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Maaneet099

@Maaneet099

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Posted: 13 years ago

#281

and that i call it a complete package my friend! subtle hints of each and every aspect of ur story be it characterization or just a simple explanation you have always managed to keep me on my edge. BRAVO to ur superb work and more for the happy ending 😆 (ya ya i know i am sucker for it. but hey happy endings dont happen in real life so why not to expect one in fiction eh? 😉)

kudos for weaving a wonderful story n if i may please request could i have a lovely family oriented epilogue all the financial stuff has really wrapped around my head that i seemed to have forgotten the main leads love for each other 😃.

i hope ur future endeavors be a success 😊

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harshithaaaaaaa

@harshithaaaaaaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#282

awesome...loved it...maan saved KC...

excellent ff with lot of twists and turns...

came to know a little bit of finance pratically...

how companies use to cook their accounts much more...

good ending dear...

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#283

Will miss this one

Awesome work, I would say. I really appreciate the research you put in, considering finance is not even your domain. I, being a finance student never looked this much stuff up.

End was good. Am glad to see that Maan is out of Khurana mess. Vikram and Mitalee can fight for the rest of their lives. And yeah, choosing Mitalee was a wise decision. Even though shes a bitch, I like her.

Seems like things are good between Maan and Geet. :D

Great ff again.

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storytellerm

@storytellerm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#284

loved it
well will write an epilogue to it
plz do write
loved it the way u ended it

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613528

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Posted: 13 years ago

#285

*Crosses arms across chest* I don't wanna comment.

*Stomps off*

*Stomps back*

Fine...I will. But I have to go read it first.

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613528

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Posted: 13 years ago

#286

I'm going to make a separate post just for the heck of it. I don't know.

I'm definitely going to miss this FF, it was one my favourites- well all your pieces are!

I honestly have learnt so much on finance that I haven't in my whole life. Kudos to you for researching all this, I was pretty surprised when I found out finance and business is not your forte.

This story had everything, from nerd talk to subtle romance between the famous duo and the complicated relationship between the 3 and a half siblings.

You characterizations were absolutely brilliant, and so in-depth and slightly preachy 😆You rarely see such detailed writing, I'm truly impressed.

Like ivre said, it was a smart decision to make Mitalee the heir. I wasn't expecting it to be Maan anyways. Like Maan said, she's been in the field a long time, she has the contacts and as bitchy as she may be- it would be so totally unfair on her if she didn't get it. Not that it's fair towards Maan, oh not all. He's worked his bloody ass off to save the company.

As much as I say I don't have a heart (which I'm sure I don't) the ending just made me go 'aww', I'm glad MG have gotten their happy ending. Unless they're just wearing matching rings for the heck of it. I mean why not? Why can't two people wear the same rings on their wedding finger just for fun? Okay, I'm rambling nonsense now.

Well, I guess this is it. We'll never meet again. I'll miss you. Nah, you can't get rid me that fast Sookie, don't get your hopes up Dude.

Edited by Boogleton.Schiz - 13 years ago

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-Saibo-

@-Saibo-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#287

Omfggg I'm squealing like a Chinese lady! They're married!!! I'll miss this so much!!!!

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Maaneet099

@Maaneet099

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Posted: 13 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: Boogleton.Schiz

As much as I say I don't have a heart (which I'm sure I don't) the ending just made me go 'aww', I'm glad MG have gotten their happy ending. Unless they're just wearing matching rings for the heck of it. I mean why not? Why can't two people wear the same rings on their wedding finger just for fun? Okay, I'm rambling nonsense now.

🤣 these lines literally had me rolling on floor... jeez girl already that girl sookie is mostly meant on giving fairly non-maaneet endings and here she has subtly given one... i am here pleading, begging, crying, threatening and what not to get to give a family oriented epilogue with maaneet for in the midst of all khurana capital n heavy transport i never got to become gooey eyeing maan n geet and here u are saying they are wearing matching rings!! i think i shall leave the smiley to speak the words for itself...