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Posted: 13 years ago

I HOPE YE SEVEN DAYS R GOING TO BE WONDERFUL IN MAANEETS LIFE... LOVED IT

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seven days to maya's birthday...but will maan b able to stop her after that
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part 42
i did not get pm for this part...
its like joining 2 broken pieces of mirror...
the division will be always there...
poor Geet cant let it go nor accept also...
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 43
nice part...
so they are friends...
lets see what they decide...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 42
i did not get pm for this part...
its like joining 2 broken pieces of mirror...
the division will be always there...
poor Geet cant let it go nor accept also...


hey sorry yaar... i might have missed you while sending pms..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 43

Part 44

Day one...

Maan and geet met in morning as usual in the dining table for break fast where as there usual chit chat begins about geet's shift too new home and about the preparation for maya's birth day plan...which is about to come on 6th day from and 7th day morning geet going to shift to her new home...

where maya is under dadi's care today didn't come to dining table from morning where dadi is going to leave for her pilgrimage tomorrow as maan and geet planed to stay in KM for 7days dadi decided to give some privacy to them...

After they finish there break fast geet went to catch her usual bus maan came out of mansion in his car while coming to the main road he found geet is waiting for bus in a bus stop..

He already found its late than her usual time but yet she is waiting for bus there in that stop...

He get down from his car and asked her...

Geet you didn't get your bus...

No its late already now...don't know what to do...

Why cant you take another mode of transport then? why you waiting her now?..after seeing her confused reaction he explained Catch some taxi or auto..

Today is a national strike for auto and taxi drivers...

Oh.. ok then get in the car I will drop you in your office...

Its ok... you will get late its very long for you to go to your office form mine... I will manage...she said watching the time in her watch she knows she can't manage where already its late..

Its ok geet... any ways am not going to office today I am having an important work in noida site am going there... you come I will drop you...

saying that he opened the car door for her to get in..where she can't neglect further as she need help now..

She get into his car's back seat...

Where he is in the front seat near the driver because they think they need to maintain the distance the same friendship distance till she shift..

There travel went silent with staring out side the window...Till she reach office...

after get down from the car she turned towards him and said

Thank you maan...

It's my pleasure...with that she didn't stand for a more minutes and rushed in to the office

He seen her going inside the office with her colleague with chit chatting some thing and seen her till she disappears into that office..

Evening at KM...

Maan who comes to home at his usual timing and founds no one present there in the KM when he asked the servant told...

Geet madam ji... is in her room till after noon...

After noon?he is shocked to hear that usually geet wont come in afternoon to mansion

Ji sab... madam ji... is not yet took her lunch and dinner..

Kya hua..?

Pata nahi sab...she came soon from office today and didn't speak with any one she locked her self in her room

Badi madam ji be kosis ki magar unonae bahar nahi aya..

Ok then..where is dadi maa?

badi madam ji went to her friends place ...from where she is going straightly to her pilgrimage.. she already informed maan about that but due to his busy schedule he forgets..

He changed his clothes freshen up and came to geet's room he knocks her bedroom door'

Geet'with out opening the door she answered

Hmm..

Its me maan...

So what..?

I thought you will like to talk now...

No I don't want to talk to any one now you just go away...

Ok then no need to talk ... can you make my coffee.. I had severe head ache and had a lots of work to do.. i need coffee...

go and ask nakool..

he will make a bad coffee and make my headache double...he smiled

If you are not in mood to make then its fine i will manage saying that he is about to move from the door but he knows she will definitely open the door...

Where he hears the door click sound he stops there

You really got head ache... if you had any doubt then check it by your self he folded his arms across his chest and wait for her to react

She put her palms in his forehead to check and feels its warm its his normal temperature but yet she didn't say any thing

Wait for a while I will make your coffee...

Where after she went out of her room he went inside her room and found maya sleeping he pushed her tiny hairs strands behind her ear with his fingers and sits in a half lying position beside her in bed

Where after a while geet came in with his coffee and gave it to him after he held his cup in his hand he asked...

What happens geet is there any problem in office you seems to be very disturbed...

Nothing serious...she said looking down he founds there is some thing troubling her but yet he don't want to talk about that if she is not comfortable to tell that by her own..so changed the topic

Had your dinner...?

No...she want to tell but just shook her head..

Then come with me...i too need a company for dinner...

This way there first day ends not very interesting and no any change in there behavior...

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part 45

here after no precap..

with in few update going to wrap this FF till then bear me...

i hope you all like this

criticize this..

sorry for silly mistakes..

Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice one dear
i think prob inoffice
hope in 7 days everything ll be fine
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem update what troubling geet is it office problem
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing part.
Loved maan's proposal 2 make geet stay in KM 4 7 days. It was cute.
Continue soon.

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