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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part...loved it
thnx for pm
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

awsome dear...

nd happy diwali to u

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part👏👏
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Note: thx for ur lovely comments.. enjoy!! :) ~sara~

PART 19:

it's morning now!
6:00 AM..
annie's alarm clock is ringing...
rrriiinnnggg...
geet wakes up...
and so does annie..
geet goes to the bathroom..
but on her way she sees someone standing outside their room..
geet goes to check...

MAAN'S POV:
oh shoot!
she caught me!
or kind of..
maan beta bhaag le..

NO ONE'S POV:
geet opens the door but sees nobody standing there..
she gets confused n goes back in closing the door behind her..
maan sighs..
he goes back in his room n gets ready!
geet washes her face n they both go to college..
geet wears annie's shalwar kameez suit..
bcoz she has none w her.. n they have to go to college..
annie goes outside quickly..
maan is sitting in his car n about to leave..
annie: bhai!!!
maan gets out of the car..
annie runs upto him n geet is walking behind her..
annie: bhai hum dono ko college chod do.. plz..
maan: per annie mujhay late ho raha hai.. tumhari car kahan hai?
annie: woh bhai pata nahi kya ho gaya usko.. engine ka koi problem ho ga.. maine nakul ko keh diya hai woh le gaye hain car ko..
maan: hmmm.. get in the car..
they both sit in the car..
geet is about to sit in the back seat when annie calls out..
annie: geet! tu agay baith ja na.. woh kya hai na sari raat sahi se nahi so saki.. main peechay laitna chahti hn. tu agay baith ja..
geeT: per annie..
annie: plz yaar.. dost nahi hai..
geet gives up n sits in the front seat next to maan..
maan smiles..
annie lays down n goes to sleep quickly..
the car is dead silent..
maan is concentrating on the road while geet is daydreaming..
maan got bored n thought he should make a convo with geet..
maan: geet..
no answer..
maan tried again..
maan: geet??
maan pokes her on her shoulder..
geet kind a jumps..
geet: ji sir!?
maan: woh main bore ho raha tha to socha tum se baatay ker loon..
geet: ji?
maan: tumhay koi itraaz to nahi hai na ke main tumse baatay ker loon..
geeT: no not at all sir.. bolay kya bolna hai?
maan: uhhh.. wooohh.. weather acha hai na??
geet just luks at him...

GEET'S POV:
wow out of all the topics he chose the weather
he could have talked about office stuff..
or sumthing..
maybe annie..
tell me about her..
i mean her likes and dislikes..
bravo mr. maan singh khurana bravo!
geet: ji?
maan: acha mausam hai na?
geet: sir.. bahar dhoop hai.. aur garmi bhi hai.. aap is ko acha mausam kehtay hain? (confused)

MAAN'S POV:
nice going maan beta..
kuch bhi bolta rehta hai..
maan: mera matlab..

NO ONE'S POV:
geet just remembers that he should have taken rest..
he was not allowed to get out of his room..
geet: maan sir.. aap office kyun ja rahay ho??
maan: geet yeh kaisa sawal hai??
geeT: no seriously doctor ne aap ko mana kiya tha ghar se nikalne ke liye..
maan: (thinking) kitna khayal kerti hai mera.. aur main?
geet: sir aap itne irresponsible to nahi ho sakte..
maan: geet main bilkul theek hoon. i dont need any rest.. daikho main bilkul sahi gari chala raha hoon..
geet: MAAN SIR!!!!!! AGAY DAIKH KER?
maan was about to hit a tree..
he controls the car just in time..
geet: (under her breathe) han woh to dikh hi raha hai na?
maan: geet tum theek to ho na?
geet: ji sir main theek hoon aur aap?
maan: main bhi theek hoon..
maan then realizes annie is here too..
maan turns around..
maan: annie!
annie is asleep..
maan sighs of relief..
he starts driving..
They reach the excel college..
maan: annie.. annie..
maan turns around n so does geet at the same time..
donon ke sir takra gaye thay..
maan and geet rubs their head..
they both ignore it..
again they turn around n hit themselves with each other's head..
maan: geet.. tum jaan booch ke mujh se takra rahi ho na..
geet: han.. mera to kaam hi yeh hai na.. DD!
maan smiles at the word DD. bcoz he thinks she's calling him DHAK DHAK as the other girls in office do..
maan: (teasing) DD? is ka kya matlab hai??
he wants to hear it from her mouth..
geet: (without thinking) DUSHT DHANAV!
maan's smile vanishes..
geet puts her hand on her mouth..
maan: (thinking) yeh le.. tu hi chahta tha na ke yeh tujhay DD ka matlab bataye.. jaan liya? GOD maan tu sach main pagal ho gaya hai..
geet just looks down..
speechless..
maan: ANNIE!!!
he screams..
annie gets up in one sec..
maan: sunaiye nahi deta kya?
annie: bhai mujhay sunai kaisay de ga, main so rahi thi..
maan: watever.. college aa gaya hai.. ab utro mujhay office jana hai..
annie: gets out quickly..
geet gets out but maan calls her..
maan: geet!
geet stops..
maan: aaj office time pe aana.. warna?
geet: ji sir..
geet walks out.. her head very low..
annie looks at her, a question look on her face..
geet looks up n shakes her head..
annie shrugs n leaves.. before leaving geet turns around to see maan staring at her..
MAHIII!!!

maan leaves n geet leaves to her class.
her gang was waiting for her..
nupur: geet!! kahan rehti hai? ab to hum se baat hi nahi kerti..
geet smiles..
geeT: nahin yaar bs woh job ki tension..
mayank: kyun kya huwa?
geet: bs yaar kya bataon..
uday: geet tu mujhay bata.. tu meri behan ki tarha hai..
geet: bs kaam bhot hota hai.. maza nahi aata..
nisha: nahin tere liye to wahan pe entertainment ho ga.. job hai meri jaan koi fashion show nahi. jo tu enjoy keray gi..
right then bell rings..
arjun: chalo ji! tayyar ho jao SIR CHADDA ki class hai!
everyone moans..
they all leave..

1:30 pm
its chutti time..
geet hugging everyone..
geeT: ok guys me going.. job pe jana hai. i will see u guys later..
mayank: aray geet we will drop u..
geet nods..

at 1:50 pm they reach the KC!
geet says her bye..
she goes inside the building n goes in her cabin..
she just remembers that maan had suppose to take the medicines..
she was sure he hadn't taken it..
geet calls maan's house..
(annie ne geet ko uska ghar # and cell # diya tha)
nakul picks the phone..
geet: emm.. main geet bol rahi hoon.. maan sir ki secretary.. maan sir ki medicines bhaij dain plz. aur han dadi ma ko na bataiye ga..
nakul: ji main 10 min main saab ki medicines bhaij daita hoon..
geet: thank u..
geeT hangs up..
right then sasha comes in..
she doesnt hear anything..
sasha: ms. geet handa main tumhay batane aayi thi ke tum apni cheeze pack kerna shuro ker do.. aaj tumhara aakhri din hai na yahan..
geet: woh toh waqt hi batey ga..
sasha rolls her eyes n leaves..

after 10 mins:
nakul brings the medicines..
nakul leaves..
geet takes the medicine in maan's cabin..
geet knocks..
nobody replies..
geet comes in n sees no where there..
geeT: ab yeh kahan chalay hain?
geet goes outside..
geeT: oh haan unki to aaj mr. sharma ke saath meeting thi na.. adha ghanta lagay ga..
geet goes back in her cabin.. n tries to distract herself..


precap: same!



hope u all like it! cant wait to read ur comments! :) .sara
Edited by sara_06 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome updates dear..hate shasha i know geet vl handle her..loved the car talks..maan was too cute to talk about the climate..do continue soon.thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Me little sad.waiting 4 next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb...waiting for next update
thanksxx for pm
please update jaldi karo na please sara
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice waiting for next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it
waiting for the next one
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful update...loved it
thnx for pm
continue soon...

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