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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry for the late reply

fantastic update👏

i want to give u a bone crushing hug for this update 🤗

dadi's talks were really mind blowing

the way she made maaneet understand was really nice

ippo maaneet ex hubby wify se friends aayittanga

thats a gud improvement

poga poga friendship edhuva maarumnu paakalam😳



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Posted: 13 years ago
As always u r too much...too too good dear keep going ...love Jass
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 42

PART 43

She at last get a home for rent in delhi near her office and she is ready to shift there tomorrow she told maan about that through phone who is happy for her and they are already decide to meet in the restaurant in the evening where geet promised him to give treat for getting her first salary along with a happiness of she got house for rent...

It's great...

Yeah I told you na it's the great place where we can get very tasty food...

Hmmm...after a pause to broke the silence he continued so what next?

What next she shrugged that's it I already gave advance to the house and going to shift..

When ??...

May be tomorrow i will take off to office and shift there....

Tomorrow ? with a surprising shock he asked as he didn't want her to move so soon from KM

Haan... she said with a care less expressions every thing is fixed then why should make it late...

After that we you wont come to mansion right...

ji nahi... said with confident I used to visit dadi often...

But that is when you gets time in your busy schedule... he give a disappointing

Haan...#he is correct but what's my position there now# she thought with in her self for a while and replied to him what am going to do there when it's not my home...she looked for his reaction from the corner of her eyes while sipping her tea...

He wants to tell her that its always her home he have all rights in her but he didn't say that instead he said...

Ok then if you decide to move away form KM then why you can spend some more days there with us...with me he didn't say the last words to her but with in him self..

Already I had spent more than 2 moths there I think...she knotted her eye brow...

yeah he knows that but what's wrong in some more days with him he want to ask her but he simply said..

yeah...Then why can't another 7 days one week..

7 days? ... she questioned she want to say No i cant staying in khurana mansion as a stranger for 4 moths is more than enough for her she can't stay in her own home which is before 1year like this as guest or some stranger... she want to say NO but she didn't...where her heart is also longing for some more time in KM with them especially with him...

Yes geet you know with in that we are having maya's birthday too we made it special for her its her first birth day... we both are can celebrate it together in mansion which her home and----" yours too is the last words struck between his throat and his mouth..he want to say those but he didn't...

he don't want to make the situation odd for her by saying that...but after a long pause he continued with the appropriate words...

and then its only few more days we are going to share the same roof together so we make each and every movement special...

which will remain in our memories for ever... he almost whisper those words when it become hard for him to say those memories these one year they both live with each other memories he don't want that in the rest of his life...

he want to be with her.. speak like before fight like kids and at last cuddle and sleep next to each other...but now its all in his dreams and wont ever repeat in his life...

She thinks for a while and nodded...

As she too wish the same he can't say NO and at the same time she can't say yes too him where her words lump between her throat remembering his words about memories she too feeling the same for the past one year every thing in there past live is with in her memories which make her live till now from that fate full day...


she simply nodded... after a appropriate silence which usually prevail in between them untill

The waiter came for collect there dirty plates and placing the bill

she continued after he left...

Ok then I will inform the land lord about change in shifting date ..

she said that at last with a deep breath

he smiled with the full heart as she accept for staying in KM another 7 days and gave a relieve breath and gazed her with his glowing eyes which is she is able to see in his after one year 2 months 4 hours 5 mins and some few minutes ...

She smiled in her corner of her lips seeing his ever glowing face and paid the bill as this is her treat he too let her pay for the first time today as he is in heaven after a long time dinner date with his ex-wife..


they both decide to for mutual divorce first, to be friends latter and now to stay under the same roof for 7 days merely a week together under a same roof...Is they can with stand with there decision of there divorce after this 7days...

Is this 7days going to change there life? It will?

will these 7 days going to remain as the sweet past memories for them else going to change there future...

Lets see what there destiny has in store for them...😛

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part 44

here after no precap..😊😊😊

with in few update going to wrap this FF till then bear me...

i hope you all like this

criticizing will always be accepted😃

sorry for silly mistakes..


Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i hope it.ll.change there
future dear
waiting for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesme update..
Hope these 7 days change their life..
Waitng 4 next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome Laxmi..

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear
loved it
wonder wat will happen in 7 days
hope maaneet gts settled
plz cont soon
thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
hiii

just read ur FF in one go...loved it...PM mee...just read ur going to wrap up ur FF in next few updates...geet didnt read sameera letter...will she read it in future...will this FF end with happiness...hope every thing in place at the end of FF...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: harshithaaa

hiii

just read ur FF in one go...loved it...PM mee...just read ur going to wrap up ur FF in next few updates...geet didnt read sameera letter...will she read it in future...will this FF end with happiness...hope every thing in place at the end of FF...


thank you so much
am glad that you loved it...😳
it will surly end in a happy note don't worry i hate sad endings

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