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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vanadhi

nisha nisha nisha


po una aduchu ka mudiyala super nice loved it or not enough to describe crazy ...thum...


are you sure... 😳
you are not making fun of me right...😕

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Posted: 13 years ago
awww so sweet the bap-beti scene...yea true maaya is bilkul like her mom...chup bilkul chup sunkar hi chup ho gayi...
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb but i really want geet to forgive maan for maya i know ki geet maya ko maan ke bina bhi bada kar sakti hai hume geet ki vo smile vapus chahiye jo us incident ke baad puri tarah se gayab ho gayi hai continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 35
nice part...
so here ends the past?
and from now on the future tracks?
Maan is attached to Maya but the betrayal is too much...
time is the only medicine...
but what he did is unforgivable...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
you are totally like geet...after a pause he said... my little geet he said that by pinching her cheeks slightly with his long figures...making sure that it shouldn't hurt her...
Part 35
Part 36

She turns her face to see him and smiled he asked her

you want to see more pics of mumma she giggled and try to speak mummm..mumm..

he took her in his arms and go near to his wardrobe and took a album form there and came again to his bed and sit there by placing maya in his lap and the album in front of them...

which contains these pics...










how can maya stop laughing seeing these cute pictures of her parents she laughed out louder...

After seeing her laugh he can't control himself he too laughed along with her...after a long time the whole mansion is at surprise hearing both of there laughs they didn't see there Boss smile for the past one year... mean while geet who is cooking in kitchen and seeing the stairs for every seconds to have a sight of maya...she missed her badly yet now after her birth she didn't slept a night with out her...

After a while there laughs ends and maan place maya in the bed near the photo album

#Its enough I had seen more tears on geet's eyes here after no more tears I will like to see geet's smile from now on...I want to see my old geet back who always smiles and talks with out stopping even to take a breath...#

after this thought he turned to her side and said...

I won't let your mumma cry... its my promise... you both are my life I can't see her week face any more ...i will bring back her smile at any cost ... he called adi and made some arrangements through phone and took maya'

ok my little prince your mumma will be waiting for you..

now you go I will get back you soon...

he kissed on her forehead and her little arms and called.

vinodh'who is coming running towards his room and said..

ji sir...

Took maya to her room ...

he obeyed and took maya from him and wait... where is geet?...

madam ji is in kitchen sir preparing break fast for dadi maa..

ok then...go..

he freshen up and came down for break fast... where as usual no one spokes with each other the same silent prevail in mansion geet who is still cooking all at a sudden noticed that there is a huge sounds coming from outside she rushed to there to check where the sound come from..in the entrance all her friends are assembled adi yash pari riya meera and more present there with a gifts cards and flowers and shouted in courus

Surprise!!!!!! and happy birth day geet...

to her surprise today is her birthday and she forgets it...how can you all remember I totally forgets that today is my...

geet..c'mom we are your friends... how can we forget your birthday...saying that adi smirked at maan

maan who smiled through the corner of his lips finished his break fast soon and try to move away from there... while crossing there friends group he stand for a while and asked...

adi and pinky you are not coming to office today...

sir today we took personal leave today...

ok then... saying that with out seeing any one he moved away after going away from them he again turn back to see her smiling face...now she is smiling its not her usual smile with glowing eyes but it brings some changer to her face...

thodi si smile from her face make his day'

at least this smile he can bring on her face today..he kept his promise to bring at least a slight smile on her face... seeing her at a last glance he moved to his office

#he didn't remember my birthday its OK but at least he could have wished me in front of others if it not at least he has send his wishes in message...what am thinking why am waiting for his wish today why I keep on checking my phone for a his single message... I hate him I hate him to the core he didn't deserve my love she fights with in her self thoughts...#while poring juice in pari's glass...

Where all others are dancing where adi is holding maya in his hands and dancing by holding her little fingures...

what geet ?where you have lost now...

nothing pari just like that...

geet I want to ask you one thing 'if you don't mind then can i?

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Precap: geet gets job and now searching house for rent...

part 37


-------🤪 thanks to all for mentioning this... now link is corrected...

i hope you like this...

feed back are always welcome...
sorry all silly mistakes due to my limited knowledge...
Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
nishu
finally past is over
oh my god
how much maan cares for maya
if geet would have read this update
she would have surely forgiven maan
it was tooo gud
love it
pls cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 36
it was really gud
oh so geet madam was eager for maan's wish
common maan i know maan has a special
surprise gift for geet
the pics were really cut
i loved the one in which geet was in the blue salwar it was funny😆
cont soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sarkh26

part 36

it was really gud
oh so geet madam was eager for maan's wish
common maan i know maan has a special
surprise gift for geet
the pics were really cut
i loved the one in which geet was in the blue salwar it was funny😆
cont soon dear


i too like that pics a lot its very cute na...😆😆😆

no surprise gift for geet from maan... maan didn't plan any thing further...😭 he feels his wish and presence will hurt her so he thought better to avoid going before her is the greatest gift for her....
Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry dear after this update i really feel geet does not deserve maan, i am sorry for being rude and know that people would not like me, but i am helpless and have to vent out, she hates him, yeah, so true, bcoz she does not deserve a person like maan

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