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Waiting for ur next update...this is really interesting...im eager to read the next part..
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how much more time dear
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Mahsoos...
Part 10



"I will sleep on the sofa". Geets cunning voice told maan. He disagreed. The facial expression was enough for geet. He did not approve.
"I will sleep on the sofa. You can take the bed."
"as you wish!"
Maan left the food on the side table and walked towards the other extra room.
Geet stared as her husband disappeared. The pain and agony, hatred along with frustration all came out at the same time. A drop of tear rolled down unconsciously. She laid on the bed, holding the spread tightly close crying...

Maan rests his big arm over his forehead, lying on the sofa surrounded by mirror and cool wind. It soothed him. No matter how much he may try to run way from any type of travel, any type of emotional bond it always hunts him down...

Midnight , a sudden noise woke him up. He sits up instantly and tries to concentrate towards the loud noise. He slowly makes his way to the main room, feels the light which was on.
"what happen?"
Geet jumps and looks back at him then back to her wardrobe.
"it's everything all right?"



Geet ignored his voice again and then walked passed him. switching of the light then to the bed. Maan felt rather heart, yes it was his fault not to make sure she did not know the truth but talking would not harm. He closed the door and left.

Next morning, it's geets 2nd day, she have showed no decency to walk down and show her face to any member of the family, one way it was alright as everyone knows but they expected at least geet to show some decency.
Avantika uncomfortably smiled at everyone. Dadima was reassuring his other son & there family everything will be alright. Maan joined the breakfast table while his next one is empty.
"geet is not coming maan?" avantika softly asked, while looking at everyone else. Few of her brother in law along with there children was eying avantika. Everyone in the house was blaming her and dadi.
Dev sat on the other side comforting his mother.
"no!"
vicky sat there quit. Anni suggested to help. "she didn't eat anything from last night. I will take some food!"
Avantika did not have the courage to go up there and face geet, somewhere she was also blaming her self...
Anni took a plate full of breakfast and made her way...


Anni knocks, a loud knock before she walked in. Geet jumped, she sat in middle of the bed, Hugging her knee in hunger. Her black wet hair dripping with water droplet making the spread wet...
"b-bhavi..."
Geet again kept quit. Glued to far corner of the bed. "bhavi please eat something, you didn't even drink water since yesterday. You will become Ill like this."
She came by and sat on the opposite side, still unaware where exactly she possible could be. "why you punishing your self. It wasn't your fault. It's... It's ..." she looked down... "it's all our fault... We thought you knew, we should have known better no one would - would like to merry someone blind.."
There was pain on her face, geet looks at her instantly with her last words, there was sympathy yet anger still out there like a scorching fire. It was too strong and she possible couldn't ignore how her life have been cheated to merry someone blind.
"leave..." geets croaky voice whispered out. "get out" she was in no mood to listen to someone, constantly reminding her that she is married to a blind man. Her husband is blind. "I don't want any one to remind me I am married to a blind man. Get out"
Anni felt heart, yet she knew well she didn't mean any of those words her anger probably clearly justified. She consoled her self.
Annis heart face killed geet even further, she never been a girl who can be mean to anyone but the situation it was provoking her and now she was hating her self even more.

Anni walks out leaving the food. Didn't argue back, as anni leaves maan walks in. He could still guess by the smell she have not ate anything.
"geet! You need to eat"

His one word was enough to snap at him to, she wasn't sure what exactly happen to her, acting so rude, so wild. It wasn't something she Usually does but today, she have to take this anger out at. Someone.
"I Will not eat! So stop telling me what to do!" geet stands up, Wiping her tears off. Opening her cupboard.
"I won't If you eat!" he stood by the bed. Listening to her golden payel moving from one end of the room to another.
"I am not here to listen to your rubbish, so if you can shut up I will be great full." she took some normal cloths out of the wardrobe. Jense and top and Hurriedly walks in to the bathroom.
Maan hard the loud bang.She walks out again to take the towel and then another loud bang.

Geet silently stood under the shower, hating the way she was behaving. Couldn't talk in anger. Her mind was like all Zam up, stuck in one situation, just be rude. She hugged her self and silently screamed in annoyance, hating the thought how helpless she is, she couldn't even run way. Even suicide sounded much better. She closed her eyes, letting the water run through her petite body. Crawling down. But then suddenly her head felt the dizziness, everything around the bathroom started to spine. Not giving her body any type of food did not help, she was dehydrating. Geets hand looked for a support. It's pointless, there was nun. She slipped and her nude body slammed her head against one of the wall. She laid in the bath tub, water from the shower started to cover her body. The eyes slowly started to close, almost dying... It felt to good for her...



Maan hard the snap noise. He wasn't satisfied at all. The bathroom door never had the door lock but he knocked. He knocked few time but there was no answer except the noise of the water. He wanted to leave it, probably it was shutting of the shower door, she have been beyond angry.
Maan left it for few more minutes but his heart was restless for some odd reason, really did not wish to ignore the situation and walk in...
"geet... GEET.."
He called to get some response but nun. He opens the door slowly, still she did not reply. The water was still running and it sounded rather to silent.
"geet... I hard noise... What happen? Are you alright?" he still did not here any reply at all. No movement, just the silent. Maan hurriedly walked towards the shower door which was locked,
"geet I am opening the door! Are you alright?"
There was still no answer, maam opens the door and tries to walk in to to feel her and close the shower but instead he nearly tripped over the lifeless body lying on the floor. He instantly sat down turning off the shower realizing she was unconscious and mostly because of her not eating.
"geet! Geet..."


well... more scared...
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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
R
yippie...hurrah🥳,,,,me 1st me 1st!!!😃
ask me hows it to rush to res ur 1st place tht
too with a cell phone...damn slow net...but still i managed!!!!

wonderful update keya!!!!!
naturally geet feels so betrayed...
n that too by her own parents whom she
trusted blindly...

this is not sumthing u can easily forget!!!!
she needs time and space to open up..
understand each relation n her own dilemma!!!!


maan is trying to be patient with her!!!
hope she understands everything real soon n stop
hurting herself...
thts gonna be of no use!!!!!


please update the next part soon
within 10 parts this
has becum my fav FF of urs!!!😳



Edited by kawaii_geet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fire plz jaldi do ab ore intezaar nai hota sone ko jane se pehle bas ek baar open kia bus updating deki neend kaisi aaye gi plz jaldi do
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks for update i will back after study
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Posted: 14 years ago
mahsoos is to feel
for you






for maan condition
so update is on
will read it first
Edited by pritm - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely yaar...dyng 2 read more...i know maan is not any other blind man...he is someone special...waitin 2 read more...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG OMG OMG U KNOW I M A SILENT READER OF UR MOST FF'S BUT THIS ONE IS FAR MOST CLOSE TO MY HEART...
LOVED IT...TOOO GOOD...I CANT HELP BUT COMMENT ONLY...
VERY VERY WELL WRITTEN...
LOVED THE EMOTIONS EXPLAINED IN THIS FF...
I M FELLING VERY VERY BAD FOR MAAN N GEET...BOTH R RIGHT IN THERE PROSPECTIVE ...
AWESOME...I HVE NO MORE WORDS TOO APPRECIATE THIS...

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