*Mayur FF Play with Fire*Last part on pg 118

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mark-mayur

@mark-mayur

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

nice one .

cont soon.😛

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ragini sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

nice . it is shocking how a brother do cruel behavior with her own mere sath mera bhai aisa kuch kare to main khud uske chaiy mein kuch mila dun.

but these kara kori also done in many indian places . mostly in backward
places where woman not treated as human but as a materrial .

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umaima

@cutiepie12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

zabardat update dearie...😉

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

nice... really.. these people are very cruel...

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Ally

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

OMGGG wat a concept !!

sachi mein sis U wrote it beautifully

just read pt 1

n em deeply in love with it !!
awww peepzz soo cruel!!
h8 peepz like dat !
thank god Niupz mommy made her run away !!
OMG part 2

felt so bad 4 Nupz😭

but @ end Mayu saw her in dark n got out 2 help her !
OMG omg omg wat story !!
em alreadyy dreaming to read da next part!!
plez continue abhi k abhi !!
OMG diz story em in love with😍

love ya sis🤗

-Lina

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Anila

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

i loved it lodss sis...

awesome update...

i hate dat Uday...

hw can he do dat to his own sister...

i feel disgusted on him...

poor Nupur...

thank god...Mayank a gaya

now m sure he will protect Nupur n take care of her...

loved it lodsss

waiting eagerly for d next part...

love u sis...🤗🤗🤗

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-Samina-

@-Samina-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

fabolous part

poor Nupur...loved the update

plz continue soon

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Rafia.khan

@Rafia.khan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Mindblowing update!!!!

what an update...i was so engrossed in it.its beautifully poertrayed

please continue it ASAP!!

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InkyCupid

@InkyCupid

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

you are write about the kari being the girl. However the guy does get killed in most cases. However there have been cases where the guy has been saved