera…naina hugged her n cried…no one can be so gud like you.

Dev ..agree..to her…I want meera to be happy,.her worries will reduce her days.we want to take care of her.

Ok.

Dev half heartedly agreed to meera.

Dev,don't say about my health to maan. N others...

Why meera..he deserves to know about u..

Yes..but I don't want all to see me in pity…n maan will be lost worrying about me.he may not love me as a wife.but he treats me as a gud friend of his.i want my friends to live happy..u n maan..

Meera…we don't deserve ur love…how can u think about us in this time too.

Bcoz this is my family…she smiled hiding her pain.

Dev sighed.his heart was filled with burden n guilt,that he cant save his friend. N doesn't know till now she was ill.

31.1.2012..1.30pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aziza_ahmed

Congratulations Orkut Scraps

for reaching 100 pages valls akka !!!!
rock on !!!
forgot yaar..
my third one reached 100th page..
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