Romeo & Juliet 4 Suraj-Manasvi!!! - Page 3

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Posted: 19 years ago
#21
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i'm loving it...pls try to update it daily.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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shirley sorry 4 late comments..........but gr88888 going.......... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#23
Episode 14

(Suraj is getting ready 4 taking manasvi out)

Arjun: where r u going?
Suraj: out....
Arjun: to where?
Suraj: erm.....erm....to the library....
Arjun: ok...
Suraj: ok....bye u all....
(suraj leaves)
Bhoomi: hey arjun....come on....daddy-ji is calling u
Arjun: bhavri....why is suraj going 2 the library widout his school stuff?
Bhoomi: ok...why isnt Arjun not listening to Bhoomi...?
Arjun: uff.....sorry madam...yes.....ok then lets go

(Next scene: shanti-niketan)

Manasvi: ok....mom....going 2 the library....
Ansh: dont get locked in there again....
Manasvi: wont...ok....bye everyone...
Nandini: bye....
(Manasvi leaves)
Tulsi: ansh....and karan..i need 2 talk 2 u two...
Mihir: Manasvi told us that u were fighting wid two boys...
Karan: papa....they were form the goenka family
Tulsi: how many times do i have 2 tell u that do not fight wid them!!!!
Mihir: what if manasvi had found out about the truth....?
Ansh: but dad...
Mihir: Enough!!!! next time.....no fighting whatsoever
Tulsi: Is that clear?
Karan & Ansh: yes dad and mom....
Nandini: plz karan..control yurself.....dont mess wid these goenkas....
Karan: but...
Nandini: plz karan...the last thing this virani parivaar wants is another death....

(Next scene: Suraj and Manasvi on their valentines date..)

Manasvi: hi...
Suraj: hi...kaise ho?
Manasvi: theek ho.....aur tum?
Suraj: main bhi theek....
Manasvi: ok...and what do u want?
Suraj: erm..i'll have a coke and u?
Manasvi: i'll have a 7up...so howz life?
Suraj: boring....what about yurs?
Manasvi: ooh....boring...
Suraj: Welcome 2 my world....
Manasvi: hehehe.....so....uh.....how come u didnt ask any1 else on valentines' day?
Suraj: i just didnt feel like it....i mean....
Manasvi: rite...i understand....
Suraj: oh...i got something 4 u.....
Manasvi: what...?
(takes out a box...and in he box r a pair of anklets)
Suraj: here...anklets (gives them to her)
Manasvi: oh....really sweet of u.....oh i have something 4 u....(gives a box in which has a chain saying "Suraj"...)
Suraj: really beautiful....
Manasvi: glad u liked it....
(both have their dinner and then leave)
Suraj: so...what time r u going home?
Manasvi (luks at her watch): erm...at 8:00....it's 7:45 rite now...
Suraj: come on...i'll show u this place i really love...
Manasvi: where?
(takes her 2 a park where it is peaceful and beautiful)
Suraj: how do u like it?
Manasvi: it's so peaceful and beautiful.....
Suraj: i come here when i want a little bit of peace...
Manasvi: really...and oh i really love that maple leaf tree....
Suraj: i no...
(both sit down by the river and talk 4 a little while)
Manasvi (luks at her watch): OMG.....it's 8:30...oh...my parents must be worried....
Suraj: dont worry i'll drop u off......
Manasvi: ok thanx....
(suraj drops manasvi off 2 her house)
Suraj: ok..i'll c u in school 2morrow
Manasvi: ok bye...
(manasvi goes in)
Ansh: where the hell have u been!!!!!!?????/
Manasvi: sorry...i just got a little delayed....i met my frend and we started 2 talk 4 a while...and i lost track of time...
Karan: it's ok manasvi...
Manasvi: thank u karan bhaiyya......
Nandini: plz ansh...control yur temper.....
Tulsi: nandini is rite...control yur temper...
Ansh: sorry mom....
(Manasvi is up in her room)
Manasvi (thinking): what is happening 2 me? why do i feel like this....?

Precap: The goenkas r planning 2 have a party. Suraj accidently bumps 2 into a girl. The girl turns around....(guess who the gal is)

Howz dat, ppl?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#24
wish it was me... 😆 would hav been so much fun bumping into suraj...n lovely too 😳 😳
gr8part as usual gal 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#25
yaar its really gr8....cant wait 4 da next one.....wonder what will happen......next.....
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Posted: 19 years ago
#26
Episode 15

(Next day, Suraj and Manasvi r in school)

Suraj: so...how did u like dinner yesterday?
Manasvi: it was excellent.....i luved it.....
Suraj: glad u did.....
Manasvi: erm.....hey suraj.....why dont u come around my house.....i want 2 introduce u 2 my family members
Suraj: ok....but i have been so busy wid my studies...plus not 2 mention the GCSEs coming up.....
Manasvi: oh....i understand....
Suraj: but..my family is throwing a party 2day...and why dont u come...?
Manasvi: oh...kool....i'll come....
Suraj: thanx...
(both give each other a loose hug...)
Manasvi: i'll see u after class
Suraj: ok bye....
Manasvi: bye....
(School day ends and both r at home)
(Suraj is getting ready 4 the party...arjun joins)
Arjun: hey brother
Suraj: hi.....wassup?
Arjun: nothing....u luking smart...
Suraj: thank u.....um....bhaiyya.....my frend is coming 4 the party......u dont mind, na?
Arjun: ok...when will he arrive?
Suraj: umm.....it's a she
Arjun: oh....r u sure shez yur frend and not yur galfrend....
Suraj: uff.....there u go again.....galfrend....shez not my galfrend....
Arjun (wid a upset luk): oh rite...
Suraj: and the day i get one...i'll tell u....
Arjun: suraj...yaar....whats wrong wid u? first u used 2 always talk about girls...and now....u stay away from them...
Suraj: erm...i guess i changed.......
Arjun: and that bcoz of that gal that is coming 2 the party...
Suraj: for yur information....no!!!
(bhoomi comes in)
Bhoomi: what r u two brothers talking about?
Arjun: we were just talking about when suraj will get yur devrani...
Bhoomi (getting excited): when....when will she come?
Suraj: when its Judgement Day.....or perhaps after i have taken seven rebirths....
Bhoomi (dissapointed): judgement day.......we'll be dead by then....and i cant wait seven lifetimes....
Arjun: ok...chill...bhavri...chill.....lets go...
(the three go down.....suraj is walking and bumps into someone and luks and sees its Manasvi!!!)
Suraj: Manasvi.....hi...u came...
Manasvi: u invited me....and i couldnt come...not possible....
(arjun sees suraj-manasvi together and wonder who the gal is)
Arjun (luking at suraj-manasvi): bhavri...who is that gal?
Bhoomi: i dont no....but i'm going 2 meet her...
(bhoomi comes)
Bhoomi: Namaste....I'm Bhoomika Goenka.....suraj's bhabhi...but u can call me bhoomi 4 short...
Manasvi: oh....hi...i'm Manasvi...Manasvi Vi-(the dj puts on loud music and bhoomi fails 2 hear manasvi's surname)
Bhoomi: come on..manasvi....enjoy yurself...
Manasvi: i will do...thanx...
(Bhoomi leaves)
Manasvi: yur bhabhi is really nice...
Suraj: koi shaq.....shez really sweet...actually shez less of a bhabhi.....but more of a sister....come i'll introduce u 2 Kashish.....
Manasvi: whoz dat?
Suraj: my sis....(turns 2 Kashish)...erm....di....this is manasvi...my frend...
Kashish: oh hi..Manasvi...i'm Kashish...nice 2 meet u...
Manasvi: same here.....
(suraj introduces manasvi 2 his family members...but all r unaware that Manasvi is a virani)
Manasvi: yur family members r really nice...
Suraj: thanx...
Manasvi: u no...come around my house...and i'll introduce u 2 my family members....the day after tomorrow....we're having a small party.....it's Bhoomi's b'day....
Suraj: oh sure...ok..i'll be there....btw who's bhoomi?
Manasvi: my niece....shez my brother's daughter....
Suraj: what a ittefaaq....we have abhoomi here and so do u
Manasvi: exactly....i was thinking of the same as well...

Precap: Suraj-Manasvi dance together, meanwhile Mamaji is suspicious about what family Manasvi is from, Mansen tells him 2 forget about it, as the Goenkas already suffered enough problems when siddarth and his family came.

Howz dat, ppl?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#27
wow....the suspense is killing me... 😆
great part yaar...i'm trying to guess only wats going on inside ur head...
lovely...
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Posted: 19 years ago
#28
o...n plz do write such great long ones yaar...
cant wait for ur next update... 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#29
Episode 16

(The party is still continuing...Baisa and Shaku r talking 2 Manasvi...)

Shaku: tho beta...aur kaun hai tumhare parivaar mein?
Manasvi: ma...papa...do badi bhai...ek ki shaadi hogaye hai...aur unke ek beti bhi hai...unke beti ka naam hai bhoomi...aapke bahu ke tarha...
Baisa: acha...ittefaaq si baat hai shakuntala...ki do bhoomis hai...beta tum aapne parivaar walo ko bhi saath lana kabhi...hum bhi unse milna chahti hai... 😲...
Manasvi: kyun nahin...zaroor...
(over there..mamaji is thinking something about manasvi)
Mamaji: jija...yeh manasvi kis parivaar si aaye hai..buhut ajeeb si baat hai..ki iss larki nay kuch bhi nahin baataya....
Mansen: khushal...bas karo...goenkas parivaar buhut kasautiis phar chale choki hai...jab siddarth aur uska parivaar aayea tha tho buhut badi mahabharat shoro hua tha...phirse ek aur naya mahabharat shoro karna chahti hoon.....vaise manasvi buhut ache larki...mujhe buhut ache lage hai...
Khushal (thinking): aap bhi na jija...bilqul siddarth ki tarha hogaye hai aap..lekin mujhe tho buhut shaq ho raha hai...(grins wid a evil smile 😈 )
(next manasvi is wid suraj..)
manasvi: suraj...tumhara parivaar tho buhut ache hai...buhut pyar hai tum sab ki saath haina?
suraj: ha...aur vaise baisa ki saath kya baatein ho rahe hai...
manasvi: baisa chahti hai ki mein bhi aapne family members ko saath lao...ek din zaroor laogi...
suraj: gud..ek din mein bhi aaoga...tumhare family sey milne...
manasvi: sach...very gud...
(bhoomi comes)
bhoomi: arre manasvi...aao na...khana bhi kalo..
manasvi: arre nahin bhabhi...vaise mujhe ghar bhi jaana hai...
bhoomi: arre aise kaise jaa sakhte hoo....chalo na..
manasvi nahin bhabhi...mera bhai buhut gussi mein hoga..agar mein dhir sey aaye...
suraj: koi baat nahin...mein aaonga tumhare saatth aur kaho ga ki tum mere ghar phar thi...
manasvi: ok...aap zidd kar rahe hai tho ok...
bhoomi: yeh hui na baat? chalo....
(bhoomi serves dinner...manasvi decides 2 go home..suraj drops her off)
(manasvi and suraj r outisde the house)
manasvi: chalo...aao....mein tumhare aapne parivaar si milati hoon...chalo...
(suraj goes inside wid manasvi...)
tulsi: arre manasvi beta...aayege hai tum...aur yeh kaun hai?
manasvi: mama...yeh hai suraj goe-(savri-bhavri come screaming and tulsi missed out 2 hear the name goenka)
tulsi: acha..suraj beta..aao na...aapna ghar samjho...
suraj: nahin aunty...mein voh manasvi ko chorni aaya tha...
mihir: lekin..aise kaise jaa sakhte hoo...
manasvi: pata hai...issne mere jaan bachaya tha..uss din ko..
karan: oh...voh tum thi...thank u so much...suraj..pata nahin..mere behen ko kya ho jaata....
suraj: aise koi baat nahin...
ansh: hey buddy.....i'm ansh...
suraj: hi....(they shake hands...virani versus goenka😲)
suraj: acha..manasvi mein chalta hoo.....bye aunty and uncle...
tulsi: bye...(before leaving, suraj touches tulsi, mihir's and ba and savita's feet and leaves)
ba: kitna acha bacha hai...buhut ache parivaar sey hoga...jo iss larki ko aise sanskar de hai...
tulsi: aap theek kehte hai ba...buhut acha aur naik larka hai...
ansh: kaam se kaam uss arjun goenkas ki tarha tho nahin hai....
karan: enough ansh...
manasvi (thinking): arjun goenkas? yeh naam maine kahiin suna hai....oh...suraj ka bhai..lekin ansh arjun bhaiyya sey itni nafrat...

Precap: Bhoomi comments positively on Manasvi and wants her 2 come around again. Meanwhile the business rivalry over the contract between the viranis and the goenkas is growing.

Howz dat, ppl?
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Episode 17

(The next day - it is noon...and Bhoomi is serving lunch)

Bhoomi: kaisa laga mera lunch?
Arjun (mouth full): buhut acha...tumhara khana tho buhut kamaal ka hai...
Bhoomi: thankoo....aur vaise....dont talk wid yur mouth full....
Bhoomi: acha...suraj...manasvi aaj aayege...haina?
suraj: umm...pata nahin bhabhi...kyun?
Bhoomi: phirse maan karta hai...baat karo.....buhut pyaari larki hai..
suraj: bhabhi ki nazro mein har larki ache hote hai..
bhoomi: uff...tum bhi na suraj.....
mamaji: ahca...mujhe yeh baat samjh nahin aaya suraj bhanje ki...manasvi kis parivaar si aaye hai...
suraj: ha mamaji...voh kisi vir-(the phone rings)
shakti: i'll get that....
(shakti is shocked 2 hear sumthing over the phone...)
shakti: uff..oh god...
siddarth: kya hua beta shakti?
shakti: papa....kal quotation ki figures deeni thi....kyunki kal contract kisiko milega...aur...uss chopra ni abhi thak..quotation ki figures fill in nahin kiye...
arjun: KYA!!!! main jaa raha hoo...
Bhoomi: arre arjun...kahan kalo..
arjun: abhi nahin bhavri...(arjun leaves wid shakti and siddarth)
suraj: yeh sab kya tha?
shaku: kcuh nahin beta....tum jaldi sey kahan kao....aur jao aapna homework karo...tumhare exams bhi jaldi sey aa rahe hai...
(bhoomi rushes 2 the temple and faces LK)
bhoomi: bhagwan...mujhse yeh nahin hoga....suraj si main jhuth nahin bol sakti...lekin...doosri taraf mera pyar mera pati arjun hai...voh chahti ki main yeh sach ko chupau....kya karo main.....aur...jo pehle 20 saal pehle hua tha....voh phir na ho..phirse ek aur death na ho...

(mamaji overhears this...)

Mamaji (thinking): yeh bhoomi mere liye buhut kaam aayege....aur voh manasvi bhi...yeh manasvi kahiin....lekin...bas phirse manasvi yahan phar aa jaaye...phir....dekhta hoo...ki kya hoga...usse bhi ek mohra banoga....(grins)

(Next scene: shanti-niketan)

(manasvi is in her room watching the film 'dosti'..nandini joins her)

nandini: kya hoo raha hai..manasvi?
manasvi: movie dekh rahe hoo....aap bhi aaye na bhabhi...
nandini: ha...buhut tired ho main...acha...doosri film lagao...mujhe dosti ko dekh kar buhut rona dil karta hai..
manasvi: mujhe bhi...kaunse lagao...
nandini: hmm....mere jeevan saathi...
manasvi: theek hai...aap ko voh film kyun ache lagti hai?
nandini: arre...jeevan saathis ki baari mein hai...aur mera bhi jeevan saathi hai...
manasvi: aap bhi na bhabhi...
nandini: lekin tumhara jeevan saathi kaabh aayega...?
manasvi: pata nahin...lekin voh waha duniya mein kahiin hai...bas usse pehechani mein dhir lag rahe hai...
nandini: acha...chalo...film dekhte hai...
(they reach halfway through the film and a phone call comes...manasvi lowers the volume, nandini is shocked 2 learn sumthing)
manasvi: kya hua...bhabhi? aap itne parishan kyun?
nandini: office mein....koi business ki problem hai...
manasvi: kaise problem?
nandini: contract ki baari mein.....aur...ansh ko buhut gussa ho raha hai....kehta hai..ki agar voh contract nahin mila viranis to nahin mila...tho voh un opponents ko jaan sey mardaliga...
(manasvi is shocked)

Precap: Nandini finds the anklets given by suraj to Manasvi and wonders where they came from. Meanwhile...the board is about to announce as to who will get the contract...(guess who will get it).

Howz dat, ppl?

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