Maya my love (completed)l MG//FF - Page 10

going to HP was really nice

Awesome update and happy diwali to u too. please update soon:)

Awesome part ... Loved it...

Continue soon...

Happy diwali,,,,

Awesome update dear..loved their past..happy diwali to u too..do continue soon

HEY I LOVED UR FF. I READ ALL THE PARTS IN ONE GO. LOVED IT DEAR. CAN YOU ADD ME TO UR PM LIST? WILL YOU? FOUND IT INTERESTING. MAAN AND GEET IN THE RAIN..QUITE INTERESTING...AWAITING TO READ MORE...UPDATE SOON DEAR.

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Originally posted by: nishha

super a iruku ---Thank you niti...(mika nanri)

edho problem naala than rendu perum pirinjurukanga pola iruku----you are right...rendu perum romba nala purinju vachuirukanga(bothe understanding each other well)...loving each other too...

was that problem caused by sanjay ??----definetely not... sanjay is geet's best friend just helping her... he don't have any connection with maan and also he don't know about maan so he just seeing things in geet point of view...

and caring for her as a friend...

idha nanachu nanachu en thalai vedikarathuku munnadi update pannidunga ---thala vedikuradu mundai kandipa paniduren niti ungalukaga

Originally posted by: niticool

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akka ennoda brain oda cerebellum vedichuruthu

nalla vela cerebrum vedikarathuku munnadi update panniteenga 😆

i think ur reply will be ( from u to me )

nee human brain ah pathi padichae nu nalla theriyudhu

nee human brain ah pathi padichae nu nalla theriyudhu😉😆------
Oh biology student ah?illa biology exam ah?romba padikurenga pola..😆

Yet he is staring out side the rain but when the drops fall on his face he started to admire her beauty which is well exposed now due to her wet clothes..his gaze moved from her legs to head..she feel the odd sense which cause by his gaze to her skin...she suddenly turned towards to him he moved his gaze and turned his face towards the window
and for some time he didn't turned to face her...
at last when he turned to see her he found that she is sleeping where her hands are shivering in cold she placed her head in the closed glass window and fall in to sleep...

Maan move little bit close to her and started to rub her palms where her body gets some what warm and he get the hold of her another arm and started to rub her right arm palm in a mean while geet wake up little bit from her sleep and she placed her head on his shoulder and slept...
he smiled at her innocence and started to rub her palms and for a while he hold her hand to get it warm...

Its morning now geet opened her eyes when she hear a horn of the truck passing by and found her self on top of maan where maan sleeping in a sitting posture of the back sheet where his head is standing still in the support of the glass window and his both long legs are adjust to stretched fully in the sheet where geet is lying top of him where her head is placing on the maans chest due to cold and chillness both slept like this cuddling each other...

geet felt embarsed when she found her self above maan and try to move away where maan's long hands are tightly holding her.. she tried loosen the grip which is not easy for her and she started to move her body which made him wake up and at first gaze he had her eyes which is requesting him to remove the grip...
he is still for a while as he didn't understand what she is trying to say in her eyes( is he really didn't understand or else don't want her to move is only god and he knows..)she feels very protective under his arms which is holding her tightly as if mother holds a child tightly while sleeping in her arms so that it will not fall down during sleep...

Maans grip also like that he is holding her like a child...


Both moved from each other when they get the horn of a another truck and straighten them self and geet hand over his shirt which he used to cover her during her sleep... maan immediately get his shirt and put on
both get down from the car where maan went to do his unfinished job of repairing car where as geet went to the near by farm where water is available to freshen her up...

maan called out her name"Geet... come soon car is ready we can leave.."

where geet is far away from him so she started to murmur with in her self about him
thank god finally done... how much time he take to repair this and told (geet try to immitate him with making some hard voice)geet minnor problem i will fix it by my self...any have finally going home...thank you babaji...

before she came maan again called her name out...
Geet how much time you will take come soon...

haan haan ..coming...saying this she come near the car and sit next to him

both didn't face each other as they felt very embarrassed to face each other after the morning wake up...so geet again staring outside and maan on the road concentrating in his driving... but the silence didn't prevail for long time ...geet started to talk some useless things to make her self comfortable through that she can hide her blush which she is getting when ever she think about the last night which is more visible to maan when she is quite..(its her opinion any have maan didn't notice her blush and he also very embarrassed and don't want to face her)

Maan is also enjoyed her talking inside but outside he is pretending as he's not showing any interest in her talk...but geet will be geet she didn't keep quite she started to tell about her childhood and all things about her village friends and family and all small small incidents which remains in her memory...

first maan didn't show any interest latter he started to admire her voice latter her facial expressions which change its color according to her mind expressions...she is very happy to tell every thing about her child hood days its shown clearly in her face..

Maan noticed all her expression while driving where the music started to play from the music system form the car...

as soon geet reached run towards her mummy papa and hugged them very tightly maan understood she missed them very badly these days and as soon all welcomed them and take them inside where darji is both maan and geet get the blessings from him and started to move to there room...
where geet is in between blocked by her friends and cousins where as maan is taken to his room by chotu..
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while thinking about his words she started to think about her past which is the most beautiful part of her life where she lives happily with her maan.Thinking about her past she fall in to sleep where tears are still wet in her cheeks...
Maan came to her room with Maya he knows very well that geet wont be happy till Maya is not with her so he came to her room when maya fell in to deep sleep he bring maya to geet's room which is kept open...

When he enter he found geet sleeping.He placed maya near geet and placed Maya favorite teddy another side of Maya so that she cant fall down from bed in sleep...Maya turn around and place her hand on the teddy...after a sec geet placed her hand on maya in sleep...its like Maya's doll is teddy and geet's doll is Maya...Its like a two kids sleeping..maan heart is not letting him to move away from there as if he can't able to see this ever...


Both of his angels are sleeping how can he move his eyes away from them he slowly sit by geet's side in that way geet is facing back towards him he moved her hair stands which is playing with her lips..and came near her face to place a kiss..he forgets every thing about them and his mind is asking him to do so.. but some thing stops him when he is very close to her face her wet tears in her cheeks stopped him to do so he didn't notice this yet he moved little away from her and wipe her tears with his thumb and cup her face she murmured some thing in her sleep which is not very clear to him only he can hear is Maya...Maan...
He can feel the pain in her face in her sleep when she called out his name and relax when she call out maya's name...His eyes filled while hearing her murmur fully

"Maaan maan..why..maan why maaan left me Maya maan chod diya muje tu be math chodo apne mummy ko apko mummy pasand heyna Maya.. Maan meine apko intna pyar kiya lekin app kyun maan kyun..ab Maya ko be app lekar jayege mujse...Maaaya...maya.."


He want to sooth her pain and want to make her sleep comfortable forgetting all her pains and worries... he started to sooth her by combing her hair smoothly... she hold his arms in sleep and keep it under her cheeks and sleep peacefully with smile on her lips...he knows she's is doing this in sleep and feels happy to see smile on her lips he slightly ly down near her and started to comb her hair with his another arm... where Maya is away from him his eyes and hand where moving in between to his another angel who is sleeping peacefully..

This is the most precious moment in his life where Maya and geet both are near him..but its not permanent he knows that very well..he could not sleep he don't want to miss this precious moment in his life...

while lying like this he stared to think his another precious moment with his geet...
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flash back
Maan immediately called for break fast after his bath where as geet is very busy with chit chatting with her friends yet till maan finished his break fast...

Maan went back to his room as he is new to the place he don't want to mingle with the group where as the house is already filled with more people which he didn't like to go away from his room and started to work in his laptop..

But he will be able to work peaceful among geet's cousing who is same as geet...who all come there for vacation chotu, motu,bitu,rithu and so on...all kidos playing in the hall who disturb no no irritate maan to the core from doing his work... one by one came into his room when they play hide and seek after some time ball came and about to broke his laptop which is successfully catch by him from falling down...

Precap: more tortures for Maan waiting in HP..

Part 11

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