Tum Mere Ho (RTMC FF) Part69 on Pg153 - Page 29

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Posted: 13 years ago
married or not 8 months are more than enough to ruin some1 life... i dont now what was plan to save nandini from abhijeet evil intentions... but finger crossed ... n hope best for her... Prithvi behavior was expected same...good for Richa n Angad ..they are most sophisticated couple int he story so far...Thnx for sharing and PM
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Posted: 13 years ago

where is nandini?!?i know she is not happy.i can't see nandu and prithvi separated and in pain

di plz unite them in next episode and let prithvi find the whole truth😊
poor nandini how she could have spent whole year with out prithvi😭
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mddmayuri

poor nandini😭

tat abhishek is such a bas---d...
why every luvstory has a rough patch...
plz dhanvi...plz,plz,plz,plz, ...keep nandini away from tat bas---d abhishek😡






even i need d same thing...


plz keep ur reader's view in serious concern ...abhishk n nandini shouldn't b together
Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
sad part 😭...

PriNi away from each other for such a long time...not fair...😭

where is nandini?...hope she is all right...

happy for angad & richa 😊...

plz update soon & plz make PriNi together again soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi DHANVI
The update was awesome dear😊
happy for angad n richa
but wat abt our love birds😭
pls unhe jaldi se milao
waitng for d next update dear😕
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 25


Only a few lights could be seen far away from this small town with very less people...the house is big and far from the town.

The mysterious isolated house lies on the floor of a valley in the far south. It does not appear on the map and does not register on the compass. The house is completely cut off from the mainland.There is a steep path through the trees towards the house...the walls of the house are somewhat covered with the bushes surrounding the house... two security guards at the gate could be seen all the time...

Pratima the owner of the big house was sitting in her lounge sipping tea...


Pratima "i am telling you Abhishek...its not good...why don't you let her go"


Abhishek "no I won't unless she's ready to marry me"


Pratima "its been more than a year now...do you still think she will say yes??..."


Abhishek "she will...i will force her to say yes...and you are my friend, you know I love her then why don't you explain this to her" got up from his chair... "i will go and talk to her now..."


Pratima "she's not in a condition to talk"


Abhishek didn't bothered to listen '.


Pratima "wait Abhi..." she said loudly as he started walking...


Abhishek opened the door and went towards the backyard of the house and straight to the basement where he had kept Nandini isolated from everyone...he opened the door angrily...It was a dark room with one small window...Nandini was kept hidden from the outside world...


"Have you made up your mind??? he said as he came closer to her...she was sitting on the edge of the bed .

"No one will accept you Nandini ...i am the only man who still wants to marry you...you were pregnant with Prithvi's child...i can imagine your deep love for Prithvi but he messed with your life and I am the one who still wants to accept you..." stared at her

"Tell me '.have I ever touched you???...i am not that kind of man...i want you to come to me...and I know you will one day...Nandini I will not touch you unless you say yes"

Nandini was sitting like a stone...she didn't say anything...nor she looked at him...

Pratima went after him as she new Nandini's condition wasn't good...

Pratima "come Abhi...just leave her...she has become still like a stone after her miscarriage..."


Abhishek "did you check with the doctor...you have to make her alright...she has to marry me"


Pratima pulled him outside the room "come now...i will talk to her"


Abhishek "just convince her Pratima...you know I love her...i want her to come to me"


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Next Day


Pratima got some food for Nandini "Nandini please eat something" she came near her

She saw Nandini's condition and felt sad for her...she looked at her beautiful face that looked sad and dull...

Nandini was still like a stone...Pratima always saw her crying...she looked at Nandini's innocent face and then looked at her swollen eyes. she looked pale and weak...it seemed all her hopes have died... Pratima use to feed her everyday... "Nandini please eat something" but Nandini did not even looked at her... she felt pity at her condition, Pratima knew Nandini will not eat anything and thought of something "do you still love Prithvi??" Pratima said


Nandini looked at her... Pratima smiled at her "ok then one day you will meet him...for that you need to survive...so please eat something"


With moist eyes she opened her mouth to eat...

Pratima felt bad for her...she thought she will convince Abhishek to let her go...Pratima thought Nandini can only survive with Prithvi...even his name makes her forget everything...she's only made for Prithvi.


Nandini was eating while Pratima looked at her and smiled softly... "i will try to convince Abhishek...don't worry...i know you have seen very bad time... and you are still in a bad condition..."


Nandini looked at her but didn't say anything...


______*****************



"Is this the kind of work I expect from my employees" he shouted at Angel


Angel tried to explain Prithvi "sir I am sorry...i will make the report again"

Prithvi asked her to leave...

Esha came to visit him and saw him shouting madly at his personal assistant. She knocked at the door... Prithvi turned his chair "hi Esha"

Esha "hi Prithvi...is everything alright?"

Prithvi "yes"

Esha "it doesn't seem to me atleast...why do you lie Prithvi?"

Prithvi "will you stop it now...don't start with your questions again...i hate when anyone asks me"

Esha "Prithvi listen...we all are just concerned about you?"

Prithvi "i am fine...how come you are here??"

Esha "well I have booked movie tickets and..."

Prithvi interrupted "don't ask me...you know my answer" while flicking the pages of the file in front of him...

Esha "but why??? every time I ask you and you just ignore...why Prithvi??"

Prithvi "i have a meeting now..." and went out of the room

Esha thought she needs to find out what's wrong with him...she needs to know why Prithvi is behaving so strange. She liked him and wanted Prithvi to come near her...but every time she tried...he was rude to her...


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Angad "Shopping with girls is terrible...well I would suggest you to please chase Sneha...i can't walk to every shop"

Richa "i like this color...it matches my dress"

Angad "fine you can buy this one...lets go now"

Richa "no...i have to shop a lot...you won't understand marriage shopping is not easy and not one day work..."

Angad's phone was ringing "hi Dad...yes I am with Richa...no that's ok..."

Richa "what happen??"

Angad "I have to leave 'Dad's calling, we have important meeting..."

Richa "oh...you go ahead...i will call Sneha..don't worry"

Angad "ok ...take care...but i will come to drop to the train station tomorrow" and kissed on her forehead...


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Edited by Dhanvi83 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yes sweetheart...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey, dhanvi ..
U r such a darling..
Loved the update..chalo atleast tat abhishek has some respect for her.
Poor nandini, i felt bad for her
Update soon... 😊 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey thnx for the pm
wow beautiful update😊
i guess nandini prithvi se mile n sab kuch bata de
nandini ka miscarige ho gaya😭
waiting for the next part dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part dear... Bas ab jaldi se milwa do hamare romeo aur juliet ko plz plz

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