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Posted: 13 years ago

Time lam irukku neenga FF writer ungaluku thaan time irukumanu ennaku theriyala 🤣🤣


Ellarum namma dealing ah pathu kaari thupuranga 🤣🤣🤣
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oye reveal paniteya..😆😆

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Originally posted by: nishha


Ennaku thaan VMSS illayai 🤣

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Part 41

Part 42

Geet and maan once look at each other...
dadi continues..

Maan what you thought I like to separate you both for ever...

you think I can do it..

Geet is my pothi more than bahu I choose her for you...saying that she cupped geets face...

I know you love each other but now you living alone due to some reason....she took a breath and continued I know that reason would be strong enough for you both to decided about your divorce but it doesn't mean you both stop loving each other...she turned towards maan and said

I know that at any cost you wont accept for another girl in your life... she turned to see geet and said as well as geet can't see you with other girls...

Both again share a glance

You both are made for each other...

There may be some misunderstanding and mistakes in between you but the love you had for each other is remain same till now...

What ever may be the reason for your decision to live alone but am sure It wont be greater than your love you are having for each other

I either don't want to see you both in pain by living alone...so I decide to play a game of jealous in between you both with the help of pari.. i thought that will help you both to understand your love...

That's why I created a drama of maan's second marriage I thought that will bring you more closer but i didn't expect this will create such chaos and make you anger maan.....

I didn't even realize that he loves you more than me geet...

Dadi maa...he whispers

I am not worried beta but am happy to know that you love geet a lot ...I came to know that she is your life you are ready to loose all others for her...

haan... i am worried for this that you both are loving each other a lot but not letting other to know about this by keeping your self in dark

Why you both bearing this pain why can't you both accept the fact that you both live for each other...

What ever the reason now you both have to decide...she took a relief breath and continues

decide your life now think about maya's future...

I love you both and I can't see my children in pain any more...

Saying that she hugged them they both hugged her in side ways where as both meet each others eyes once behind dadi when there hands touch others...

Evening @ KM...

Geet is standing on the balcony thinking about dadi's words she can't decide any thing now she is perplexed and thinking what and how to decide about her life...

Seeing her confused state maan came near her and stand beside her and continued...

Don't get confused...she turns and see him near her

I know geet now you are confused to make any decision don't get confused with dadi's words she didn't react for a while...

What you have already decide is the correct decission...

now You have your own life you got job don't get confused.. your decision of living alone is correct and now your are independent and don't think about any thing else now....

but what ever dadi said is true maan.. that's true that i love you, want to live with you but the fact is I can't forgive you for what you have did to me... how can I accept that...that... you cheated me knowing that how can I live in peace with you.. you broke my trust which i can't believe even now... I can't forgive you for this forever...

Yeah I accept that...that i love you.. i am jealous about you... I can't see you with other girls and I don't want to punish you by giving tears to you but our relationship is over maan its end in broking my trust I don't want to reconstruct our relation which is now with lack of trust I can't trust you any more.. she looked straight in to his eyes with anger and pain but one question in me is

What about maya's future...? is am doing justice to maya?

I know that geet... i know you can't live peacefully with me with out trusting me...

even I don't want to see you like that...you don't want to forgive me I didn't deserve that even your love... what you decide is right your decision is right... don't be confused and change your mind for others don't think about other things don't think about maya... you can change your decision for her but can us give her a peace full life like all other parents...if you are not happy in our relationship...

am her father she is my kid....saying that he looked maya who is playing in the garden with some servants... I will take care of her future but for her future you don't need to go against your wish and happiness...if we thinks to live together now for maya we can't be ever live happily... its our life if we need to live together...we cant choose to live together just for others or maya's future what ever...

But what all these I don't want you to marry any one else...am looking for your wish on my birthday even I hate you but still I need you behind me when ever am facing problems...you too need me at your struggling times..right... she questioned him with her questioning eyes..

Hmmm.. I too need you with me in all my struggling times but for these reason we can't get reunited we miss each other but what about that...

he stopped as he can't speak where she turned her face remembering that fateful day in irritation...I did you don't want you to bear me through out your life time.....

what we have to be done then..

Let us be friends just good friends...

She questioned him through her eyes...

Let be friends geet there is no expectations in friendship... we can forgive our friends we can live as friends as a well wisher good advisera good friend... so accept me as your friend geet...

Let be friends...

She took a deep breath of relief and thought

# yeah its correct we won't expect any things from our friends but we can share our happiness and our problems#

she nodded in yes and give him an accepting look

She decide to be friendly with him they smiled to each other for there decision to be friends forever

But a broken relationship can end in good friendship lets see further....


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Precap:::so going to shit to your new home tomorrow? why cant you post pone it

what am going to do there when it's not my own home...she looked for his reaction from the corner of her eyes while sipping her tea....

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part 43

i hope you like this...

sorry for English and Hindi mistakes all are due to my limited knowledge...

feedback's are always welcome...




Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Ravi.

Naan padikala osum update 🤣


nee odha vanga pore podu mudiyala enala ipa spam panna vituru aala...😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nishha


nee odha vanga pore podu mudiyala enala ipa spam panna vituru aala...😆😆


Spam is the secret of our success 🤣
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Originally posted by: Ravi.


Spam is the secret of our success 🤣


enala mudiyala type panni kai valikudu 😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesme part.
Lovd maan and maya's scene

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nishha


enala mudiyala type panni kai valikudu 😆😆


Unga update osum but story enna 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
maaneet became friends
continue soon

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