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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: niticool

akka u know na srinithi (my sissy ) is studying 10th
naan avaloda thangai
ennaku 12 vayasu than aagudhu

so sollapoona naa ella subjectaiyum padikira student 😉

apa avala vida nee romba china pona...?Kutty member of the forum ah? so i have to keep you all in mind while proceeding this FF...

Edited by nishha - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: Jass.KN
U r such a wonderful creator not writer..everybody can write but to create that is difficult...n its ur insult..u always doing wonderful job...thanx for pm

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Whypadhu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#113

hi nisha

very interesting story dear

just read all the parts in one go

its really awesome

pls cont soon

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Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: maanspadhu
hi nisha
very interesting story dear
just read all the parts in one go
its really awesome
pls cont soon
pls add me in ur pm list

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Nitya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: nishha

apa avala vida nee romba china pona...?Kutty member of the forum ah? so i have to keep you all in mind while proceeding this FF...

ennai maraka vituvena ?????

neenga marandhalum naan vidamatten

yup one of the most young members of the forum 😃

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Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#116

Part 10
Part 11

But he will be able to work peaceful among geet's cousins who is same as geet...who all come there for vacation chotu, motu,bitu,rithu and so on...all kidos playing in the hall who disturb no no irritate maan to the core from doing his work... one by one came into his room when they play hide and seek after some time ball came and about to broke his laptop which is successfully catch by him from falling down...

Its not easy for him to bear with them that too especially with those kids so he closed his work and came out of that room to found geet as he know only geet from the entire crowd his eyes searches for her but no she is very busy with all her chit chats...latter he is caught by the elders and they started to pose questions to him about his work and dadi...

latter he found geet in kitchen doing all masti with the women inside the kitchen he cannot call her as all elders are around them so he decides to call her through chotu who is playing in the garden he calls chotu and asked him to call geet di as Maan jiju called but chotu is caught by reji channi and some other cousin sisters of geet... they are in full mood to pull legs of there favorite jiju and didi... so they send a message to Maan as if geet send to maan...

I will be in the terrace with in half an hour will meet you there...

When geet come to know about there plan...who is very well know about Maan's anger and also that he don't like this kind of fun so she rushed to terrace to prevent the situation from going worse...

where the drama already took place channi is dressed like geet and stand in the terrace turning around Maan enters the terrace

"geet... when we going back i can't stay here any more?I can't able to do my work properly your cousins are really amazing they are torturing me to the core...just like you... am going back tomorrow geet you can stay here and come latter i can't stay here any more..."

Before he completes he hears the giggling sound from the other side he started to move near that dark corner of the terrace where suddenly geet enters

" ji... " maan surprised by seeing geet behind him then to whom he speaking yet he turned to the girl who turn around and laugh louder its channi who's is acted like geet till now... and all of sudden more girls came out from each and every side of the terrace and all started laughing at him...

Maan really felt very embarssed and anger...He don't like there mischief so he left the place with anger which is understand by geet alone she started to shouting at them...

what kind of fun it this..you all always thinks about fun at all time...
Why made such kind of fun with him you know he don't like this and all.. he is not like all others...

You all made him more tensed now...saying this she showed her anger to all other girls there they all really shocked to see geet in anger its not her usual character she wont get anger so soon ... she is meant for fun making but today a sudden change in her character is not geet she changed...all apologized her

Immediately they all in front of maan and apologized him too for all there mischief as they did for fun and didn't mean to irritate him Maan realized his anger and get in to normal as soon all apologized...

He smiled to them which made geet relief and all went but before they go they again pull there legs

geet di jiju forgive us now... smile at least...geet di can't even bear some one making fun of jiju...
saying that they pushed geet towards maan and run out immediately before she shout again..

Maan hold geet from falling down both had a eye lock...

Immediately both straighten them self and geet run out of the room where as maan smiling thinking about that...

He came down for the dinner where he found geet smiling all the while during serving food to him..as soon the dinner all elders went to sleep s where as all the children and young where playing in the terrace ... where geet went there as soon she finished dinner she don't want to miss the fun in HP which is only for 2 days and as well as she don't want to face him now...

Maan didn't feel sleepy he changed his position in the bed for a while and latter he came out actually he miss geet but he wont accept that... he searched her in the entire house she is no where he found some sound in the terrace he went to check out geet there when he enter there is a familiar sound he identifies its geet he found geet playing with all her cousins he silently drool over her for some time standing in the corner till reji founds him geet didn't believe that...

Is he really here he don't like crowd and sound then how can he came here?yeah its him its Maan singh khurana...

geet can't believe her eyes...her heart jumps now she want him to sit near her but he sits opposite to her as he cannot droll over her as he sits next to her so he sits opposite to her and seeing her like as if he cannot see her again he join in the game they playing and simply sits there enjoying the sight of his wife he don't know about the game. he don't know what others telling. he only hear geet 's voice and sees only her face...

he started loving her but his mind is not accepting the fact as it thinks its all just like that he doing as he don't get sleep but his heart knows he's cant sleep because he thinking of her...

Finally there 2nd day in HP where now Maan get to used to all the tortures there he able to manage the second day well where actually he some what mingle with the cousins group...

Once reji and all made him to eat chillies which he is not used to but for challenge he ate nearly 10 chillies to prove that he can eat chillies too...
geet already warned him not to eat but he didn't hear to her words and eat that which brought tears to his eyes...

These are the various tortures he need to bear in HP among geet's cousins and geet... which is all very funny and sweet moments in his life where he first fell in love with his geet...

After the completion of the two days of torture today he and geet leaving delhi.. he is ready with his car to go geet too get ready after there bye telling ceremony they both left HP and going back to delhi...

As per dadi wish both went to golden temple in the way both made more masti during this travel its not there usual silent travel now... Both become very comfortable with each other now...

aftere there visit to golden temple they again started there travel to delhi...

Precap:Maan understood he is in love with geet..

Part 12

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Edited by nishha - 13 years ago

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abinash079

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Posted: 13 years ago

#117

awesome update loved it
maan is in love with geet
precap is awesome

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keenu_kk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#118

ossum part dear

lovely one

so now he knows

hope soon geet to knew dear

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blue24

@blue24

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#119

Awesome dear
Loved their prank
Maan starting to love geet the preacp is very interesting.
Their past is soo sweet
Wondering what must hv made their relation like this
Do continue soon
Thanks for the pm

Edited by d2407 - 13 years ago