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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: t_areeb

and what happened to sam?


you really want to know about sam now 😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
geet can't leave her alone for a while where she will brought more troubles to her self and others...any have the servants in KM help her to keep an eye on maya some times which again turns into trouble for geet which makes maya more adamant due to every ones love, care and attention towards her...

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one day while playing with her in the garden geet left maya in the care of servants and gone to give medicines to dadi... Maya who is now alone playing with an array of servants in the garden with all her toys around.. maan who notice this from his guesthouse while he came out to attend the call...

when some one came in the gate and troubles the security in the gate.. nakool and some servants went to rescue the security...leaving maya alone there with her toys maan who again went to inside and came after a while the scene in front of him was maya who is crawling behind a moving toy car along with it and tries to catch that while its moving when it fells in side the swimming pool she too fell inside the pool of water at that sight maan who came running jumps soon in to that pool and saved her with in minutes

its the first time he is holding maya in his hands...he has seen her close only once in the hospital 7 or 8 months before on the day she had born... he didn't took her in his hands till now he don't know he may had a chance in future till now but this time in this critical situation he hold maya in his hands he can feel her tiny figures on his shoulders and a little legs caressing his stomach his eyes went moist at close sight of her she has grown not too bigger but yet she has grown he missed her very badly...

he has seen her only from the long distance till now for these days after geet came to KM..his heart is always long to take maya in his hands and kiss her... but he didn't do that yet because he knows that will hurt geet more over he promised geet that he wont claim any right on maya ever..He knows very well if he took maya then geet wont regret but yet it hurts her he don't want to hurt her any more...

after a long time he has his maya in his hands this thought makes his eyes moist and he kissed her continuously as she is out of danger form losting her life...

in a while all servants came running towards him after they hear the huge sound of some one is jumping into the pool...all came and stand still for a while when they hear his roaring which makes geet to come out and stunned to see the sight...

she could see maya and maan in wet clothes she didn't understand any thing for a while till she hears his angry shout at the servants...

what is happening here ?if you can't take care of the baby then why you all taking the responsibilities ? he shouted at every one with his fuming eyes

where you all went leaving her alone here? now no one is dare to answer his questions...

and what a necessary to bring her near the swimming pool...geet who understand the situation soon went near him and took maya back from him and started kissing maya who is crying bitterly now ...

After that incident geet can't refuse maan to touch maya... maya is also used to play with him all the time and geet thinks its all going to happen for the few months till she stay in KM for dadi.. after that she will leave the mansion and maan forever where he can't see maya ever...

But the things changed when maya becomes more close with maan day by day with in three months they share a very great bond...like maan can't leave the home or go to sleep with out kissing maya and maya can't resist going into his hands when he is near her..

After that some struggling weeks passed between maan and geet dadi made her emotional drama which makes maan shift to KM...maan shift to KM which brings maan and maya more closer which made geet to think about shifting to meera's house...

When she tried to shift to meeras house maan decided to go away from KM and also away from her sight till she stay's in KM... and went to Bangalore making an excuses that he is going to start a new branch there... which in turn turns in to trouble when maya cried continuously missing his presence around her and which leads to a severe fever for her...

this happen with in two days after he left KM which made geet to insist dadi to call him back to delhi for maya who's health is turning worse but inside she started worrying what will happen to maya if she took her away for maan all the while...(this is prolog part in which geet worries about taking maya away from maan)

which thought is killing her inside till now...

------------NOW----------------!!!!!!!!!!

#how can am going to keep maya away from maan? ... is she really needs her dad now ?am I doing any sin by separating a daughter from a loving and caring father?... what happen when maya grows older ?will she accept maan ? will she able to accept her fathere for what he had done to me? will she respect him after knowing the fact about our seperation?...what happens if she thought that I took a wrong decision and after that if she decided to go along with her father means?...then what will happen to me ?how am going to live with out her?#

After these thoughts unknowingly she drifted off to sleep...

Morning in KM maan's room...

Maan wake up when he found some thing wet on him he is surprised at the first latter he found maya who pee on his shirt in sleep and wet it completely when he tries to wake her she started to crying...

He took her to his wash room and tried to wash her when a chill water droplets touched her body he again had to fight with her loud shouts and cries which is very audible to the entire mansion but now no one is dare to enter maan's room...as they all know about his anger limits...

he tried his level best to calm her down but all went in drain at last he bring her back from wash room after giving a slight bath to her with out applying soap...

he bring her out of wash room by wrapping a towel over her and then he reached his wardrobe where there is a small secrete locker in which he kept a lot of tiny and beautiful cloths for her which he brought for her every month and also when ever he gone out of city he will buy a new dress for her but he is dare to send that to geet...in that all he pick his favorite pink dress for her to change he used to keep all the dress for maya from her birth till now but he didn't have guts to show it to geet yet...


with in seconds he dressed her up and yet she didn't stopped to cry he again try very hard to console her by giving her every thing he get in his hand from his mobile to car keys but yet she didn't stop her crying..when he can't do any thing to stop her tears...

he get frustrated and started to shout at her with fake anger by rolling his eyes..

chup bilkul chup...

she remains silent for a while after seeing the sudden change over in his action and to his high pitched voice...which makes him burst in to laughter seeing her scary innocent face and took her in his arms holding her protectively placed her in his lap after he sit on the bed...

After seeing him smile to her maya too started to smile when he put her in his lap she bend towards the table near by the cot and trying to hold of one photo frame of geet in which she is smiling like an angel,a pure innocence is spread all over her face.. when maya is struggling to take that frame maan who took it in his hands and seen the face of geet which seems very innocent and cute smile on her face which attract him a lot before whenever he sees her but now she lost her smile on her face..which is now always seems to be very tired and weak he compared the face in the pics of geet with the present geet and remain silent...

He seen maya is laughing at the pics and shouting

mummumm '.mumm' maan placed his hands on her hands and prevent the frame from dropping from her hand

You love mumma a lot na...she respond by nodding her head up and down along with her head her whole body moves...

You know mumma too loves you a lot she can't live with out you...she giggled seeing him..

He took a deep breath you both are having the same qualities like mischief, smile ,innocence, adamant ,,,...she looked down back to her mumma's pic..

you are totally like geet...after a pause he said... my little geet he said that by pinching her cheeks slightly with his long figures...making sure that it shouldn't hurt her...

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Precap:to her surprise today is her birthday and she forgets it...how can you all remember I totally forgets today is my...

part 36

at last flash back track is over...


i hope you like this...

feed back are always welcome...
sorry all silly mistakes due to my limited knowledge...

Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanx dear for ur lovely work...plz continue soon...😳



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Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesme part.
Lovd maan and maya's scene
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely part dear
so now we can see the present dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
so now all flash back is over
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh gosh had tears in my eyes when i read this part
it is so nice to see the dad and daughter relationship, oh loved the way maan has collected the dress for maan...

pls geet forgive maan 😭😭

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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely part



feeling tooo bad for maan



1 big mistake


nd kya ho gya




true she needs her father


bt the pain he gave to pain cant be ignored
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part.
waiting 4 next upd8.
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Posted: 13 years ago
nisha nisha nisha

po una aduchu ka mudiyala super nice loved it or not enough to describe crazy ...thum...

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