Romeo & Juliet 4 Suraj-Manasvi!!! - Page 4

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Posted: 19 years ago
#31
lovely........ 👏
i guess arjun will get the contract...
but jaldi background ki mystery se parda hatao...
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Posted: 19 years ago
#32
Episode 18

(Nandini is finding a pair of earrings in Manasvi's jewllery box...and comes across the anklets that suraj gave 2 manasvi)

nandini (thinking): yeh payal kahan sey aaye...?
(manasvi comes in)
nandini: arre..manasvi...yeh payal kahan sey aaye?
manasvi: erm...mere kisi ne saheli ni diye hai...kaise lage?
nandini: buhut pyari...vaise aise payal tho boyfrend detha hai..
manasvi: kiya bhabhi...aap bhi na...
nandini: acha..chalo...nashta ka time hogaya hai...
(they both go down..)
tulsi: arre...aao nandini..manasvi jaldi sey koi fruits le kar aao....tumhare nandini bhabhi ke liye..
manasvi: ok...(goes 2 get the fruits)
mihir: acha...aaj voh contract ya phir hum viranis ko milega...ya phir vog goenkas ko...
damini: papa..plz....phirse...manasvi hai yahan phar...agar ussne sun liya tho...
ansh: tho kya.....vaise main puri guarantee ke saath yeh kehta ho....ki yeh contract hume milega...
sahil: acha...tumhe guarantee hai?
karan: bas karo...isse pehle manasvi aa jaye....just stop it...(manasvi comes back wid the fruits)
manasvi: acha....aaj mein zara thori dhir ke liye shopping jaogi...damini aur nandini bhabhi ki saath....is that ok wid u mom?
tulsi: ha beta...kyun nahin....aur vaise aaj study karna...tumhare exams hoge parsu...study leave iss liye tumhe mile hai...thaki tum study karo...shopping nahin...
manasvi: theek hai mom....main zaroor study karongi...khush?
tulsi: ha...abh khush...
nandini: chalo nandini.....hum dono ek aur film dekhti hai...
karan: kaunse?
nandini (wid a funny luk on her face): raaz..
manasvi: theek hai...
(both go upstairs)
mihir: theek hai tulsi....hum jaa rahe hai..office mein...
tulsi: theek hai...bye
mihir: bye...
(mihir and the rest of the boys go 2 the office)
(next scene: heritage house)
arjun: bhavri....bhavri....jaldi karo...nashta lao...mujhe dhir ho rahe hai..
bhoomi: acha baba.....abhi aaye......(gives him his breakfast...)
shaku: suraj.....kaha yeh larka...?
bhoomi: upar hai ma-ji...bechara puri raat paraha tha....exasm hai iss liye....
siddarth: beta....jaldi karo...office ke liye dhir ho jaye gi....
arjun: ek minute...
shakti: bhagwan kare ki voh contract un viranis ko na mile...
mansen: fikhar na karo shakti....voh nubat nahin aayege.....contract hume milega....
(suraj comes down)
suraj: hi everybody...
arjun (putting up a happy face): hi brother...kaise ho..?
suraj: theek ho...aur aap bhabhi...?
bhoomi: theek thak...fit aur fhat....
suraj: fat...voh main dekh sakta hoo...
bhoomi: huh?
suraj: only kidding....
shakti: chale....?
siddarth: ha...chalo..(siddarth and the rest of the boys leave 4 office)
baisa: acha...suraj...studies kaise jaa rahe hai...
suraj: theek....kal raat ko main 3:00am thak study kar raha tha...
kashish: God grant u success.....
suraj: thank u didi....
(next scene: the office....ansh, sahil, gautam, karan and mihir r sitting on one side...and siddarth, arjun, shakti, aksh, yuv, and mansen on the other side)
board: ok...gentlemen.....we have decided that who will get the contract...
(both families luk wid anger towards each other...
board: and the contract goes to......the MD of Goenka Group of Industries........(the goenkas r happy...and the viranis r furious)
ansh (stands up): yeh kaise ho sakta hai?
board: inke quotation figures aapke figures ey kaam thi...
ansh: lekin...(getting more angry)...
mihir: beta ansh.....sit down...ek contract jeethni ki baad...itna bura nahina maana chahe...(luks wid furious luks at siddarth)
board: congratulations Arjun Goenka....
arjun: thank u....(shake hands...the board of directors leave)
karan: tho....congrats....goenkas!!!
yuv: hume tumhare thanx ki zaroorat nahin hai...
gautam: itna...garoor dekhne ki zaroorat nahin hai...thori din ki baad tum goenkas sab haar jaaogi...
shakti: jo bhi ho...kehna assan hai gautam..lekin usse karna...buhut mushkil hota hai....
gautam: whateva...(the viranis leave)
aksh: tho..humne unke status dekha diya...
arjun: yeh tho sirf shorowat hai...lekin baad mein unka kya hoga...aabh unki kismat tho buhut bura hoga....jo 20 saal pehle hua tha...usse bhi buhut bura hoga...

Precap: Karan brings the news 2 the virani family that they lost the contract 2 the Goenkas, the Viranis are more angry, and Manasvi is getting more confused, and on the other hand, Arjun tells everyone that they got the contract and Mansen says that this is the first step 2 the viranis' destruction. Meanwhile Suraj is asking Bhoomi as to what is everyone is talking about, Bhoomi is in a dilemma as to what should she tell him.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#33
lovely darling..... 👏 👏
keep it up
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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
Episode 19

(The viranis come home)

tulsi: kya hua mihir? arre uss contract ka kya hua?
(mihir remains silent)
ansh: MA....VOH CONTRACT UN GOENKAS KO MILA!!!!!
(everyone is shocked..manasvi and nandini were upstairs..come down after hearing ansh)
nandini: yeh kaise awaz thi....karan...kya hua?
karan: contract...goenkas ko mila....
manasvi: tho phir kaunse badi baat hai...aur bhi contracts hai...
ansh: CHUP!!! VOH CONTRACT BUHUT ZAROORI THA!!! AND U SHUT UP!!!
Manasvi (eyes filling up wid tears): main aapne parivaar ka saath deena chahti hoo....aur....aap bhi bhaiyya...(to ansh).....gussa ki alava...aur kuch sochti nahin hai aap...
ansh: dekha ma....dekha aapne?
tulsi: kiya dekho....theek keh rahe hai voh bechari....u just shout at her 4 no reason...
savita: lekin manasvi ko business ki baat mein nahin bula chahe...
sahil: savita dadi...manasvi iss ghar ki beti hai...mihir virani ki beti...usse pura haaq hai..bulni ka...aur aap bhi kya...bhagwan usse yeh haaq nahin cheen sakta...(sahil leaves)
savita: dekha gayatri...?
gayatri: aap bhi didi.....sirf thandi dimag se sochye...
(nandini and ganga go upstairs)
nandini: manasvi...koi baat nahin...ansh hai aise hi....
ganga: ha manasvi....tum usski baat ko dil se na lo...
manasvi (crying): lekin bhabhi...hamesha mujh paar gussa karta hai...lekin kyun?
nandini: dekho...next time..agar usne tum phar gussa kiya...tho phir damini..ganga aur emin usske khabar lethi hai...theek hai?
manasvi (smiling a little): theek hai...

(next scene: heritage house...arjun..shakti and the rest just come in)

baisa: beta arjun....kya hua...contract ka kya hua?
arjun: voh contract hume mile baisa
suraj: congrats brother...
arjun: thanx...(give a hug 2 each other..)
shaku: shukar hai...buhut kaam karna...theek hai?
shakti: ma...yeh contract humare pehle jeeth hai...viranis ki gillaf...
mansen: shaku bhabhi...shakti bilqul theek keh raha hai...virnais ki barbaadi abh koi nahin rok sakta...
suraj: viranis? phirse yeh viranis...arre yeh log hai kaun.....humare koi dost hai?
bhoomi: suraj...voh humare...
arjun: bhavri!!!!(shooks his head a signal not 2 tell)
suraj: bataye na bhabhi...kaun hai yeh viranis....mera haaq banta hai....mein aapka devar hoo..iss ghar ka chota beta hoo mein...mera haaq banta hai...
bade dadaji: beta...tum upar jao....
suraj: aap hamesha kehte hai ki upar jao...lekin...bataye na....
bhoomi (thinking): kaise batao...tumhara bhai mujhe nahin batani dega....kaise?
suraj: didi...aap bhi kuch kaho na....
(kashihs remains silent)
suraj: theek hai....math bataye...(goes upstairs)
(suraj is thinking about what happened downstairs...)
suraj (thinking): viranis ka rishta mere parivaar si kya hai...? kaisa rishtaa hai?

Precap: Suraj is hurt on the arm, and Manasvi bandges his wounds. Manasvi starts crying, and Suraj hugs her tightly. Maple leave fly around the two.

Howz dat, ppl?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#35
chooo chweet... cant wait till the next update...
n thanks yaar.... for keeping this updated for me 🤗
ur a real darling!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: tunna

chooo chweet... cant wait till the next update...
n thanks yaar.... for keeping this updated for me 🤗
ur a real darling!!!!!

It's ok...tuhina...yaar...koi baat nahin....🤗

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Posted: 19 years ago
#37
Episode 20

(Suraj-Manasvi r on their lunch break....taking a walk)

Manasvi: so wassup...?
suraj: oh...nothing...just had my maths exam....uff...was tough..
Manasvi: ah...koi shaq?
suraj: but on the other hand...my brother got this contract...
manasvi: oh...that reminds me....my brother lost this contract....
suraj: so...any exams 2morrow?
manasvi: erm...i have chemistry.....oohh....i hate chemistry..
suraj: who exactly loves it?
(suraj-manasvi cross the road, and a car is about 2 come, and and hits suraj...but just injured his arm..a minor injury 😊 )
manasvi (getting tensed): OMG...suraj....tum theek tho hoo?
suraj (getting up and luking at his arm): no....my arm is hurt badly...
manasvi: oh...i'll get some thing...(luks into her bad but then tears a bit of her dupatta and goes over 2 the pond and wets it and goes over 2 suraj and cleans up the blood)
suraj: argh!!! it hurts....
manasvi: oh gosh...must be hurting...
suraj: r u kididng....it hurts a lot......(holding his arm)
manasvi: but..it'll be ok....(cleans up the blood...and still suraj is in pain..manasvi begins to cry)
suraj (sees manasvi crying): why r u crying? hey....it's ok...just a minor injury....(wipes her tears)
(manasvi doesnt say anything but hugs him tightly...suraj hugs her too...maple leaves start flying around the two.. later suraj moves away)
suraj: i should go home...also...u need 2 go home as well...
manasvi: i'll come wid u...
suraj: no...no...u should go home....
manasvi: but plz...can i come wid u....besides i wanted 2 meet bhoomi bhabhi and baisa and ma-ji too...
suraj: ok....chalo...
(both reach home)
baisa (seeing suraj's wound): hai bhagwan....yeh kya hua?
manasvi: kuch nahin baisa...bas the car hit him...
arjun (getting worried): what...tum theek tho hoo?
suraj: main bilqul theek ho...(slowly sits down...)..bas sirf thora sa dard hoo raha hai...
bhoomi: main koi medicines laate hoo...
shefali: arre suraj u should take care of yurself...
(btw shefali is a goodie in this ff)
suraj: arre bhabhi...aap bhi na....main theek ho...
mamaji: oi bhanje....aapna kayal rako...abhi jawan hoo...sirf 16 ki saal hoo.....abhi buhut zindagi mein bakhi hai....jaise ki vir-
mansen (interrupts): khushal....stop it!!!!
manasvi: acha...baisa mein chalti hoo...main sirf suraj ko ghar chorni aaye thi...
baisa: arre lekin akele kaise...arjun aur bhoomi tumhe chor dengi...
arjun: ha...tumne suraj ka kayal raka...aur mein tumhe chordonga...ok?
manasvi: ok...
(arjun and bhoomi go 2 drop off manasvi at her house)
manasvi: ok...bye bhaiyya...bye bhabhi...
a-b: bye...
(manasvi goes inside)
bhoomi: buhut pyaari bachi hai...haina?
arjun: ha...buhut ache larki hai..

Precap: Ansh is thinking of more ways to avenge the Viranis, meanwhile Manasvi comes over to meet Suraj and the Goenkas.

Howz dat, ppl?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
yaar....very nice.....keep it up yaaaar...... 👏
specially ...suraj hugging manasvi... 😆
i love it....
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Episode 21

(The viranis r at home just watching some tv....ansh is busy thinking of more ways 2 destroy the goenkas)

ansh: yeh goenkas....unku soch kar bhi mera dimag kharab hone lagta hai....
karan (getting angry): bas...ansh....enough!!!!! yeh baatein sirf office mein hoge....yahan ghar phar...aur voh bhi manasvi ki samna....agar usse pata chal gaya tho...
ansh: tho...acha hoga.....kaam se kaam usse pata tho chaliga...ki voh goenaks itne.....fareeb wale hai...
(manasvi comes..karan pretneds 2 luk happy)
karan: theek hai...subha office main kaam karge....abh sone ka waqt hai...jao..(ansh leaves)
manasvi: aise kaise baatein ho rahe thi...bhaiyya..?
karan: arre kuch nahin manasvi....tum bas tension la rahe hoo..
manasvi: ok...main sone jaa rahe ho...kal exam hai...buhut jaldi uthna parega...
karan: ok...aur ha...aapne bhabhi ko kaho ki main usse koi baat karna chahta tha...
manasvi: ok...(manasvi goes upstairs and tells nandini that karan called her, manasvi later is in her room studying)
manasvi: ok...potassium reacting wid.....uff.....this is so tough....(feels sleepy and sleeps wid her head on the table)
(the sun rises...nandini wakes manasvi up)
nandini: arre manasvi...jaldi karo.....exam hai aaj tumhara.....chalo...
manasvi (waking up): huh....arre....OMG....mera exam...(quickly rushes and gets ressed and leaves 4 school)

(Next scene: the heritage house....arjun quickly wakes up suraj)
arjun: uff....suraj utho....aaj tumhara exam hai...chalo...
suraj (waking up): kya hua....qayamat ka din hai kya?
arjun: qayamat hai....kyunki tumhara chemistry exam hai aaj ko...
suraj: ha pata hai....MY CHEMISTRY EXAM!!!!!! (quickly gets ready and rishes down...shaku has just done the pooja)
shaku: arre beta prasad lo...
suraj: nahin mama....not ime 4 that...mera exam hai...
arjun: arshiwad milega...
suraj: ok...(takes the prasad)
(suraj-manasvi quickly go 2 their exam and finishes it and come outisde)
manasvi: oh.....voh exam buhut mushkil tha..
suraj: ha...aur mera chemsitry grade buhut bura hoga...dekhna
manasvi: dont worry......acha hoga...
suraj: acha...abh tum ghar jaa rahe hoo....
manasvi: umm...ha...lekin....abh tumhara arm kaisa hai?
suraj: theek hai...
manasvi: thank god....acha main chalhti hoo...
suraj: oh...voh um the day after tomorrow...holi hai...tho maine socha..ki tum aaogi...holi ki liye...
manasvi: ok....lekin tum bhi aana....theek hai?
suraj: ha..ok...

Precap: Tulsi, nandini and damini go shopping and come face-to-face with Shaku, Bhoomi and Kashish.

Howz dat, ppl?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#40
great part!!! 👏 👏
i too hate chemistry n maths!!!!
can sympathise with the 2 😆 😆
keep it up!!!

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