*Mayur FF Play with Fire*Last part on pg 118 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
it is fantastic concept
i never new this kind of custom still exsits .very beautiful start
please continue it soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fabolous concept Maria...
amazingly written...beautifully portrayed the suitation
plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
mindblowing start.very beautiful and unique concept...loved to read more.plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Mari - irst time i've seen such a different concept
it seems really very promising and interesting
though i dint get the whole thing
but i hope ur update will help me to understand the whole thing
awesome start hun- loved it to the core
plz do cont. it- i really wanna read it dear..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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MARIA GR8 TOPIC..
BUT PLS I WILL LIKE U TO CLEARFY ONE THINK, ITS NOT A CUSTOM OF PAKISTAN,
PLUS IT ONLY HAPPENS IN FEW UPER SINDH ARE, NT IN WHOLE PAKISATN...
DONOT MIND , THIS I WANT U TO PLS CLEARFY AS I DONOT WANT MY CONUTRY'S WRONG IMAGE ...N I KNOW U WILL ALSO AGREE WITH THIS...
AS SUM OF PEOPLE ASKED ME TO SAYING IT OFTEN HAPPEN IN PAKISTAN...
CONGRATS ON NEW FF
N PLS DONOT MIND
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

MARIA GR8 TOPIC..

BUT PLS I WILL LIKE U TO CLEARFY ONE THINK, ITS NOT A CUSTOM OF PAKISTAN,
PLUS IT ONLY HAPPENS IN FEW UPER SINDH ARE, NT IN WHOLE PAKISATN...
DONOT MIND , THIS I WANT U TO PLS CLEARFY AS I DONOT WANT MY CONUTRY'S WRONG IMAGE ...N I KNOW U WILL ALSO AGREE WITH THIS...
AS SUM OF PEOPLE ASKED ME TO SAYING IT OFTEN HAPPEN IN PAKISTAN...
CONGRATS ON NEW FF
N PLS DONOT MIND

@Fiza
Thank u so much for liking and appreciating my effort🤗
well about ur comment yaar if u have read the first post where i gave detailed about this custom.u can read i never mentioned there its happeing in the entire Pakistan,i clearly write there about in which areas of Sindh its happening n when its started...i gave every detailed about it...😊
my aim to bring this topic is just because i wanted to raised voice against inhumanly behave with Womens not only in sindh where its happeing but in all the world where womens are treating in humanly...
i hope u ll all with me in my this small effort...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Writer Note
Thank you so much all of u for appreciating and liking the concept🤗🤗really means a lot to me i m so glad to see ur appreciation for my small effort..
Well as i earlier gave you detailed and mentioned this custom is not happening in the entire country but yeah some of Sindh Areas which i mentioned earlier because these areas are still backward and people are there not educated as there is tribe system..
My aim to start this FF to raise voice against inhuman behaviour against women not only in these areas but all the different countries and areas in Whole world
where women are treating inhumanly...i hope u ll all with me in my this effort...
Love
Maria.remember me in ur prayers..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Play With Fire

Chapter 2'.

She jumped outside the house, her body was shivering badly not due to cold weather but due to fear, fear of escaped, fear of loosing her parents, her home fear of loosing her life, she wrapped the shawl around her body to give herself some warmth with trembling hands while tears were dwelling up in her eyes, she looked around everywhere was darkness, all the shops and stalls were closed, she closed her eyes in fear as she was scared of darkness, her parents never let her go in darkness but today she had to go'she slowly took steps towards the road which was about 2 km far from her home and the way between road and her house was almost covered with thick dark trees, she looked around in fear if someone saw her but no one was around her she started running through the jungle as the darkness, silence scared her she wanted to cross the jungle as soon as possible'

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The crowd was still outside the house,they were insisting Malik zavar to bring her daughter outside the house then they will decide what they have to do with her or they will enter in his house themselves'Malik Zavar helplessly requested them to not to enter in his house, his daughter is innocent she even did not know who is Malik Ahsan' son but they did not listen him and pushed him aside they opened the knob of door and entered in house,Zareena was already standing near door ran towards kitchen while Malik Zavar too entered in house and requested them don't to bring his daughter she is innocent..one of men said to others two young men to checked the rooms carefully and brought her out,pushing the door with jerks they entered in Nupur's room but the room was empty,they checked all the rooms but Nupur was not there..

Malik Zavar looked at Zareena and she gave him signaled that Nupur is not home and Zavar closed his eyes

"Ya Allah tera shukar hai'meri beti ki hifazat kerna"he prayed to GOD in his heart and hurriedly wiped of his tears as he did not want to show him they knew about Nupur disappearance..

"Larki ghar main nahi hai"the two young men said after checking all the rooms carefully'

"kahan hai teri beti"one of man asked Zavar angrily..

"hum nahi jante kahan hai"Malik Zavar lied

"lagta hai teri biwi ne us se bhaga dia hai'koi baat nahi hum us se dhoond lain ge"

"per meri beti be qasoor(innocent) hai"Malik Zavar pleaded

"ab Bare Malik sahib hi tujh se baat karain ge"They said harshly and went out of house..

After thier disappearance Zareena hurriedly locked the house and went up to Malik Zavar..

"hamari Beti Nupur kis hal main ho gi"Malik zavar bent down on his knees and cried out his heart while Zareena too was crying to remembering her daughter but she had to take care of his husband too,both knew GOD will save their daughter,,they had believe on GOD as they submitted her in the protection of ALLAH ,they Knew ALLAH Will protect their daughter..

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Where she had to go she did not know, she was breathing heavily and her legs were paining, she sat with a tree resting her head at the back on tree, she took deep breath trying to stabled her breath it was almost 1 hour passed she was running..

"maa baba"she closed her eyes and cried to remembering her parents, first time they let her go alone,she was alone and scared, her heart was pumping so hard that it might pop at any moment due to fear. She knew she had to ran as they were surely finding her and could reached at her at any moment. She got up and started running again when her foot tripped with a heavy stone and she fell on ground, her whole body was already shivering, she had no courage to dragged her leg and checked where was wound, she slowly got up and moved towards light which were coming towards the factory, she looked down there was a wound in her foot which was blood coming out of that..she cleaned the blood with the leaf and pressed the placed tightly where was blood coming out so it would stop, the blood stopped but she was feeling pain in her foot, she slowly took steps towards road as she had to leave this area as soon as possible..

Malik Uday was the elder son of Malik Zavar and Zareena and elder brother of Nupur,he loved a girl name Tammana daughter of their neighbors but Tammana and Malik Ahsan's son Aslam were loved each other,Uday saw them together near the river when they were meeting each other secretly, he fumed in anger to see both of them together as he loved Tammana,he decided to kill Aslam , Aslam went back to his house after meeting with Tammana Uday took the advantage as Aslam was alone at that time and no one was around him, he shoted him and Aslam died when people heard the sound of bullet they reached at the spot where Uday told them his imaginary story that Aslam and Nupur has in relation that's why he killed him and he put all the balamed on Nupur to saved his own life and according to this custom if a girl has relation with other man they killed her as she is "Kari"..

Nupur was running fast as she had to reached at road to ,her foot was hurting as her wound was deep and bleeding..

She reached at the road she looked around but there was no sign of any bus and Riksha,she was breathing heavily..suddenly she saw a car coming towards her she waved her hand to stop they car,she did not know what would happened with her next,but she had to trust on someone who helped her..

He was driving the car, going towards his destination, his house back when his cell phone buzzed and he picked up

"Mayank when are you coming back"a voice came from the other side

"I am coming back maa,I have visited the place,I will reach in 2 hours"Mayank told her detailed and as he looked straight he saw someone waving hand for help but due to darkness he could not see the face who was there?

"maa I call you back"he said and disconnect the phone as he reached near that he opened the door of car as he thought someone needed his help as he came nearer he saw a girl was standing there, breathing heavily,her hair was messed and she was trying to covered herself with her shawl..

Nupur saw him coming towards her she did not know but her heart wanted to trust him,she was not in condition to ran more as he came nearer her, everything seemed started blurred in front of her and she closed her eyes when she felt two protected arms held her..

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here is next update...i hope u ll liked it plz do comments n press like tab if u liked it😳

Edited by Maria. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Ummm just by the way in karo kari .The karo is the girl the kari is the guy. They both get killed, even the guy. Neither is it necessary for them to be killed.They first try to get them both divorced if they don't listen they are then either sold as slaves or killed.This is not only a problem for men but also for women.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: aaaziiz

Ummm just by the way in karo kari .The karo is the girl the kari is the guy. They both get killed, even the guy. Neither is it necessary for them to be killed.They first try to get them both divorced if they don't listen they are then either sold as slaves or killed.This is not only a problem for men but also for women.

heyy*Kari*is girl..victim of this custom...
u have wrong info😆i have researched about This Custom then i start this FF
most of the time...its not necessary both love eachother,sometimes her husband,brother or father put blam on her that she has relation with other man ..but mostly they killed the girl as somehow they save the men
there are many conditions in this custom..one of them u write in ur comment n one of i m showing in my FF...
Edited by Maria. - 13 years ago

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